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3/9/2015 c2 Fanfictionlovergirl22
love the story so please continue
8/18/2013 c1 Guest
It's personal, not personnel...
1/24/2013 c2 3Wolflover40
I need more!
10/25/2012 c1 6II Fantasy II
this remeinds me of a song by SAVAGE GARDEN called 'i dont know you anymore'
8/25/2012 c2 Guest
Sweet update soon
8/25/2012 c1 Illusional
Firstly, please check your grammatical errors - there's a few. Full stops, commas, etc aren't just for Grammar Nazi's.

"Friend" doesn't need a capital.

"personnel" should be "personal".

"Matrass" should be "mattress".

Meanwhile is one word, not two. Same with anymore.

Basically, try getting a Beta. The concept of this sounds very interesting, but I wouldn't recommend using Original Characters. You're more than likely to create a Mary Sue, by the sounds of things. NOTHING good can come from making a Mary Sue, or Gary Stu. If you aren't aware of this, please research the term. Otherwise, good luck, and please take the constructive criticism to mind.
8/24/2012 c2 ER
Yay! Great stuff :) I wonder what Josh will do!
8/21/2012 c1 ER
Please continue this! This is exactly the way I imagined Theresa 3
4/16/2012 c1 ER
Please write this I think it sounds really good! :)
4/4/2012 c2 5LandOfTheLivingSkys
Name: Summer Jay Mills ( Likes to be called Jay- nickname is Sun-Bunny)

What they look like: Sun bunny is small, like i'll make her 4FT11, with lonnnng wavy dark brown hair, and big midnight blue doe eyes? :P and bangs that fall into her face? she has a smaller body, with normal curves? lawls

What they are or were to Theresa: Theresa's most awesome BEST friend?

Their hobbies: (making this a little bio) She is IN LOVE with dance, but she doesn't take classes, she doesn't like ballet(but she does it), but like hip-hop and tecktonik. she's on the hockey team. she is on the cheer team as a flyer. she is one of the many on the ILE(I love Earth) club-yes, i made that up a few seconds ago, shoot me- she looooves animals, she is also kinda shy, BUT REALL OUTGOING. She has a Twin that used to date Theresa,named Jack Mills. She is SOOOOO self-confident,soo even though her bestie is the most popular,she tends to get picked on? SHE NEVER CUSSES

What they like: she likes dance(any,but mostly what i said before)Music, art, greek mythology! ANNNNNND long strolls on the beach XD

What they dislike:earth haters,haters,meat(she's a vegetarian),annd horror movies.

If they are enemies why they dislike her: WHY WOULD SUN BUNNY HATE HER? THERE BESTIES


Name:Damien Jake

What they look like: he has cool green eyes, and dark brown hair. he's tall and slim. HE IS PART FRENCH, but sounds normal(BUT CAN SPEAK FRENCH!

(HE IS GAY 3 and single D: he needs someone ;D)

What they are or were to Theresa: Theresa's main guy friend!

Their hobbies:he LOVES art, and music. He plays the piano and he has a real gooood voice, so he likes to sing.

What they like: Politics, ART, drama, music class, gmy, baseball. softball.

What they dislike: haters ;D. full-of-the-self-rich-brats!

If they are enemies why they dislike her: WHAT DID I SAYĆ© HER MAAAAAAAAIN BOY, no hating here


OOOH YEAH i'm a positive reviewer! :D

did i just make to random people? JUst yes-yes i did

sorry...i had ALOT OF TIME ON MY HANDS ...

ooh,and of you need any help...i am sadly free :P

OOH OOOH, and you errr, published this twice and errm, the original 1st chapter is *POOF* gone
4/2/2012 c2 4Kiwi ingenuity
You know, you generally only have to upload ONE of each chapter, not two XD

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