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4/8/2012 c1 eurellro
I agree with Jeanka, totally confused.
4/4/2012 c1 21Jeanka
i'm confused about what's going on. I wish this chapter was longer or broken up better. I like the writing, but the story is confusing. Seems like you're jumping for scene to scene without any transition. And the ending was really rushed. And what position is she that the whole command staffs knows her so well? How is she so close to Daniel? Why did they wait for her?

It's good writing. Just not clear.
4/2/2012 c1 2lizabeth39
Keep them coming love to see where you take this. Oh and I'm a Sparky shipper to so anything that contains Elizabeth and John is a bonus.
4/2/2012 c1 Mari
Great start! I am really looking forward to reading more!

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