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6/3/2012 c1 pablo
pretty damn sad but at least so far you've killed both in the end ... for some reason that seems better that the other option. i like it but, it wasn't as sad as it's counter part one second too late (i think i got that right). very sad to reiterate but we were expecting that.

honestly it was a nice change compared to ALL the lovey dovey romace ones out there. thank you _
3/30/2012 c1 2Bogren
Not bad. Depressing as all hell, but not bad. The only advice I could give is to read this over once or twice before posting it. Some of the sentences were worded really funny and some of the speech didn't sound natural. Otherwise a good fic, keep it up.

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