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13Illuminating Rainbow LightThis story is against the FFN rules on many accounts.
1. This story is an SYOC, and therefore interactive.
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3. This story contains no story content.
Please remove it off of the site or take it to a forum. Otherwise, I will have to report you. If you have any questions, feel free to contact me.
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4/5/2012 c1 xoj
Name: Eternal Flame
Nickname: All her friends just call her Flame
Age: 14
Personality: Has a sharp tongue, but is very loyal to her friends and family. She has a history of randomly flying off at night but she always comes back. She has anger management issues. She is a strong fighter, but usually gets injured in battle. IS VERY TALKATIVE!
Bio: She grew up with her family as a normal kid, but on her 13th birthday, her parents were killed in a car accident where the vehicle was thrown off a cliff. She escaped as the car was plummeting to its doom, discovering that she had wings. She has been on the run since.
Appearance: Flame has cat-like purple eyes and pale skin. Her hair is a dirty blond with one purple and one red streak in it. She is a little short for her age.
Clothing: Her usual out fit consists on boot-cut jeans and a purple T-shirt. She has black runners with purple wings sketched across the sides.
Mutations: She has red wings with black feathers strewn about them. She is part cat; so she has cat like eyes, can see in the dark, and sneak up on almost everybody. She can control fire.
Position in flock: Right hand (or should I say wing?) or just member.
Likes (Favorites): Colour: Purple
Time of Day: Night
Wild Animal: Falcon
Dislikes: Colour: Pink
Time of Day: Morning
Strength: She is really smart, and is a good fighter.
Weakness: She isn't very strong.
Love Interest: Strong, light brown of dirty blond hair, mutant with wings.
Powers: Can run very fast, is able to see in the dark, and she is very sneaky.
Opinion of OC's: 7
Name: Eternal Flame
Nickname: All her friends just call her Flame
Age: 14
Personality: Has a sharp tongue, but is very loyal to her friends and family. She has a history of randomly flying off at night but she always comes back. She has anger management issues. She is a strong fighter, but usually gets injured in battle. IS VERY TALKATIVE!
Bio: She grew up with her family as a normal kid, but on her 13th birthday, her parents were killed in a car accident where the vehicle was thrown off a cliff. She escaped as the car was plummeting to its doom, discovering that she had wings. She has been on the run since.
Appearance: Flame has cat-like purple eyes and pale skin. Her hair is a dirty blond with one purple and one red streak in it. She is a little short for her age.
Clothing: Her usual out fit consists on boot-cut jeans and a purple T-shirt. She has black runners with purple wings sketched across the sides.
Mutations: She has red wings with black feathers strewn about them. She is part cat; so she has cat like eyes, can see in the dark, and sneak up on almost everybody. She can control fire.
Position in flock: Right hand (or should I say wing?) or just member.
Likes (Favorites): Colour: Purple
Time of Day: Night
Wild Animal: Falcon
Dislikes: Colour: Pink
Time of Day: Morning
Strength: She is really smart, and is a good fighter.
Weakness: She isn't very strong.
Love Interest: Strong, light brown of dirty blond hair, mutant with wings.
Powers: Can run very fast, is able to see in the dark, and she is very sneaky.
Opinion of OC's: 7
4/4/2012 c1 1Discombobulator0329
I'm so sorry! I accidentally hit the submit button when I wasn't finished with my character! Could you please delete my other review?
Name: Ellie
Nickname:none
Age: 13
Personality: Because of her hummingbird mutations, Ellie is fast-paced person who hates when people go slow. She is very talkative like Nudge, but when she goes on a rant it's about more important things.
Bio: Ellie was born a test-tube baby. While she was in the school, she was often tested in her speed. The school wanted to know if infusing a human with Hummingbird DNA would make you faster. Ellie never showed the school her super speed in fear that they might experiment on others with hummingbird DNA. She was located in The Institute when she finally escaped. It was the flock who freed her an several other mutants. The others in her flock didn't show Max's flock their wings because they didn't trust them. Ever since Ellie has been living with her flock rarely having attacks from Erasers.
Appearance: Dark brown hair that is wavy and reaches just past her shoulders. There are some lighter brown streaks in it too. Her eyes, near the pupils, are a deep violet that lightens slightly as you get to the outside of her eyes.
Clothing: white tank top with a short-sleeves lavender half-top over it. Dark blue jeans and and lavender converse.
Mutations: she is 3% Hummingbird. Her wings, similar to her eyes, are a deep violet with scattered lighter purple feathers.
Position in flock: She's kind of like the Iggy of the flock except she's not blind. She's the right hand man of the right hand man.
Like: Coffee(not decaf...), purple, and flying.
Dislike: Know-it-alls, the school, and famous people. (famous people because Ellie thinks they never have to worry about anything.)
Strength: Strong and fast when fighting. She thinks quickly and can make split-second decisions.
Weakness: sort of close minded. She'll sometimes jump to conclusions when making her quick decisions and can get herself in trouble.
Love interest: someone that is somewhat fast paced. A guy who can keep up with her but still be able to slow her down sometimes.
Powers: She can 'teleport' short distances, several city blocks at most. Her teleporting is actually her moving at extremely fast speeds. However, it takes a lot of energy out of her.
Other: none
Opinion on my OC's: I'd give them both a 9 to a 9 and a half.
1Discombobulator0329I'm so sorry! I accidentally hit the submit button when I wasn't finished with my character! Could you please delete my other review?
Name: Ellie
Nickname:none
Age: 13
Personality: Because of her hummingbird mutations, Ellie is fast-paced person who hates when people go slow. She is very talkative like Nudge, but when she goes on a rant it's about more important things.
Bio: Ellie was born a test-tube baby. While she was in the school, she was often tested in her speed. The school wanted to know if infusing a human with Hummingbird DNA would make you faster. Ellie never showed the school her super speed in fear that they might experiment on others with hummingbird DNA. She was located in The Institute when she finally escaped. It was the flock who freed her an several other mutants. The others in her flock didn't show Max's flock their wings because they didn't trust them. Ever since Ellie has been living with her flock rarely having attacks from Erasers.
Appearance: Dark brown hair that is wavy and reaches just past her shoulders. There are some lighter brown streaks in it too. Her eyes, near the pupils, are a deep violet that lightens slightly as you get to the outside of her eyes.
Clothing: white tank top with a short-sleeves lavender half-top over it. Dark blue jeans and and lavender converse.
Mutations: she is 3% Hummingbird. Her wings, similar to her eyes, are a deep violet with scattered lighter purple feathers.
Position in flock: She's kind of like the Iggy of the flock except she's not blind. She's the right hand man of the right hand man.
Like: Coffee(not decaf...), purple, and flying.
Dislike: Know-it-alls, the school, and famous people. (famous people because Ellie thinks they never have to worry about anything.)
Strength: Strong and fast when fighting. She thinks quickly and can make split-second decisions.
Weakness: sort of close minded. She'll sometimes jump to conclusions when making her quick decisions and can get herself in trouble.
Love interest: someone that is somewhat fast paced. A guy who can keep up with her but still be able to slow her down sometimes.
Powers: She can 'teleport' short distances, several city blocks at most. Her teleporting is actually her moving at extremely fast speeds. However, it takes a lot of energy out of her.
Other: none
Opinion on my OC's: I'd give them both a 9 to a 9 and a half.
4/4/2012 c3 Discombobulator0329
Name:
Nickname:
Age: 13
Personality: Because of her hummingbird mutations, is fast-paced person who hates when people go slow. She can sometimes be impatient.
Bio: (history of your person. Not long and tedious, but enough detail to satisfy me.)
Appearance: Dark brown hair that is wavy and reaches just past her shoulders. There are some lighter brown streaks in it too. Her eyes, near the pupils, are a deep violet that lightens slightly as you get to the outside of her eyes.
Clothing: white tank top with a short-sleeves lavender half-top over it. Dark blue jeans and and violet converse.
Mutations: she is 3% Hummingbird
Position in flock: She's kin
Like:
Dislike:
Strength:
Weakness:
Love interest: (don't give me a person, give me the type of person they'd go for. Happy? Depressing?)
Powers: (up to 3; no more than that.)
Other: (anything I forgot)
Opinion on my OC's: (on a scale of 1-10)
Name:
Nickname:
Age: 13
Personality: Because of her hummingbird mutations, is fast-paced person who hates when people go slow. She can sometimes be impatient.
Bio: (history of your person. Not long and tedious, but enough detail to satisfy me.)
Appearance: Dark brown hair that is wavy and reaches just past her shoulders. There are some lighter brown streaks in it too. Her eyes, near the pupils, are a deep violet that lightens slightly as you get to the outside of her eyes.
Clothing: white tank top with a short-sleeves lavender half-top over it. Dark blue jeans and and violet converse.
Mutations: she is 3% Hummingbird
Position in flock: She's kin
Like:
Dislike:
Strength:
Weakness:
Love interest: (don't give me a person, give me the type of person they'd go for. Happy? Depressing?)
Powers: (up to 3; no more than that.)
Other: (anything I forgot)
Opinion on my OC's: (on a scale of 1-10)
4/4/2012 c2 Metal Flowers
Yeah it's me again. What's this story about?
Yeah it's me again. What's this story about?
4/4/2012 c3 Metal Flowers
Can you PWETTY PWEASE put my character in?
Name: flayaria
Appearance: black hair that she put a red steak in. A nose piercing and ear piercing. Really Pale skin and smoldering red eyes.
