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9/2/2013 c1 CafeMocha
I got really caught up in the intro, even though it's really short.
I can't wait til you update it w

Mark x Shea is so cute. xD
4/4/2012 c1 81Kuruk
It may be short, but I think the total immersion you evoke for the reader totally makes up for it. I'm intrigued and can't wait for the next installment!
3/31/2012 c1 8The Rune Reverend
Aaaand it's over almost as soon as it started. Seriously, though, there's not much to get attatched to. I would reccomend constructing a whole chapter first.

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