
4/3/2012 c1
7Seppen13
Oh I loved it, the laugh was well worth the wait! Remy and Pryo must have been battered with corn stalks when they went through the cornfield, that'll teach them. Them playing dead at a toll booth, that's a something I would like to see. Tsk tsk Mr. rookie officer, should've known better, though I'm sure he was better off not getting involved. As far as everyone is concerned... nothing happened XD.

Oh I loved it, the laugh was well worth the wait! Remy and Pryo must have been battered with corn stalks when they went through the cornfield, that'll teach them. Them playing dead at a toll booth, that's a something I would like to see. Tsk tsk Mr. rookie officer, should've known better, though I'm sure he was better off not getting involved. As far as everyone is concerned... nothing happened XD.
4/1/2012 c1
20Wolf skater
Lol nice. If you ever wanna know how to write a whole crack fic though just PM me

Lol nice. If you ever wanna know how to write a whole crack fic though just PM me
3/31/2012 c1
236LadyAlambiel
Lol! This was perfect! I still say those dingbats deserved potholes, but hey you used the tarp! Twice! Lol, and the Maryland (Mare-uh-lund ;) ) version of the doughnut shop was awesome! Lol, they was playing dead while going through the toll booth, those poor tool booth people...not. Lol, there's lots of corn fields in Texas, lucky for the girls. Fleeing the border patrol was great. Lol, Logan can use a laptop...I always thought of him having a more Gibbs relationship with any machine that doesn't try to blow up or otherwise mutilate the Xmen trainees. Lol, wanted by the border patrol until Isi fixes it.
This was hilarious! I think you hit everything but the potholes! Bravo!
Keep writing!

Lol! This was perfect! I still say those dingbats deserved potholes, but hey you used the tarp! Twice! Lol, and the Maryland (Mare-uh-lund ;) ) version of the doughnut shop was awesome! Lol, they was playing dead while going through the toll booth, those poor tool booth people...not. Lol, there's lots of corn fields in Texas, lucky for the girls. Fleeing the border patrol was great. Lol, Logan can use a laptop...I always thought of him having a more Gibbs relationship with any machine that doesn't try to blow up or otherwise mutilate the Xmen trainees. Lol, wanted by the border patrol until Isi fixes it.
This was hilarious! I think you hit everything but the potholes! Bravo!
Keep writing!