Age: 15
Personality: she's really hot headed and kind of bi polar. One day, she'll be all nice and want to save the humans and junk as the next day, she'll be angry at the humans for messing t up in the first place.
Bio: she grew up in a small cage in Germany. When Max brought it down, she was able to escape. She's been wandering ever since.
If its too late to be in the original flock, could they meet up later? I saw that you added chapters, but they won't load yet on my phone.
Can you PWETTY PWEASE put my character in?
Name: flayaria
Appearance: black hair that she put a red steak in. A nose piercing and ear piercing. Really Pale skin and smoldering red eyes.
Age: 15
Personality: she's really hot headed and kind of bi polar. One day, she'll be all nice and want to save the humans and junk as the next day, she'll be angry at the humans for messing t up in the first place.
Bio: she grew up in a small cage in Germany. When Max brought it down, she was able to escape. She's been wandering ever since.
If its too late to be in the original flock, could they meet up later? I saw that you added chapters, but they won't load yet on my phone.
4/4/2012 c3 1Velevet Night
If you're still taking any (:
Name: Emma Montavella
Nicknames- Em, most commonly, but is sometimes called Emmers (to her great dismay and dislike)
Age: 16
Personality: One word that comes to mind is 'blunt'. She has no filter, and if she has an opinion about something she's going to say it straight out. She'll answer almost anything you ask of her, and she's very easygoing. A stubborn thing at times, when it comes to things she's resolved on, and is loyal to a fault- almost has an animalistic motherness over those she comes to care for, which is few. As a general rule, when she feels threatened or upset, she's snarky. It's her default defense mechanism. However, she's also the Person who walks around telling people to talk to her anytime if need be, even if it's three AM.
Bio: Was born with wings on her back, and although her parents claim it was just a phenomenon, she doesn't accept that answer. Her mother, a kind but meek woman, died from cancer. Her father, a man who verbally abused, was put into jail for scarring abuse and, you guessed it, scientific experiments. He made her hate herself and her appearance. She ran away when they were going to put her into foster care, and has been on the lamb since. (age 15).
Appearance: About 5'7 short hair and a petite face. Lots of freckles, big pink lips, and a small nose. Large blue eyes with long lashes. Full of muscle; boxing was her passion, and she was good at it. Bellybutton piercing as well as a small silver nose piercing. Tan skin, very fit and very attractive; one of those people who just /is/.
Clothing: Midriff bearing shirt (showing off piercing) that's black, with a V, and accents her quite sizable boobs. (hey, it needs to be mentioned somewhere.) Low riding black leather pants. If need be, she has a grey sweater. Her feet usually have simple converse on them.
Wings: 17 feet total, and shade from white at the tips down to black at the bases.
Mutations: 2% avian, 3% electric eel (no eel shows in appearance).
Powers: Shocks people (up to the strength of lightning). Can also create huge storms. Can breathe underwater, and swim extremely well. Also extremely flexible.
Position in Flock: Leader or right hand. She's a natural leader, good at giving orders, but also good at following them if need be (though not ones she dislikes).
Likes: everything and anything mint. Also enjoys swimming (when she can) and loves to sing and listen to music. Her favorite pastime is drawing; she's also a boxer, and very passionate about this.
Dislikes: Liars, cheaters, and adults who look down on children.
Strengths: Talking to others, singing, drawing, leading, boxing/street fighting.
Weaknesses: stubborn, hates self, speaks her mind and generally is in trouble a lot. Will do anything for those she cares for.
Love Intrest: First she has to trust them, but after that it's pretty easy to get her to say yes to you. Love takes a while for her, but when it happens she's committed. Especially attracted to tall men with lip piercings, though she's not very picky about looks. Likes people who don't beat around the bush, and those who are loyal.
Other-
Birthday: April 24
-a great cook, should be noted
Opinion on your OC's
- 8.4. like them!
1Velevet NightIf you're still taking any (:
Name: Emma Montavella
Nicknames- Em, most commonly, but is sometimes called Emmers (to her great dismay and dislike)
Age: 16
Personality: One word that comes to mind is 'blunt'. She has no filter, and if she has an opinion about something she's going to say it straight out. She'll answer almost anything you ask of her, and she's very easygoing. A stubborn thing at times, when it comes to things she's resolved on, and is loyal to a fault- almost has an animalistic motherness over those she comes to care for, which is few. As a general rule, when she feels threatened or upset, she's snarky. It's her default defense mechanism. However, she's also the Person who walks around telling people to talk to her anytime if need be, even if it's three AM.
Bio: Was born with wings on her back, and although her parents claim it was just a phenomenon, she doesn't accept that answer. Her mother, a kind but meek woman, died from cancer. Her father, a man who verbally abused, was put into jail for scarring abuse and, you guessed it, scientific experiments. He made her hate herself and her appearance. She ran away when they were going to put her into foster care, and has been on the lamb since. (age 15).
Appearance: About 5'7 short hair and a petite face. Lots of freckles, big pink lips, and a small nose. Large blue eyes with long lashes. Full of muscle; boxing was her passion, and she was good at it. Bellybutton piercing as well as a small silver nose piercing. Tan skin, very fit and very attractive; one of those people who just /is/.
Clothing: Midriff bearing shirt (showing off piercing) that's black, with a V, and accents her quite sizable boobs. (hey, it needs to be mentioned somewhere.) Low riding black leather pants. If need be, she has a grey sweater. Her feet usually have simple converse on them.
Wings: 17 feet total, and shade from white at the tips down to black at the bases.
Mutations: 2% avian, 3% electric eel (no eel shows in appearance).
Powers: Shocks people (up to the strength of lightning). Can also create huge storms. Can breathe underwater, and swim extremely well. Also extremely flexible.
Position in Flock: Leader or right hand. She's a natural leader, good at giving orders, but also good at following them if need be (though not ones she dislikes).
Likes: everything and anything mint. Also enjoys swimming (when she can) and loves to sing and listen to music. Her favorite pastime is drawing; she's also a boxer, and very passionate about this.
Dislikes: Liars, cheaters, and adults who look down on children.
Strengths: Talking to others, singing, drawing, leading, boxing/street fighting.
Weaknesses: stubborn, hates self, speaks her mind and generally is in trouble a lot. Will do anything for those she cares for.
Love Intrest: First she has to trust them, but after that it's pretty easy to get her to say yes to you. Love takes a while for her, but when it happens she's committed. Especially attracted to tall men with lip piercings, though she's not very picky about looks. Likes people who don't beat around the bush, and those who are loyal.
Other-
Birthday: April 24
-a great cook, should be noted
Opinion on your OC's
- 8.4. like them!
4/3/2012 c1 Stargazer
Name:CAT Project: ATLAS
Nickname:Atlas
Age: 14
Personality: He's very distrustful of adults, and people he doesn't know, and people that might be a threat, and people that go near his friends. Pretty much everyone really. People are forced to earn his trust and friendship, which doesn't come easily, he's naturally very suspicious of everything. Those he does grow to trust he's stubbornly loyal to, but should they break that trust, he never forgives. As long as they don't betray him, he's laid back around them, but he's constantly on guard whenever he goes anywhere, he's always checking for danger, making sure he knows his surroundings, looking for escape routes and objects that could be weapons.
Bio: Atlas was originally created as part of the CAT Project, which made mutants to hunt down other escaped experiments. However, one of the scientists handling him when they were going to enhance his hearing broke his right wing beyond repair, passing it off as an accident. Unable to fly, Atlas was of no use to the Project, and was withdrawn. His cage was put next to that of an older mutant, a boy named Gamma, with whom he often argues, as they are from opposing projects.
Appearance: Reddish brown hair and brown eyes, with lightly tanned skin. About 5'9. He’s thin, but he’s got hidden power. He’s got yellow and brown cat ears and a tail, as well as sharpened front teeth, retractable claws and pads on his hands and feet.
Clothing:Boots, green trousers, black t-shirt.
Mutations: 2% avian, 3% cheetah. His wings are reddish brown with a fifteen foot wingspan. His right wing hangs at an odd angle, it doesn't fold in properly, jutting out past his shoulder, and tips downwards when he has them spread out.
Position in flock: Flock member
Like: People that don’t betray him, running, climbing.
Dislike:The fact that he’ll never be able to fly, people that betray him, adults, whitecoats, erasers.
Strength: Expert at Escaping ropes/handcuffs, thief, tracker, brilliant fighter.
Weakness: Can't fly without help, can't fight in the air.
Love interest: Someone he's known for years and is absolutely certain he can trust and they trust him. Someone he knows will not care about his feelings towards Gamma. They'd have to be able to keep up with him, fairly clever, and with a neutral outlook, not overly happy, but not utterly depressed.
Powers: Increased eyesight, can run at fast speeds for up to five minutes at a time, which can be increased with training.
Other: He often argues with Gamma, but the two are best of friends. They're completely loyal to each other, closer than brothers, but not lovers.
Opinion on my OC's: Sylvia: 6
Tess: 5
Name:Project Alpha: Experiment Gamma-003
Nickname:Gamma
Age: 14
Personality:The way he acts, no one would ever know he was blind. Gamma is very bold and outgoing and he absolutely loathes people that think he’s weak. You’ll have to knock him out to get him to do something he doesn’t want to do, because he’ll fight tooth and claw, and he doesn't fight, he literally shreds his opponents. He’ll act on instinct, and if his first instinct is to punch someone and fly, then that’s what he’ll do, never mind the consequences. He’s reckless and doesn’t care what happens to anyone or anything, not even himself.
