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10/26/2013 c1 Uzumaki Karuki
Keren *.*
Hmm author nya masih ol gk yah?
6/26/2012 c1 Kiriyuu Natsume
numpang review yaach :DD

apa perasaan q aja ya, kok awal ceritanya (pas ginga, masamune, king, adu cepat) itu mirip sama scene di fic 'Baka Hollidays'nya IllushaCerbeast? O _ O

Hmmm, tanda baca masih kurang nih ,bnyak belajar lagi oke :DD

Terus kurangin autho note yg diselip2 ditengah cerita ya, soalnya ntu ganggu banget _-"

Tapi keseluruhan dah lumayan kuq, keep writing yah :D
4/2/2012 c1 rezha056
wkwkwkwkwkw gurunya gokil!

ketawa guling" jadinya

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