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3/11/2015 c1 Blessin30417360
Yea i dd lik de prnk any wy jst fnsh all ur fanfic ok.
Sorry dear i love writing broken English even in my former school they know it. Just keep up de good work.
Yea i dd lik de prnk any wy jst fnsh all ur fanfic ok.
Sorry dear i love writing broken English even in my former school they know it. Just keep up de good work.
7/24/2014 c1 inactive126790
I can not remember where you were mentioned, but I decided to check out a story of yours.
I should've checked when this was published as well. I was lead on too easily with your words. Damn. Well, off to the other story! Good one.
I can not remember where you were mentioned, but I decided to check out a story of yours.
I should've checked when this was published as well. I was lead on too easily with your words. Damn. Well, off to the other story! Good one.
10/27/2013 c1 Yolo
Man... Just started reading and thought I would check the later chapters to see if you fixed your grammar a bit but what do I find?
Man... Just started reading and thought I would check the later chapters to see if you fixed your grammar a bit but what do I find?
10/7/2013 c1 DarkPirateKing69
how cute.. i'm shocked that lots of people actually took this seriously..
how cute.. i'm shocked that lots of people actually took this seriously..
12/1/2012 c1 Guest
i knew it was fake (totally ...not)
i knew it was fake (totally ...not)
9/14/2012 c1 
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I wonder how many people fell for that one? Pretty obvious when your word count doesn't even hit 500 XP
9UraharaisgodI wonder how many people fell for that one? Pretty obvious when your word count doesn't even hit 500 XP
8/6/2012 c1 4twilightromance4ever
(Sarcastic) Cute...But on the good note that means you are continuing the first one :)
4twilightromance4ever(Sarcastic) Cute...But on the good note that means you are continuing the first one :)
8/4/2012 c1 Guest
i HATE you how could you do this to me
i HATE you how could you do this to me
7/13/2012 c1 1Nerian
XD I was slightly worried when I saw this. Brilliant. ROFL. Can't wait for the next update, I've finished catching up and I must say that the emotion you put into your chapters is amazing, it really pulls all the right strings, I feel like I'm in the scene, you have great detail, and your writing has improved greatly. Only one other story that I have read out of hundreds surpasses yours in my honest opinion. The cliffhangers you pull are unbearable X_X and of course... I get caught up in the worst one. lol, I suppose it could have been worse by you not showing hinata's answer. The whole tailed-beast-dream thing was pretty amusing. Also, making Jiraiya the hokage... very interesting... You keep the reader interested in your story with the cliffys and such, I'd like to see maybe a lemon or two, but it's not really needed. Overall this is a brilliant story, and I can't wait for you to tell us the rest of this tale. Keep it up!
1NerianXD I was slightly worried when I saw this. Brilliant. ROFL. Can't wait for the next update, I've finished catching up and I must say that the emotion you put into your chapters is amazing, it really pulls all the right strings, I feel like I'm in the scene, you have great detail, and your writing has improved greatly. Only one other story that I have read out of hundreds surpasses yours in my honest opinion. The cliffhangers you pull are unbearable X_X and of course... I get caught up in the worst one. lol, I suppose it could have been worse by you not showing hinata's answer. The whole tailed-beast-dream thing was pretty amusing. Also, making Jiraiya the hokage... very interesting... You keep the reader interested in your story with the cliffys and such, I'd like to see maybe a lemon or two, but it's not really needed. Overall this is a brilliant story, and I can't wait for you to tell us the rest of this tale. Keep it up!
6/8/2012 c1 55iamgoku
lol but really this scared the crap out of me
starting again O_O NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
55iamgokulol but really this scared the crap out of me
starting again O_O NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
4/22/2012 c1 shaded night
Let it be known that you are EPIC!
Let it be known that you are EPIC!