Bio: Gamma was originally part of the Alpha project, but one of the experiments went wrong, permanently blinding him when he was eight. He was removed from the project and put in with the other mutants for laboratory testing and was there for six months before Atlas was brought in, with whom he has many arguments.
Appearance: Brown hair, foggy green eyes, lightly tanned skin and about 5'8.
Clothing:Jeans, trainers, t-shirt, hoodie if it’s cold.
Mutations: 2% avian, 98% human. He has tawny brown, with a fifteen foot wingspan.
Position in flock: Flock member
Like: Destroying things, people that treat him as an equal.
Dislike: People that think he’s weak, authority figures, being made to do things he doesn’t want to, erasers, whitecoats, the Alpha project.
Strength: Picks locks, doesn’t appear to be blind as he can “see” through his ability to feel vibration in the ground.
Weakness: Reckless, doesn't care about consequences.
Love interest: He'd need someone he could trust, didn't care that he's blind and will never be able to see them and most importantly, are capable of keeping up with him and his thought proceses, for which it would probably help if they were a daredevil like him.
Powers: Accelerated healing rate, increased hearing and sense of smell. Can feel vibrations in the ground.
Other: He often argues withAtlas, but the two are best of friends. They're completely loyal to each other, closer than brothers, but not lovers.
Opinion on my OC's: Sylvia: 7
Tess: 6
Name:CAT Project: ATLAS
Nickname:Atlas
Age: 14
Personality: He's very distrustful of adults, and people he doesn't know, and people that might be a threat, and people that go near his friends. Pretty much everyone really. People are forced to earn his trust and friendship, which doesn't come easily, he's naturally very suspicious of everything. Those he does grow to trust he's stubbornly loyal to, but should they break that trust, he never forgives. As long as they don't betray him, he's laid back around them, but he's constantly on guard whenever he goes anywhere, he's always checking for danger, making sure he knows his surroundings, looking for escape routes and objects that could be weapons.
Bio: Atlas was originally created as part of the CAT Project, which made mutants to hunt down other escaped experiments. However, one of the scientists handling him when they were going to enhance his hearing broke his right wing beyond repair, passing it off as an accident. Unable to fly, Atlas was of no use to the Project, and was withdrawn. His cage was put next to that of an older mutant, a boy named Gamma, with whom he often argues, as they are from opposing projects.
Appearance: Reddish brown hair and brown eyes, with lightly tanned skin. About 5'9. He’s thin, but he’s got hidden power. He’s got yellow and brown cat ears and a tail, as well as sharpened front teeth, retractable claws and pads on his hands and feet.
Clothing:Boots, green trousers, black t-shirt.
Mutations: 2% avian, 3% cheetah. His wings are reddish brown with a fifteen foot wingspan. His right wing hangs at an odd angle, it doesn't fold in properly, jutting out past his shoulder, and tips downwards when he has them spread out.
Position in flock: Flock member
Like: People that don’t betray him, running, climbing.
Dislike:The fact that he’ll never be able to fly, people that betray him, adults, whitecoats, erasers.
Strength: Expert at Escaping ropes/handcuffs, thief, tracker, brilliant fighter.
Weakness: Can't fly without help, can't fight in the air.
Love interest: Someone he's known for years and is absolutely certain he can trust and they trust him. Someone he knows will not care about his feelings towards Gamma. They'd have to be able to keep up with him, fairly clever, and with a neutral outlook, not overly happy, but not utterly depressed.
Powers: Increased eyesight, can run at fast speeds for up to five minutes at a time, which can be increased with training.
Other: He often argues with Gamma, but the two are best of friends. They're completely loyal to each other, closer than brothers, but not lovers.
Opinion on my OC's: Sylvia: 6
Tess: 5
Name:Project Alpha: Experiment Gamma-003
Nickname:Gamma
Age: 14
Personality:The way he acts, no one would ever know he was blind. Gamma is very bold and outgoing and he absolutely loathes people that think he’s weak. You’ll have to knock him out to get him to do something he doesn’t want to do, because he’ll fight tooth and claw, and he doesn't fight, he literally shreds his opponents. He’ll act on instinct, and if his first instinct is to punch someone and fly, then that’s what he’ll do, never mind the consequences. He’s reckless and doesn’t care what happens to anyone or anything, not even himself.
Bio: Gamma was originally part of the Alpha project, but one of the experiments went wrong, permanently blinding him when he was eight. He was removed from the project and put in with the other mutants for laboratory testing and was there for six months before Atlas was brought in, with whom he has many arguments.
Appearance: Brown hair, foggy green eyes, lightly tanned skin and about 5'8.
Clothing:Jeans, trainers, t-shirt, hoodie if it’s cold.
Mutations: 2% avian, 98% human. He has tawny brown, with a fifteen foot wingspan.
Position in flock: Flock member
Like: Destroying things, people that treat him as an equal.
Dislike: People that think he’s weak, authority figures, being made to do things he doesn’t want to, erasers, whitecoats, the Alpha project.
Strength: Picks locks, doesn’t appear to be blind as he can “see” through his ability to feel vibration in the ground.
Weakness: Reckless, doesn't care about consequences.
Love interest: He'd need someone he could trust, didn't care that he's blind and will never be able to see them and most importantly, are capable of keeping up with him and his thought proceses, for which it would probably help if they were a daredevil like him.
Powers: Accelerated healing rate, increased hearing and sense of smell. Can feel vibrations in the ground.
Other: He often argues withAtlas, but the two are best of friends. They're completely loyal to each other, closer than brothers, but not lovers.
Opinion on my OC's: Sylvia: 7
Tess: 6
4/3/2012 c1 8BrakImienia
Name: John
Nickname: Johnny
Age:14 changing 15
Personality: He is an emotionless brickwall, always hides his emotions behind sarcasm, which he uses very often.Might seem to have cold attitude. He always says the truth and he always says exactly what's on his mind. He is always blunt. On the other hand he is trust worthy, faithful to his friends, would never let anyone to hurt them. It's not easy to befriedn him, but once he accepts you, he will be your friend till the end. He would die for his friends and family. He hates artificial people. Thought all of this, he always thinks positive and is an optimist.
Bio: His mother died right afer his birth. His fater blamed him, for her death and abused him. When Johnny was fgive, he selled him to the school. There he made friends and with them escaped it.
Appearance: He has dark chocolate, messy hair, with bangs that fall right above his right eye. He has piercing, limon green eyes, with long dark eyelashes. He has fair skin, whick contrast with his dark hair. He is 6,2 tall and has nice athletic body. He is thin and muscled.
Clothing: He usually wears white, checkered shirt and leather jacket. To it dark, or black jeans with glans, martens, snickers, or vans.
Mutations: he is 2% black panther and 2% eagle.(He has black wings, with gold freckles)
Position in flock: right hand
Like: Food, rocka and metal music, football, martial arts, to sleep, extremal sports, lazing, reading books
Dislike: high-pitched voices, annoying people, bad music, school
strength: he always thinks positive
Weakness: food. He would do anything for it( except betraying his friends or something really serious. Nut he would dance macarena in a hawaian dress to eat free pizza :)
Love interest: He isn't a kind of person to flirt around, but once he falls in love, he'll love till death. He would fall for a girl that would understand him, a girl he could talk about anything, a girl that will accept his straight forwardness, in one word his best friend
Powers: he is super fast, thanks to his mutations and has very good sight. He can see at night and very small things or distant places
Other: Nope :D Hope you like my character C:
Opinion on my OC's:
I really like the first one: 10
The second one is just sooo cute:) Love her :9 (because too much prinesses :) Joking :10
8BrakImieniaName: John
Nickname: Johnny
Age:14 changing 15
Personality: He is an emotionless brickwall, always hides his emotions behind sarcasm, which he uses very often.Might seem to have cold attitude. He always says the truth and he always says exactly what's on his mind. He is always blunt. On the other hand he is trust worthy, faithful to his friends, would never let anyone to hurt them. It's not easy to befriedn him, but once he accepts you, he will be your friend till the end. He would die for his friends and family. He hates artificial people. Thought all of this, he always thinks positive and is an optimist.
Bio: His mother died right afer his birth. His fater blamed him, for her death and abused him. When Johnny was fgive, he selled him to the school. There he made friends and with them escaped it.
Appearance: He has dark chocolate, messy hair, with bangs that fall right above his right eye. He has piercing, limon green eyes, with long dark eyelashes. He has fair skin, whick contrast with his dark hair. He is 6,2 tall and has nice athletic body. He is thin and muscled.
Clothing: He usually wears white, checkered shirt and leather jacket. To it dark, or black jeans with glans, martens, snickers, or vans.
