6/5/2012 c1 Fufu
The end paragraph was a bit confusing
The end paragraph was a bit confusing
6/3/2012 c1 Shockedfan
You should add more to this.
You should add more to this.
6/2/2012 c1 Shocked fan
Very good fic.
Very good fic.
6/1/2012 c1 Yvonne
She shouldn't have to go crawling back to yamcha even if it is a one night stand.
She shouldn't have to go crawling back to yamcha even if it is a one night stand.
5/23/2012 c1 awesome4444
you need to sort your spelling out.
you need to sort your spelling out.