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8/7/2014 c13 Alex
Not gunna lie i had a boner the whole time reading that if only my girl friend would let me do that to her
8/3/2014 c8 kentucky
i had to read this over 2 times because it was so awesome
8/2/2014 c5 kentucky
i love the person who writes this.
8/2/2014 c3 kentucky
this chapter is fantastic i wish the person who writes this never stopes writing
7/24/2014 c1 Isaiah0131
I really like the story but it doesn't seem you are coming back for it but if still look that the review for new comments please tell us if your done with fan fiction or you have a new account
7/13/2014 c1 Guest
Man even hinata hates sakura
7/4/2014 c14 rc48177
I like it 3. Keep it up
7/2/2014 c14 Guest
when next chapter
6/28/2014 c14 1willowskeith
Good story so far
6/16/2014 c14 Alfonse08
It really is too bad you seem to have abandoned this story, it wasn't that bad all things considered, I've certainly seen my fair share of worse fictions.
6/10/2014 c10 bramastra
Most of your explanations are bull
6/10/2014 c9 bramastra
This should be a yaoi story as sasuke was also born in this time, and wouldn't the kyubis chakra attack him more since he has the sharingan and it's chakra has it's own consciousness which is actually stupid on kishimotos part , also there are a lot more babies in konoha's at this time, I don't ship narusasu but I still don't like how you pretty much made an explanation, and didn't think much about it good story but the premise sucks you have great talent and should work on it.
6/10/2014 c14 kikking
Do you know when the next chapter will be out?
5/19/2014 c11 guest
I really like the story line and the word that was use. Are u going to update other chapter? If use please do it right because i can't wait to see what happen next.
5/4/2014 c14 inquisitive guy
Are you ever gonna finish this?
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