Mutations: he is 2% black panther and 2% eagle.(He has black wings, with gold freckles)
Position in flock: right hand
Like: Food, rocka and metal music, football, martial arts, to sleep, extremal sports, lazing, reading books
Dislike: high-pitched voices, annoying people, bad music, school
strength: he always thinks positive
Weakness: food. He would do anything for it( except betraying his friends or something really serious. Nut he would dance macarena in a hawaian dress to eat free pizza :)
Love interest: He isn't a kind of person to flirt around, but once he falls in love, he'll love till death. He would fall for a girl that would understand him, a girl he could talk about anything, a girl that will accept his straight forwardness, in one word his best friend
Powers: he is super fast, thanks to his mutations and has very good sight. He can see at night and very small things or distant places
Other: Nope :D Hope you like my character C:
Opinion on my OC's:
I really like the first one: 10
The second one is just sooo cute:) Love her :9 (because too much prinesses :) Joking :10
4/2/2012 c1 1RockSolid
Name: Tasi Merkava
Nickname: Taz
Age: 16
Personality: Taz puts out a tough persona but is very much a gentle giant. Limits his violence as much as possible. But can use brute force to get himself out of any situation. Wishes he could be smarter but is only average intelligence. Very quiet around strangers but to his best friends and love interest he is really sarcastic and joking. He desperately wants to be accepted by people. Even though he is mature for the most part, his sympathy knows no limit. He gets close to tears watching ASPCA commercials or the movie Titanic. Taz despises pain. Although he hides it well he hates it and will do almost anything to stop it or avoid it. Taz is also a strong believer in God. He started believing after he spent the night in a church and woke up to the pastor praying over him.
Bio: Born in southern California to an immigrant worker family. He was sold to the school so that his parents could support his younger siblings and has had a deep hatred for his parents ever since. After 6 years in the school, he was able to break out of his cage and escape through a window. But in the process got shot through the left knee and still walks with a slight limp since it never had a chance to heal properly.
Appearance: Taz is 6'5 220 pounds of pure muscle. He has dark brown eyes with bits of extremely dark green. He has very long brown, curly hair that he keeps in a ponytail. (it looks like Troy Polamalu's hair except shorter.) Has a tattoo of a bull's head and horns on his left arm.
Clothing: To Taz, nothing beats his old Skillet T-shirt and a pair of jeans and normally doesn't differ much from that.
Wings: Black and red wings that are 20 feet tip to tip
Position in Flock: preferably right hand man but anything is fine.
Likes: Food, music (especially skillet), reading, flying, and playing with animals
Dislikes: Pain, fighting, his parents.
Strengths: Pure strength, his work ethic is incredible, his relentlessness
Weaknesses: his hatred of pain, his limp and pain in his knee, his lack of extra intelligence
Powers: Extreme strength and the ability to enhance or hinder the senses of anyone he wants.
Fatal Flaws: Because of his knee he is particularly slower than everyone else on foot, his dislike of fighting and his sympathy.
Love Interest: An outgoing cheerful girl would be good for him. Someone opposite him
Mutation: Taz is 97% human 2% condor and 1% bull (which is where his size and strength come from)
Reaction: Sylvia: 8
Tess: 7
1RockSolidName: Tasi Merkava
Nickname: Taz
Age: 16
Personality: Taz puts out a tough persona but is very much a gentle giant. Limits his violence as much as possible. But can use brute force to get himself out of any situation. Wishes he could be smarter but is only average intelligence. Very quiet around strangers but to his best friends and love interest he is really sarcastic and joking. He desperately wants to be accepted by people. Even though he is mature for the most part, his sympathy knows no limit. He gets close to tears watching ASPCA commercials or the movie Titanic. Taz despises pain. Although he hides it well he hates it and will do almost anything to stop it or avoid it. Taz is also a strong believer in God. He started believing after he spent the night in a church and woke up to the pastor praying over him.
Bio: Born in southern California to an immigrant worker family. He was sold to the school so that his parents could support his younger siblings and has had a deep hatred for his parents ever since. After 6 years in the school, he was able to break out of his cage and escape through a window. But in the process got shot through the left knee and still walks with a slight limp since it never had a chance to heal properly.
Appearance: Taz is 6'5 220 pounds of pure muscle. He has dark brown eyes with bits of extremely dark green. He has very long brown, curly hair that he keeps in a ponytail. (it looks like Troy Polamalu's hair except shorter.) Has a tattoo of a bull's head and horns on his left arm.
Clothing: To Taz, nothing beats his old Skillet T-shirt and a pair of jeans and normally doesn't differ much from that.
Wings: Black and red wings that are 20 feet tip to tip
Position in Flock: preferably right hand man but anything is fine.
Likes: Food, music (especially skillet), reading, flying, and playing with animals
Dislikes: Pain, fighting, his parents.
Strengths: Pure strength, his work ethic is incredible, his relentlessness
Weaknesses: his hatred of pain, his limp and pain in his knee, his lack of extra intelligence
Powers: Extreme strength and the ability to enhance or hinder the senses of anyone he wants.
Fatal Flaws: Because of his knee he is particularly slower than everyone else on foot, his dislike of fighting and his sympathy.
Love Interest: An outgoing cheerful girl would be good for him. Someone opposite him
Mutation: Taz is 97% human 2% condor and 1% bull (which is where his size and strength come from)
Reaction: Sylvia: 8
Tess: 7
4/2/2012 c1 2SniperInTheHouse
Name: Raiden
Nickname: Rai
Age: (No older than 18, no younger than 5)
17
Personality:
He hates talking giving him a very deep raspy almost voice and he doesn't laugh at all nothing amuses him he's a nonsense type of guy often annoyed by less serious companions he's antisocial and hates meaningless conversations he's depressed but through training depression doesn't slow him down he is very logical his life is based on logic for instance kill the leader then the minions or heart then jugular he is also merciless in fights often going over board and having a special execution for a downed opponent his mind works to focus on war in half a second he's found over 100 ways to neutralize you in a second he found the perfect way to kill you without a noise in 5 seconds your most likely heavily wounded Raiden is literally the perfect tool for war he can lead people easily and convince people to join his cause his fighting style is like fighting a bolt of lightning the speed of his style plus the pack it punches without any mutant power ups is what allows him to kill multiple people in just 2 seconds and one movement
Bio:
Rai is son to a very strong influential Yakuza mob boss that is world wide through direct or indirect contact his father wanted to have the perfect assassin son and sent him to the school as soon as he was born
Rai was trained brutally to insure the perfect human hybrid specimen a back up plan if there was ever a need for one for instance a group of mutants escaping while other mutants are thrown into surgeries 24/7 he is trained instead and given the surgeries that have been improved upon at 8 he started to assassinate political opposition for clients to help fund the school at 15 he escaped by destroying the miniature school he lived in killing with it 25 erasers 3 fly boys 61 scientists and 6 innocent civilians all killed by hand
For two years he's been killing off anything after him including policemen who happen to be too near his turf
Appearance:
He has messy black spiky hair (think of FF13 Noctis hair) crimson red eyes from blood vessels popping during a surgery and a height of 6'4 he is of the Japanese ethic has a tattoo of a dragon on his right collar bone
Clothing:
Rai wears what works he often takes a military persona wearing military black digital camo BDU pants and a Black American eagle shirt he also wears a pair of dog tags and a black fingerless gloves and a mask around his nose down to prevent dust into his breathing room
Mutations: 1% Eagle 1% Timber Wolf 1% Snake
Position in flock: (Leader, right hand, member)
Right hand or just a member
Like:
Hides all likes the only thing he does show he likes is fighting and dark colors
Dislike:
anything involving the school, happy stuff like jokes, people who think they know the world when they don't
Strength:
His fighting style is able to kill someone in one movement
His flying skills allow him to go faster then almost all other mutants
He understands the meaning of the bigger picture
No mental trauma can harm him and his head is always cool never disarrayed like other people or mutants
Weakness:
His ethics are questionable as in he will kill your grandma to get information
Has a habit of smoking
Has a habit of cutting himself and make weird designs on his body
Love interest: Rai cannot be with a happy go lucky person someone who has a cool head and can understand him
Powers: he can put venom in his bites, has a sixth sense to find danger, he controls lightning to a extent
Other: (anything I forgot)
Wings: Midnight black and Eagle based but the wings are blended like a shadow or illusion and almost mythical
He also has a twin brother who was also made for war and peace the twin is weaker then Rai and also tries to hunt Rai down and kill him under orders of the school but neither one is strong enough to completely wipe the other one out of existence
Opinion on my OC's: (on a scale of 1-10)
8
I wouldn't mind co writing but Im unreliable with PMs and I'd probably be useful only for suggestions
2SniperInTheHouseName: Raiden
Nickname: Rai
Age: (No older than 18, no younger than 5)
17
Personality:
He hates talking giving him a very deep raspy almost voice and he doesn't laugh at all nothing amuses him he's a nonsense type of guy often annoyed by less serious companions he's antisocial and hates meaningless conversations he's depressed but through training depression doesn't slow him down he is very logical his life is based on logic for instance kill the leader then the minions or heart then jugular he is also merciless in fights often going over board and having a special execution for a downed opponent his mind works to focus on war in half a second he's found over 100 ways to neutralize you in a second he found the perfect way to kill you without a noise in 5 seconds your most likely heavily wounded Raiden is literally the perfect tool for war he can lead people easily and convince people to join his cause his fighting style is like fighting a bolt of lightning the speed of his style plus the pack it punches without any mutant power ups is what allows him to kill multiple people in just 2 seconds and one movement
Bio:
Rai is son to a very strong influential Yakuza mob boss that is world wide through direct or indirect contact his father wanted to have the perfect assassin son and sent him to the school as soon as he was born
Rai was trained brutally to insure the perfect human hybrid specimen a back up plan if there was ever a need for one for instance a group of mutants escaping while other mutants are thrown into surgeries 24/7 he is trained instead and given the surgeries that have been improved upon at 8 he started to assassinate political opposition for clients to help fund the school at 15 he escaped by destroying the miniature school he lived in killing with it 25 erasers 3 fly boys 61 scientists and 6 innocent civilians all killed by hand
For two years he's been killing off anything after him including policemen who happen to be too near his turf
Appearance:
He has messy black spiky hair (think of FF13 Noctis hair) crimson red eyes from blood vessels popping during a surgery and a height of 6'4 he is of the Japanese ethic has a tattoo of a dragon on his right collar bone
Clothing:
Rai wears what works he often takes a military persona wearing military black digital camo BDU pants and a Black American eagle shirt he also wears a pair of dog tags and a black fingerless gloves and a mask around his nose down to prevent dust into his breathing room
Mutations: 1% Eagle 1% Timber Wolf 1% Snake
Position in flock: (Leader, right hand, member)
Right hand or just a member
Like:
Hides all likes the only thing he does show he likes is fighting and dark colors
Dislike:
anything involving the school, happy stuff like jokes, people who think they know the world when they don't
Strength:
His fighting style is able to kill someone in one movement
His flying skills allow him to go faster then almost all other mutants
He understands the meaning of the bigger picture
No mental trauma can harm him and his head is always cool never disarrayed like other people or mutants
Weakness:
His ethics are questionable as in he will kill your grandma to get information
Has a habit of smoking
Has a habit of cutting himself and make weird designs on his body
Love interest: Rai cannot be with a happy go lucky person someone who has a cool head and can understand him
Powers: he can put venom in his bites, has a sixth sense to find danger, he controls lightning to a extent
Other: (anything I forgot)
Wings: Midnight black and Eagle based but the wings are blended like a shadow or illusion and almost mythical
He also has a twin brother who was also made for war and peace the twin is weaker then Rai and also tries to hunt Rai down and kill him under orders of the school but neither one is strong enough to completely wipe the other one out of existence
Opinion on my OC's: (on a scale of 1-10)
8
I wouldn't mind co writing but Im unreliable with PMs and I'd probably be useful only for suggestions
4/2/2012 c1 9BookWorm0001
I apologize for length, but these are my original characters from a fanfiction I'm writing(on paper) and they are my rightful property. All 98% human, 2% avian (raptor DNA) It's a single Flock - they go together. Weather they like it or not. All bios in first person.
