
11/26/2024 c53 InvcShadow suxx
stop wasting your time teaching dumbass kids who only care about what your pronouns are and update this very good story instead
stop wasting your time teaching dumbass kids who only care about what your pronouns are and update this very good story instead
10/6/2024 c1 Master77vip0000
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Hello, fellow pedos. I’m Gina Gail Barron-Goodman. I’m 61 years old and I live at 126 Ambrosia Lane, Heath, Texas 75032. I sell child pornography, ten videos for one dollar. Method of payment is via PAYPAL. You can choose any video you want in the catalog that will be provided to you. I have pedomom, rape, anal, oral, etc. And if you enter my Telegram account saying that you come from fanfiction, I will give away pedophile photos of little kids naked and having sex for free.
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10/3/2024 c18 MatteusN
Compared to the rest, this arc was pretty mid. I'll admit I can't see you doing something better than the sky nin arc, that was pure cinema
Compared to the rest, this arc was pretty mid. I'll admit I can't see you doing something better than the sky nin arc, that was pure cinema
9/30/2024 c9 KinglyWisdom
This fic took a very unique and interesting turn with the sky village. But seeing the powerscaling getting thrown out the window is disappointing.
The 2 major critiques are:
8 gate of death should have one punched every Anbu (Naruto included) in that room. Gai dad was a Genin and he butchered the seven swordsmen of the mist. Even if Shinno was a chunin level he should have made quick work out of everyone.
He's a Uzumaki. A Uzumaki that said fuck off to Enma by breaking his contract seal and sending him off to his jungle. But when the Kyuubi started getting feisty he doesn't bother to give Naruto the good old stomach tickle? It's just unbelievable that a guy who knows Mito and can seal the 0 tails ain't just tightening up the seal.
This fic took a very unique and interesting turn with the sky village. But seeing the powerscaling getting thrown out the window is disappointing.
The 2 major critiques are:
8 gate of death should have one punched every Anbu (Naruto included) in that room. Gai dad was a Genin and he butchered the seven swordsmen of the mist. Even if Shinno was a chunin level he should have made quick work out of everyone.
He's a Uzumaki. A Uzumaki that said fuck off to Enma by breaking his contract seal and sending him off to his jungle. But when the Kyuubi started getting feisty he doesn't bother to give Naruto the good old stomach tickle? It's just unbelievable that a guy who knows Mito and can seal the 0 tails ain't just tightening up the seal.
9/10/2024 c2
1pnoah5381
This is not what I expected and I do not like it I thought oh Naruto joining on you wouldn’t be abused and he would actually be respected but no it’s horrible

This is not what I expected and I do not like it I thought oh Naruto joining on you wouldn’t be abused and he would actually be respected but no it’s horrible
9/3/2024 c53 Guest
This has got to be the sing best Naruto fic on the platform. I go back to read it time and time again. Thank you so much for this wonderful story. I'm glad it ended on a upbeat note, it would have been a real shame if you'd left it on a cliffhanger or something like that. While I am sad that we'll never get to see the rest of the story I still can't thank you enough for the bits that we have.
This has got to be the sing best Naruto fic on the platform. I go back to read it time and time again. Thank you so much for this wonderful story. I'm glad it ended on a upbeat note, it would have been a real shame if you'd left it on a cliffhanger or something like that. While I am sad that we'll never get to see the rest of the story I still can't thank you enough for the bits that we have.
8/26/2024 c53 ThreeKerr
damn, didnt know this hasnt been updated in 8 years. still a good story. it reminds me of OG naruto.
damn, didnt know this hasnt been updated in 8 years. still a good story. it reminds me of OG naruto.