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11/3/2013 c1 29Edhla
This is really nicely written, from the perspective of a character I think is often overlooked when people study Antigone or Oedipus Rex. The third paragraph is a little melodramatic and one sentence doesn't make sense ("though I am the last..." the "though" seems to contradict the content) and some of the character-naming seemed a little unnecessary. But the ending particular is vivid and powerful. Well done x

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