Name: Hannah
Nickname: none
Age: 13
Personality: Where to start... ah okay. Introvert. I like my books and music and you die if you try to take them away. Ask My Flock, they know. Introverted though i am, I take dominance over my Flock. I have a hard emotional wall that only my Flock has the power to get through. I am a bit of a secret romantic. I love to read about love and all that jazz, but I don't want all the 'knight in shining armour' crap. I save myself thank you very much. I'm sarcrastic and rude 98.91% of the time if i don't know you or you annoy me. Which is most likely everyone i happen to meet. I'm a person with too many sides for myself to figure it out - let's hope we never do.
Bio: Made by ITEX and some female whitecoats took pity on me, Razor, and Allie. Been on the run ever since our home in the Texan Mountains got busted by Erasers. Too many places to count - we picked up Luke in Hawaii. Fun until I recieved a Flyboy claw to the side. Rushed to the hospital - not fun. Uhm, got kiddnapped in Australia by human-lion hybrids, shipped to Asia and found out Luke is my 'perfect other half' while Razor(my Best Friend, BoyFriend, Soul Mate, wing man, etc.) was in the room as was Allie. Joy. Got away, yada yada, we're safe for now.
Appearance: Dirty Blonde hair(the color, not from our lack of hygenie), sea blue eyes, 5'6", skinny, wings that have several shades of brown with black feathers everyonce in a while, fair skin that's tan
Clothing: Jeans, Tennis Shoes, Blue and/or Black top. Heavy Coat
Mutations: wings
Position in flock: Leader
Likes: Razor, Allie, Luke, cookies, books, music, writing, singing
Dislikes: Luke, ITEX, Erasers, Were-Cats(see Human-Lion hybrid), evil scientists, ignorance, needles, etc.
Strengths: Hacking, Singing, flying, family
Weakness: Luke, family, ignoring injury to myself, stubborn
Love interest: Uh, alive I guess. And my age. I kinda already have a relationship going though - though I have a slight kink I need to fix. *coughLukecough* Oh - not Luke
Powers: breath/talk underwater, telepapathic communtication with Razor, infared vision
Other: I have boy problems
Opinion on my OC's: 5 - I don't care.
Name: Razor
Nickname: none
Age: 13
Personality: Introvert. I'm not normally chatty and really only talk to Hannah. I'd do anything for the people I care about. I'm a good listener and I'll try to be social once in a blue moon.
Bio: Cage next to Hannah at ITEX - after she was 'born' a month later and got moved from her original place. Got saved, years pass, Erasers hit. We're on the run, still are. Stuff happens, we meet him and I end up giving a blood transfusion to a delusional Hannah. She thought she had a scratch - the idiot. We end up in Austraila, I don't want to talk about what happened next.
Appearance: Dark Brown/Black eyes, Black hair, tanned skin, 6'3", skinny, black wings
Clothing: black - just black. Tennis Shoes, jeans, T-Shirt
Mutations: Wings
Position in flock: right hand/wing man
Likes: Hannah, Allie, food, Hannah
Dislike: Luke, evil scientists, ITEX, needles, etc.
Strengths: Silence, flight
Weaknesses: Hannah, Luke, Allie, stubborn
Love interest: I can't fill this out - No one could match up to Hannah.
Powers: invisability, telepathic communtication with Hannah, talk/breathe underwater
Other: Did I mention I hate Luke?
Opinion on my OC's: 7 - eh
Name: Allie
Nickname: Allie-bear
Age: 6
Personality: I love practically everything. Except ITEX and other bad companies. I LOVE dolphins - I just want to hug them all! They're so fun! I love my family - even our newest addition - Luke. Don't get me mad though - it'll end badly
Bio: All I know Is that we came from a place called the School - it hurt there. Somebody saved us - she felt bad for us. Erasers came later - they wanted to hurt us bad and I was really scared. Hannah said I was really brave. We haven't had a permant home since. The only thing that happened was meeting Luke - the first domino had fell - they're still falling.
Appearance: Blonde hair, Green eyes, chocolate
brown wings, 4'3", skinny, fair skin
Clothing: Tennis Shoes, jeans, T-Shirt - prefferably pink
Mutations: wings
Position in flock: member
Likes: Hannah, Razor, Luke, food, dolphins, etc.
Dislikes: ITEX, scientists, needles, anything that has anything to do with ITEX
Strengths: Mindreading, cuteness, convincing
Weaknesses: stubborn, too nice sometimes
Love interest: happy, loves me - Hannah says I'm to young and I agree
Powers: telepathic, talk/breathe underwater,
Other:
Opinion on my OC's: 10
Name: Luke
Nickname: none - that i know of
Age: 13
Personality: I'm a generally happy, nice guy. I love Hannah and she's my exsistence. Tge only time I'm not nice is when I'm kicking Eraser butt. Or anything else trying to hurt my family. I don't waste my breath in Razor though - he's just a minor bump in the road.
Bio: I don't know the name of the company, only that I had pretty good conditions compared to some. All my life I had been told I had been made for Hannah - that I loved her. The first time I saw her picture i knew they were right. I was stuck on Hawaii, meet Hannah, and the rest is history.
Appearance: fair skin, Blonde hair, gteen eyes, 6'4", skinny, light orange/brown wings
Clothing: Tennis Shoes, jeans, T-Shirt - typically light colored
Mutations: wings
Position in flock: member (not a part in Hannah's mind)
Likes: Hannah, Allie, everything
Dislikes: Razor
Strengths: good looks, great singing voice, an entire company is trying to get him and Hannah together
Weaknesses: Hannah, Razor, lack of experience
Love interest: Hannah - only ever been. No descriptions to speak of. Complicated would be good word though
Powers: can create a wave worthy of surfing
Other: (anything I forgot)
Opinion on my OC's: 10
9BookWorm0001I apologize for length, but these are my original characters from a fanfiction I'm writing(on paper) and they are my rightful property. All 98% human, 2% avian (raptor DNA) It's a single Flock - they go together. Weather they like it or not. All bios in first person.
Name: Hannah
Nickname: none
Age: 13
Personality: Where to start... ah okay. Introvert. I like my books and music and you die if you try to take them away. Ask My Flock, they know. Introverted though i am, I take dominance over my Flock. I have a hard emotional wall that only my Flock has the power to get through. I am a bit of a secret romantic. I love to read about love and all that jazz, but I don't want all the 'knight in shining armour' crap. I save myself thank you very much. I'm sarcrastic and rude 98.91% of the time if i don't know you or you annoy me. Which is most likely everyone i happen to meet. I'm a person with too many sides for myself to figure it out - let's hope we never do.
Bio: Made by ITEX and some female whitecoats took pity on me, Razor, and Allie. Been on the run ever since our home in the Texan Mountains got busted by Erasers. Too many places to count - we picked up Luke in Hawaii. Fun until I recieved a Flyboy claw to the side. Rushed to the hospital - not fun. Uhm, got kiddnapped in Australia by human-lion hybrids, shipped to Asia and found out Luke is my 'perfect other half' while Razor(my Best Friend, BoyFriend, Soul Mate, wing man, etc.) was in the room as was Allie. Joy. Got away, yada yada, we're safe for now.
