for Life in Konoha's ANBU2h c18 MatteusN
Compared to the rest, this arc was pretty mid. I'll admit I can't see you doing something better than the sky nin arc, that was pure cinema
Compared to the rest, this arc was pretty mid. I'll admit I can't see you doing something better than the sky nin arc, that was pure cinema
9/30 c9 KinglyWisdom
This fic took a very unique and interesting turn with the sky village. But seeing the powerscaling getting thrown out the window is disappointing.
The 2 major critiques are:
8 gate of death should have one punched every Anbu (Naruto included) in that room. Gai dad was a Genin and he butchered the seven swordsmen of the mist. Even if Shinno was a chunin level he should have made quick work out of everyone.
He's a Uzumaki. A Uzumaki that said fuck off to Enma by breaking his contract seal and sending him off to his jungle. But when the Kyuubi started getting feisty he doesn't bother to give Naruto the good old stomach tickle? It's just unbelievable that a guy who knows Mito and can seal the 0 tails ain't just tightening up the seal.
This fic took a very unique and interesting turn with the sky village. But seeing the powerscaling getting thrown out the window is disappointing.
The 2 major critiques are:
8 gate of death should have one punched every Anbu (Naruto included) in that room. Gai dad was a Genin and he butchered the seven swordsmen of the mist. Even if Shinno was a chunin level he should have made quick work out of everyone.
He's a Uzumaki. A Uzumaki that said fuck off to Enma by breaking his contract seal and sending him off to his jungle. But when the Kyuubi started getting feisty he doesn't bother to give Naruto the good old stomach tickle? It's just unbelievable that a guy who knows Mito and can seal the 0 tails ain't just tightening up the seal.
9/10 c2 
1pnoah5381
This is not what I expected and I do not like it I thought oh Naruto joining on you wouldn’t be abused and he would actually be respected but no it’s horrible
1pnoah5381This is not what I expected and I do not like it I thought oh Naruto joining on you wouldn’t be abused and he would actually be respected but no it’s horrible
9/3 c53 Guest
This has got to be the sing best Naruto fic on the platform. I go back to read it time and time again. Thank you so much for this wonderful story. I'm glad it ended on a upbeat note, it would have been a real shame if you'd left it on a cliffhanger or something like that. While I am sad that we'll never get to see the rest of the story I still can't thank you enough for the bits that we have.
This has got to be the sing best Naruto fic on the platform. I go back to read it time and time again. Thank you so much for this wonderful story. I'm glad it ended on a upbeat note, it would have been a real shame if you'd left it on a cliffhanger or something like that. While I am sad that we'll never get to see the rest of the story I still can't thank you enough for the bits that we have.
8/26 c53 ThreeKerr
damn, didnt know this hasnt been updated in 8 years. still a good story. it reminds me of OG naruto.
damn, didnt know this hasnt been updated in 8 years. still a good story. it reminds me of OG naruto.
8/22 c1 Guest
What garbage is this? This is like a shitty m night shalaman movie.
What garbage is this? This is like a shitty m night shalaman movie.
7/17 c53 PsychoStorys
so I'm guessing even though this stor y says it's ongoing, it's probably dead. too bad too. great story
so I'm guessing even though this stor y says it's ongoing, it's probably dead. too bad too. great story
3/10 c53 NarutoKazahama06
Damn, I want a fanfic where it's from another perspective. A time-traveling Naruto is Kitsune.
Damn, I want a fanfic where it's from another perspective. A time-traveling Naruto is Kitsune.
2/16 c53 ll Lucian ll
Hey author, did my semi annual re-read of the story. Its old enough now to be a classic.
Hopeful that you may continue this series, especially interested in mei and tsunade character depictions, although tsunade's character here is quite bittersweet to read but certainly refreshing because this approach to her character writing is certainly not followed quite as often as goody-two-shoes-psuedomama-tsunade.
Hey author, did my semi annual re-read of the story. Its old enough now to be a classic.
Hopeful that you may continue this series, especially interested in mei and tsunade character depictions, although tsunade's character here is quite bittersweet to read but certainly refreshing because this approach to her character writing is certainly not followed quite as often as goody-two-shoes-psuedomama-tsunade.
1/14 c53 Guest
For a not dead story, it looks suspiciously like a corpse. That aside, amazing story, top tier.
For a not dead story, it looks suspiciously like a corpse. That aside, amazing story, top tier.
12/31/2023 c1 Master777vip0000
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12/24/2023 c1 GloGang214
are you from the uk author? its kinda wierd for me to read arsehole, instead of asshole
are you from the uk author? its kinda wierd for me to read arsehole, instead of asshole