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8/4/2015 c1 9blackcoffeeforme
I really love this!
2/20/2014 c1 Taylor
Spaz. I love this. Great word choices and portrayal of the characters (sounds cheesy but it's true)
Keep writing #VictoriousLivesOn
Did you watch #TheKillerTunaJump?
1/21/2014 c1 Tiva Bay Cavanaugh
This was so sweet. I like the vulnerability of it all.
4/15/2012 c1 33Cassandra's Destiny
Very nice work. I know a lot of people would say that their favorite line would have to be something Beck or Jade said in the latter part, but personally, this is my favorite: "His head dropped back onto the pillow, the amount of effort to keep it up proving too much, and pulled the covers up higher."

It kept the suspense, the humor, and it made the whole middle of the night thing click in the readers' heads.

"But I had too" is supposed to be "But I had to". This is very minor, but I thought you'd like to know.
4/4/2012 c1 22sshaw101
I really liked your use of the prompt and Hade's fear of the ocean and dolphins!
4/3/2012 c1 23OhSnapItzLara
good story (:
4/1/2012 c1 31Bade87
This is sooooo cute!:) i like it!
3/30/2012 c1 iamreallyreallybored
Asdkahdljas . My Bade heart adores this story! 3
3/29/2012 c1 21dreamfightdo
This is too cute! I knew it was going to be great! just- awwwwww :)
3/29/2012 c1 35cwgirlup
I love the fact that Jade went to check on him because she had a nightmare. Very cute :)
3/29/2012 c1 14AvidReaderAshley
AWWWWW
3/28/2012 c1 3twenty four7bade
That was cool. Aww she misses him so much! I want bade back!
3/28/2012 c1 15Remus'Girl-Jaggie-Bade
Love that! So cute
3/28/2012 c1 36superstar1030
Awwwww that was so cute!

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