Appearance: Dirty Blonde hair(the color, not from our lack of hygenie), sea blue eyes, 5'6", skinny, wings that have several shades of brown with black feathers everyonce in a while, fair skin that's tan
Clothing: Jeans, Tennis Shoes, Blue and/or Black top. Heavy Coat
Mutations: wings
Position in flock: Leader
Likes: Razor, Allie, Luke, cookies, books, music, writing, singing
Dislikes: Luke, ITEX, Erasers, Were-Cats(see Human-Lion hybrid), evil scientists, ignorance, needles, etc.
Strengths: Hacking, Singing, flying, family
Weakness: Luke, family, ignoring injury to myself, stubborn
Love interest: Uh, alive I guess. And my age. I kinda already have a relationship going though - though I have a slight kink I need to fix. *coughLukecough* Oh - not Luke
Powers: breath/talk underwater, telepapathic communtication with Razor, infared vision
Other: I have boy problems
Opinion on my OC's: 5 - I don't care.
Name: Razor
Nickname: none
Age: 13
Personality: Introvert. I'm not normally chatty and really only talk to Hannah. I'd do anything for the people I care about. I'm a good listener and I'll try to be social once in a blue moon.
Bio: Cage next to Hannah at ITEX - after she was 'born' a month later and got moved from her original place. Got saved, years pass, Erasers hit. We're on the run, still are. Stuff happens, we meet him and I end up giving a blood transfusion to a delusional Hannah. She thought she had a scratch - the idiot. We end up in Austraila, I don't want to talk about what happened next.
Appearance: Dark Brown/Black eyes, Black hair, tanned skin, 6'3", skinny, black wings
Clothing: black - just black. Tennis Shoes, jeans, T-Shirt
Mutations: Wings
Position in flock: right hand/wing man
Likes: Hannah, Allie, food, Hannah
Dislike: Luke, evil scientists, ITEX, needles, etc.
Strengths: Silence, flight
Weaknesses: Hannah, Luke, Allie, stubborn
Love interest: I can't fill this out - No one could match up to Hannah.
Powers: invisability, telepathic communtication with Hannah, talk/breathe underwater
Other: Did I mention I hate Luke?
Opinion on my OC's: 7 - eh
Name: Allie
Nickname: Allie-bear
Age: 6
Personality: I love practically everything. Except ITEX and other bad companies. I LOVE dolphins - I just want to hug them all! They're so fun! I love my family - even our newest addition - Luke. Don't get me mad though - it'll end badly
Bio: All I know Is that we came from a place called the School - it hurt there. Somebody saved us - she felt bad for us. Erasers came later - they wanted to hurt us bad and I was really scared. Hannah said I was really brave. We haven't had a permant home since. The only thing that happened was meeting Luke - the first domino had fell - they're still falling.
Appearance: Blonde hair, Green eyes, chocolate
brown wings, 4'3", skinny, fair skin
Clothing: Tennis Shoes, jeans, T-Shirt - prefferably pink
Mutations: wings
Position in flock: member
Likes: Hannah, Razor, Luke, food, dolphins, etc.
Dislikes: ITEX, scientists, needles, anything that has anything to do with ITEX
Strengths: Mindreading, cuteness, convincing
Weaknesses: stubborn, too nice sometimes
Love interest: happy, loves me - Hannah says I'm to young and I agree
Powers: telepathic, talk/breathe underwater,
Other:
Opinion on my OC's: 10
Name: Luke
Nickname: none - that i know of
Age: 13
Personality: I'm a generally happy, nice guy. I love Hannah and she's my exsistence. Tge only time I'm not nice is when I'm kicking Eraser butt. Or anything else trying to hurt my family. I don't waste my breath in Razor though - he's just a minor bump in the road.
Bio: I don't know the name of the company, only that I had pretty good conditions compared to some. All my life I had been told I had been made for Hannah - that I loved her. The first time I saw her picture i knew they were right. I was stuck on Hawaii, meet Hannah, and the rest is history.
Appearance: fair skin, Blonde hair, gteen eyes, 6'4", skinny, light orange/brown wings
Clothing: Tennis Shoes, jeans, T-Shirt - typically light colored
Mutations: wings
Position in flock: member (not a part in Hannah's mind)
Likes: Hannah, Allie, everything
Dislikes: Razor
Strengths: good looks, great singing voice, an entire company is trying to get him and Hannah together
Weaknesses: Hannah, Razor, lack of experience
Love interest: Hannah - only ever been. No descriptions to speak of. Complicated would be good word though
Powers: can create a wave worthy of surfing
Other: (anything I forgot)
Opinion on my OC's: 10
4/2/2012 c1 N
OHAI HEY HI HEY yeah... This needs some boys. Also, I'm pretty sure that Jenna/Blaze is a troll thing, either that or shes overpowered. No offence Fang Is Awesome, but she seriously is a overpowered Mary-sue. I'll make two, a boy and a girl.
Name: Sarah
Nickname: Sleepy/Sleepyhead
Age: 16
Personality: Sarah is usually a soft, nice person with a sleepy expression on her face. When she isn't sleeping or daydreaming, she would be the most energetic person alive. Ex; Would randomly do some cartwheels, go at super flying speeds, make a super-bomb. But other than that, she would have a light personality with a small smile pressed onto her face forever. She is usually calm and laid back, but can be serious when need to.
Can be considered the "Mom" of the flock (omfg y so srs?)
Bio: Like most, she was a test-tube baby. Before she was even alive she was tested on, and rather tortured physically, they experimented mentally on her. From showing deaths of other experiments over and over, to making her see things that weren't there- driving her insane. She was pressed as a failed experiment, but a young doctor erased her memory and continued to work on her. She was at least four at the time. Three years pass and the doctor continue to experiment and torture her, giving her ability to manipulate gasses (She heat liquids into a gas or a cloud, make the air nice and thin so its hard to breathe, and her power can grow if you want in the book.) and clouds. She can walk through dreams, and dreams of the future in her dreams. If she isn't predicting the future, she can manipulate her own realm of dreams and others.
The School has found out of the scientist's secret testing, and went to assassinate him and Sarah, to fail with Sarah miraculously escaping.
Appearance: Big, light milky brown eyes (Probably the lightest ever) and caramel curls of hair with blonde tips. A small complexion, and relies more on speed and swiftness rather than strength, and a small button nose, thin lips with a sad little smile, and a small heart shaped face. Light spray of freckles under her eyes, on her shoulders, and nose but that's it.
Clothing: During her run, she has three pairs of clothes and washes them daily. Usually wears her long sleeve black tee with red sleeves that says BED HEAD pajama pants, and ripped slippers with bunnies on them. Her wings are thin and easy to hide, its just the feathers you need to worry about. Though will probably get new clothes in your story, its up to you, but she will want to hold on to them
Mutations: Part owl, she has a 12 ft wide wing span, and light brown wings that are speckled with white.
Position in flock: Member/Flock Mommy
Like: Sleeping, yummy treats, animals, and anything cute or adorable
Dislike: Waking up, missing breakfast, lunch, or dinner. Do not interrupt her when she is eating. She will pound your ass. Ex; An eraser crashes in on the flock while they're eating breakfast. Just as Sarah is to take a bite, there they are. She pounds their asses and they continue eating. Other than that, she hates it when she isn't being told something or when someone is keeping a secret from her. She feels it is her duty to protect everyone she loves and cares about, and wants to be the best for them she can be.
Strength: Fast and agile when it comes to running, stealth, and can see farther than the flock due to her owl vision. Is mostly nocturnal, so a good watch guard. Being able to manipulate clouds, she can literally float and sleep on them like a pillow. With more training in her power, she can float others on her clouds too.
Weakness: Not so much in the strength department, but can take down an average sized man like any other flock member can do.
Love interest: None unless you decide~
Powers: Cloud manipulation (Gasses, can transform a liquid into a gas/cloud etc) nocturnal vision and hearing, and sleep manipulation. Not sure if these are powers too, but she always has a way with animals and can do the creepy owl thing...turn her head 360 around...she likes to do to freak people out.
Other: Usually cooks for the flock or cleans up. Isn't a complete neat freak, but hates messiness.
Opinion on my OC's: Syl- 9/10 Mainly because I find her adapting a bit like Max (Headstrong/Stubborn, and the dont-call-her-maximum/sylvia-or-anything-other-than-that) but other than that, its fine :)
Tess- 10/10 Perfect. Sounds cute :D
NOW ONTO THE BOY
Name: Izzy
Nickname: Mr.Obvious, Cool Guy.
Age: 15
Personality: Wild, daring, complete insane-psychopath kind of guy. When he isn't planning his next prank, he's making a bomb. Either way, from morning start to sundown he's making witting comebacks and being the evil mastermind he is, giggling his way to cloud 9. If you ask him about his past, he'd sneer or snap back at you something like "What's it to you?" "Does it matter that much?" More rebellious and has more guts, but is an idiot too. Would usually call people by their full names just to annoy them, or make up nick-names for them to. Ex
Syl- Sylvia, Leatherbrat
Tess- Usually something cute, as he shows a softer side to her and one look of her eyes, he'd be at his knees, and her wish would be his command.
Sarah- Sleepy
Syd- Sydney, Lizardbreath
Etc.
