for Dreams from the Deep2/20/2014 c1 Taylor
Spaz. I love this. Great word choices and portrayal of the characters (sounds cheesy but it's true)
Keep writing #VictoriousLivesOn
Did you watch #TheKillerTunaJump?
Spaz. I love this. Great word choices and portrayal of the characters (sounds cheesy but it's true)
Keep writing #VictoriousLivesOn
Did you watch #TheKillerTunaJump?
4/15/2012 c1 
33Cassandra's Destiny
Very nice work. I know a lot of people would say that their favorite line would have to be something Beck or Jade said in the latter part, but personally, this is my favorite: "His head dropped back onto the pillow, the amount of effort to keep it up proving too much, and pulled the covers up higher."
It kept the suspense, the humor, and it made the whole middle of the night thing click in the readers' heads.
"But I had too" is supposed to be "But I had to". This is very minor, but I thought you'd like to know.
33Cassandra's DestinyVery nice work. I know a lot of people would say that their favorite line would have to be something Beck or Jade said in the latter part, but personally, this is my favorite: "His head dropped back onto the pillow, the amount of effort to keep it up proving too much, and pulled the covers up higher."
It kept the suspense, the humor, and it made the whole middle of the night thing click in the readers' heads.
"But I had too" is supposed to be "But I had to". This is very minor, but I thought you'd like to know.
4/4/2012 c1 22sshaw101
I really liked your use of the prompt and Hade's fear of the ocean and dolphins!
22sshaw101I really liked your use of the prompt and Hade's fear of the ocean and dolphins!