Bio: Izzy was your 4 year old toddler when his dad experimented on him. His mom had left them saying she didn't want a baby, and packed her bags and went. His father left all feelings behind him and blamed everything on Izzy. He didn't know what was going on though, but just knew it was wrong. With that, his father turned into a sadistic man and worked for the School, and he ended up with gills and wings. When he was 7 he escaped by busting open a car door while they were running from the cops, and he disappeared into the forest. After that,
Appearance: Blonde hair with striking green eyes, and a surfers tan. A long scar running from his abs to his neck. Tawny brown wings and has a tall build with a abs 6'4 and has a 25 ft wing span.
Clothing: Baggy jeans and a tee, and he's ready to go.
Mutations: Shark and hawk, he has big razor sharp teeth and a fast strong flier too.
Position in flock: Leader. Though he is an arrogant idiot, he knows what to do and when to be serious. Where to go and who to do what.
Like: Guns, bombs, any kind of warcraft would make him jump in giddy. Food is good too. Food is delicious.
BLEH ,ITU I WAS MAKING THIS THEN IMPERFECTBITCH MADE HERS
HNNGNGHGHGNGNGNGHN i am so confuzzled what
you know what
i submit thats it
you can just
whatveer just
accept whatever
what
i
dont
what
nvm
kk here
Dislike: Snobs, and suck ups. Hates it when someone is hurt because of him, because then he feels all bad inside.
Strength: Is mostly the muscles of the group (Not huge, bulging biceps though...)
Weakness: No powers whatsoever, and arrogance gets up to him.
Love interest: It depends. But its mostly opposites attract for him.
Powers: None. He hates it. People mock him for it.
Other: (anything I forgot)
OHAI HEY HI HEY yeah... This needs some boys. Also, I'm pretty sure that Jenna/Blaze is a troll thing, either that or shes overpowered. No offence Fang Is Awesome, but she seriously is a overpowered Mary-sue. I'll make two, a boy and a girl.
Name: Sarah
Nickname: Sleepy/Sleepyhead
Age: 16
Personality: Sarah is usually a soft, nice person with a sleepy expression on her face. When she isn't sleeping or daydreaming, she would be the most energetic person alive. Ex; Would randomly do some cartwheels, go at super flying speeds, make a super-bomb. But other than that, she would have a light personality with a small smile pressed onto her face forever. She is usually calm and laid back, but can be serious when need to.
Can be considered the "Mom" of the flock (omfg y so srs?)
Bio: Like most, she was a test-tube baby. Before she was even alive she was tested on, and rather tortured physically, they experimented mentally on her. From showing deaths of other experiments over and over, to making her see things that weren't there- driving her insane. She was pressed as a failed experiment, but a young doctor erased her memory and continued to work on her. She was at least four at the time. Three years pass and the doctor continue to experiment and torture her, giving her ability to manipulate gasses (She heat liquids into a gas or a cloud, make the air nice and thin so its hard to breathe, and her power can grow if you want in the book.) and clouds. She can walk through dreams, and dreams of the future in her dreams. If she isn't predicting the future, she can manipulate her own realm of dreams and others.
The School has found out of the scientist's secret testing, and went to assassinate him and Sarah, to fail with Sarah miraculously escaping.
Appearance: Big, light milky brown eyes (Probably the lightest ever) and caramel curls of hair with blonde tips. A small complexion, and relies more on speed and swiftness rather than strength, and a small button nose, thin lips with a sad little smile, and a small heart shaped face. Light spray of freckles under her eyes, on her shoulders, and nose but that's it.
Clothing: During her run, she has three pairs of clothes and washes them daily. Usually wears her long sleeve black tee with red sleeves that says BED HEAD pajama pants, and ripped slippers with bunnies on them. Her wings are thin and easy to hide, its just the feathers you need to worry about. Though will probably get new clothes in your story, its up to you, but she will want to hold on to them
Mutations: Part owl, she has a 12 ft wide wing span, and light brown wings that are speckled with white.
Position in flock: Member/Flock Mommy
Like: Sleeping, yummy treats, animals, and anything cute or adorable
Dislike: Waking up, missing breakfast, lunch, or dinner. Do not interrupt her when she is eating. She will pound your ass. Ex; An eraser crashes in on the flock while they're eating breakfast. Just as Sarah is to take a bite, there they are. She pounds their asses and they continue eating. Other than that, she hates it when she isn't being told something or when someone is keeping a secret from her. She feels it is her duty to protect everyone she loves and cares about, and wants to be the best for them she can be.
Strength: Fast and agile when it comes to running, stealth, and can see farther than the flock due to her owl vision. Is mostly nocturnal, so a good watch guard. Being able to manipulate clouds, she can literally float and sleep on them like a pillow. With more training in her power, she can float others on her clouds too.
Weakness: Not so much in the strength department, but can take down an average sized man like any other flock member can do.
Love interest: None unless you decide~
Powers: Cloud manipulation (Gasses, can transform a liquid into a gas/cloud etc) nocturnal vision and hearing, and sleep manipulation. Not sure if these are powers too, but she always has a way with animals and can do the creepy owl thing...turn her head 360 around...she likes to do to freak people out.
Other: Usually cooks for the flock or cleans up. Isn't a complete neat freak, but hates messiness.
Opinion on my OC's: Syl- 9/10 Mainly because I find her adapting a bit like Max (Headstrong/Stubborn, and the dont-call-her-maximum/sylvia-or-anything-other-than-that) but other than that, its fine :)
Tess- 10/10 Perfect. Sounds cute :D
NOW ONTO THE BOY
Name: Izzy
Nickname: Mr.Obvious, Cool Guy.
Age: 15
Personality: Wild, daring, complete insane-psychopath kind of guy. When he isn't planning his next prank, he's making a bomb. Either way, from morning start to sundown he's making witting comebacks and being the evil mastermind he is, giggling his way to cloud 9. If you ask him about his past, he'd sneer or snap back at you something like "What's it to you?" "Does it matter that much?" More rebellious and has more guts, but is an idiot too. Would usually call people by their full names just to annoy them, or make up nick-names for them to. Ex
Syl- Sylvia, Leatherbrat
Tess- Usually something cute, as he shows a softer side to her and one look of her eyes, he'd be at his knees, and her wish would be his command.
Sarah- Sleepy
Syd- Sydney, Lizardbreath
Etc.
Bio: Izzy was your 4 year old toddler when his dad experimented on him. His mom had left them saying she didn't want a baby, and packed her bags and went. His father left all feelings behind him and blamed everything on Izzy. He didn't know what was going on though, but just knew it was wrong. With that, his father turned into a sadistic man and worked for the School, and he ended up with gills and wings. When he was 7 he escaped by busting open a car door while they were running from the cops, and he disappeared into the forest. After that,
Appearance: Blonde hair with striking green eyes, and a surfers tan. A long scar running from his abs to his neck. Tawny brown wings and has a tall build with a abs 6'4 and has a 25 ft wing span.
Clothing: Baggy jeans and a tee, and he's ready to go.
Mutations: Shark and hawk, he has big razor sharp teeth and a fast strong flier too.
Position in flock: Leader. Though he is an arrogant idiot, he knows what to do and when to be serious. Where to go and who to do what.
Like: Guns, bombs, any kind of warcraft would make him jump in giddy. Food is good too. Food is delicious.
BLEH ,ITU I WAS MAKING THIS THEN IMPERFECTBITCH MADE HERS
HNNGNGHGHGNGNGNGHN i am so confuzzled what
you know what
i submit thats it
you can just
whatveer just
accept whatever
what
i
dont
what
nvm
kk here
Dislike: Snobs, and suck ups. Hates it when someone is hurt because of him, because then he feels all bad inside.
Strength: Is mostly the muscles of the group (Not huge, bulging biceps though...)
Weakness: No powers whatsoever, and arrogance gets up to him.
Love interest: It depends. But its mostly opposites attract for him.
Powers: None. He hates it. People mock him for it.
Other: (anything I forgot)
4/2/2012 c1 1MaxximumRide
Name: Riley
Nickname(s): Rie; Jer calls her Riled Up to annoy her
Gender: Female
Age: 13
Mutation: 2% bird
Wings: black w/ white tips
Abilities: control of fire & create fire with bare hands
Usual Clothing:
She wears t-shirts or off-shoulder tops, usually black, red, dark blue,lime green; usually plain or have random sayings like Fuck Off or Hell Was Full So I Came Back or I Know Violence Isn't The Answer, I Got It Wrong On Purpose
Dark blue or black jeans; no designs; she doesn't care if they're ripped or not
Combat boots/black Converse
Appearance:
Waist length, silky black hair
Black eyes w/ silver & gold flecks
Pretty
Tanned
Personality:
Sarcastic
Bossy
Temperamental
Violent
Can be immature
Usually nice
Bitch to people who hurt her family
Likes: reading/kicking white coat ass/animals/boyfriend Malcolm /sarcasm is a way of life/ pranking/ bombs
Dislikes:sluts/players/sexism/bad guys/girls flirting with boyfriend /pink, sparkles, dresses, skirts , makeup, & Justin Bieber are illegal in her world
Greatest Weakness: Family; would do anything for them /temper
Rank: Leader
Other:
Fang's sister
He thinks school killed her
She thinks he left her at the school
_
Full Name (if possible):Malcolm Henderson
Nickname(s):Mal
Gender:male
Age( From 4 to 18):14
Mutation: 3% cheetah
Abilities:super speed; faster in cheetah form
Usual Clothing:jeans,button downs, sneakers
Looks: blond, grey eyes
Personality: nice/ smart
Likes: reading/drawing/gf Riley
Dislikes:white coats/boys flirting w/ Riley/ unnecessary violence
Greatest Weakness: non-violence/family die to save
Rank: planner
Other: kidnapped from middle school at 11
_
Full Name (if possible):Pride
Nickname(s):none
Gender:girl
Age( From 4 to 18):8
Mutation: lion
Abilities:flexible, strong, can extend sharp claws from hands, phasing (pass through solid objects; can be invisible during phasing is her choice)
Usual Clothing: jeans that end just above knees/ purple/blue tshirt/sneakers
Looks: long light brown hair/green eyes/ caramel colored skin
Personality: sweet
Likes:purple/blue/ dancing
Dislikes:singing
Rank: Spy
Other: test tube baby
_
Full Name (if possible): Se ( snake in Japanese)
Nickname(s): none
Gender: male
Age( From 4 to 18): 4
Mutation: snake
Wings (If any): no
Abilities: stretch 6 ft in human form & 60 stories in snake form/
create illusions (make someone blind, see a different scene
Usual Clothing: jeans T-shirt sneakers
Looks: black hair
dark brown eyes
Personality: sweet, loving
Likes:family/red
Dislikes: people who hurt family
Greatest Weakness:age
Rank: Distraction
Other:no
_
Full Name (if possible) Jonah
Nickname(s):Jo/ JoJo
Gender:female
Age: 12
Mutation:octopus
Abilities:transform into octopus/ stick to anything/squirts black goo out of hands at will
Usual Clothing:anything fashionable
Looks:brown eyes & hair
Personality: sweet/ sociable/ girly/ talkative around friends/ little shy
Likes: fashion/Justin bieber/ makeup
Dislikes: looking bad
Greatest Weakness: To fretful, not likely to go with gut feeling/ not very focused
Rank: Supplies
Other:twin brother Jeremiah
Sold to school
_
Full Name (if possible) Jeremiah
Nickname(s): Jer
Gender:male
Age( From 4 to 18):12
Mutation: given unnatural abilities
Abilities: super senses, heal (himself or others)
Usual Clothing:jeans T-shirt sneakers
Looks: Brown hair & eyes
Personality: jokester, immature
Likes: weapons, pranks
Dislikes:work
Greatest Weakness: not rational, makes bad decisions, try to win before anything else
Rank: Weapons Expert
Other:twin sis Jonah
Sold to school
1MaxximumRideName: Riley
Nickname(s): Rie; Jer calls her Riled Up to annoy her
Gender: Female
Age: 13
Mutation: 2% bird
Wings: black w/ white tips
Abilities: control of fire & create fire with bare hands
Usual Clothing:
She wears t-shirts or off-shoulder tops, usually black, red, dark blue,lime green; usually plain or have random sayings like Fuck Off or Hell Was Full So I Came Back or I Know Violence Isn't The Answer, I Got It Wrong On Purpose
Dark blue or black jeans; no designs; she doesn't care if they're ripped or not
Combat boots/black Converse
Appearance:
Waist length, silky black hair
Black eyes w/ silver & gold flecks
Pretty
Tanned
Personality:
Sarcastic
Bossy
Temperamental
Violent
Can be immature
Usually nice
Bitch to people who hurt her family
Likes: reading/kicking white coat ass/animals/boyfriend Malcolm /sarcasm is a way of life/ pranking/ bombs
Dislikes:sluts/players/sexism/bad guys/girls flirting with boyfriend /pink, sparkles, dresses, skirts , makeup, & Justin Bieber are illegal in her world
Greatest Weakness: Family; would do anything for them /temper
Rank: Leader
Other:
Fang's sister
He thinks school killed her
She thinks he left her at the school
_
Full Name (if possible):Malcolm Henderson
Nickname(s):Mal
Gender:male
Age( From 4 to 18):14
Mutation: 3% cheetah
Abilities:super speed; faster in cheetah form
Usual Clothing:jeans,button downs, sneakers
Looks: blond, grey eyes
Personality: nice/ smart
Likes: reading/drawing/gf Riley
Dislikes:white coats/boys flirting w/ Riley/ unnecessary violence
Greatest Weakness: non-violence/family die to save
Rank: planner
Other: kidnapped from middle school at 11
_
Full Name (if possible):Pride
Nickname(s):none
Gender:girl
Age( From 4 to 18):8
Mutation: lion
Abilities:flexible, strong, can extend sharp claws from hands, phasing (pass through solid objects; can be invisible during phasing is her choice)
Usual Clothing: jeans that end just above knees/ purple/blue tshirt/sneakers
Looks: long light brown hair/green eyes/ caramel colored skin
Personality: sweet
Likes:purple/blue/ dancing
Dislikes:singing
Rank: Spy
Other: test tube baby
_
Full Name (if possible): Se ( snake in Japanese)
Nickname(s): none
Gender: male
Age( From 4 to 18): 4
Mutation: snake
Wings (If any): no
Abilities: stretch 6 ft in human form & 60 stories in snake form/
create illusions (make someone blind, see a different scene
Usual Clothing: jeans T-shirt sneakers
Looks: black hair
dark brown eyes
Personality: sweet, loving
Likes:family/red
Dislikes: people who hurt family
Greatest Weakness:age
Rank: Distraction
Other:no
_
Full Name (if possible) Jonah
Nickname(s):Jo/ JoJo
Gender:female
Age: 12
Mutation:octopus
Abilities:transform into octopus/ stick to anything/squirts black goo out of hands at will
Usual Clothing:anything fashionable
Looks:brown eyes & hair
Personality: sweet/ sociable/ girly/ talkative around friends/ little shy
Likes: fashion/Justin bieber/ makeup
Dislikes: looking bad
Greatest Weakness: To fretful, not likely to go with gut feeling/ not very focused
Rank: Supplies
Other:twin brother Jeremiah
Sold to school
_
Full Name (if possible) Jeremiah
Nickname(s): Jer
Gender:male
Age( From 4 to 18):12
Mutation: given unnatural abilities
Abilities: super senses, heal (himself or others)
Usual Clothing:jeans T-shirt sneakers
Looks: Brown hair & eyes
Personality: jokester, immature
Likes: weapons, pranks
Dislikes:work
Greatest Weakness: not rational, makes bad decisions, try to win before anything else
Rank: Weapons Expert
Other:twin sis Jonah
Sold to school
4/2/2012 c1 Sydney
All right, with the 'death' of one story is the birth of another. I've been inspired by some stuff that other authors have put up, and am now opening my own SYOC. This is maximum ride, so they must have some type of wings. Bat, bird, you name it as long as it flies.
Name: Sydney Lazarte (Luh-zar-tay)
Nickname: Spooky. :) my parents always called me that cause I always sneaked up on them when I was a baby. :)
Age: I wish to be, maybe 3 or 4 months younger than the leader. :) sorry, I l was excited for a new SYOC I kindof read everything in a rush.
Personality: witty, clever, practical, kind when need be :), and funny. :)
Bio: average mid-class family, divorced parents with HORRIBLE step-parents. Abusive. Typical run-away, captured by scientists in Rhode Island.
Appearance: dark, long mid-back brown hair. Thick. Light brown eyes with orange and light green flecks. Lithe. And lean muscles. Not bulky.
Clothing: ripped low-rise flare jeans, medium-tight graphic tee and tennis shoes.
Mutations: horned owl, jaguar, (only agility, lithe, grace, and Stamina. Not spots and tail.;))
Position in flock: (I'm assuming you want your character to be leader?) so right hand. :)
Like: real, good friends. Fun people.
Dislike: bossy, over-exaggerative people.
Strength: loyalty, friendships.
Weakness: betrayal, and fakeness.
Love interest: funny, smart, determined, loyal.
Powers: flying, clearly, :), telekinetic. (moving things with my mind)
Other:
Opinion on my OC's: 7
All right, with the 'death' of one story is the birth of another. I've been inspired by some stuff that other authors have put up, and am now opening my own SYOC. This is maximum ride, so they must have some type of wings. Bat, bird, you name it as long as it flies.
Name: Sydney Lazarte (Luh-zar-tay)
Nickname: Spooky. :) my parents always called me that cause I always sneaked up on them when I was a baby. :)
Age: I wish to be, maybe 3 or 4 months younger than the leader. :) sorry, I l was excited for a new SYOC I kindof read everything in a rush.
Personality: witty, clever, practical, kind when need be :), and funny. :)
Bio: average mid-class family, divorced parents with HORRIBLE step-parents. Abusive. Typical run-away, captured by scientists in Rhode Island.
Appearance: dark, long mid-back brown hair. Thick. Light brown eyes with orange and light green flecks. Lithe. And lean muscles. Not bulky.
Clothing: ripped low-rise flare jeans, medium-tight graphic tee and tennis shoes.
Mutations: horned owl, jaguar, (only agility, lithe, grace, and Stamina. Not spots and tail.;))
Position in flock: (I'm assuming you want your character to be leader?) so right hand. :)
Like: real, good friends. Fun people.
Dislike: bossy, over-exaggerative people.
Strength: loyalty, friendships.
Weakness: betrayal, and fakeness.
Love interest: funny, smart, determined, loyal.
Powers: flying, clearly, :), telekinetic. (moving things with my mind)
Other:
Opinion on my OC's: 7