for I don't know any more8/18/2013 c1 Guest
It's personal, not personnel...
It's personal, not personnel...
10/25/2012 c1 
6II Fantasy II
this remeinds me of a song by SAVAGE GARDEN called 'i dont know you anymore'
6II Fantasy IIthis remeinds me of a song by SAVAGE GARDEN called 'i dont know you anymore'
8/25/2012 c2 Guest
Sweet update soon
Sweet update soon
8/25/2012 c1 Illusional
Firstly, please check your grammatical errors - there's a few. Full stops, commas, etc aren't just for Grammar Nazi's.
"Friend" doesn't need a capital.
"personnel" should be "personal".
"Matrass" should be "mattress".
Meanwhile is one word, not two. Same with anymore.
Basically, try getting a Beta. The concept of this sounds very interesting, but I wouldn't recommend using Original Characters. You're more than likely to create a Mary Sue, by the sounds of things. NOTHING good can come from making a Mary Sue, or Gary Stu. If you aren't aware of this, please research the term. Otherwise, good luck, and please take the constructive criticism to mind.
Firstly, please check your grammatical errors - there's a few. Full stops, commas, etc aren't just for Grammar Nazi's.
"Friend" doesn't need a capital.
"personnel" should be "personal".
"Matrass" should be "mattress".
Meanwhile is one word, not two. Same with anymore.
Basically, try getting a Beta. The concept of this sounds very interesting, but I wouldn't recommend using Original Characters. You're more than likely to create a Mary Sue, by the sounds of things. NOTHING good can come from making a Mary Sue, or Gary Stu. If you aren't aware of this, please research the term. Otherwise, good luck, and please take the constructive criticism to mind.
8/24/2012 c2 ER
Yay! Great stuff :) I wonder what Josh will do!
Yay! Great stuff :) I wonder what Josh will do!
8/21/2012 c1 ER
Please continue this! This is exactly the way I imagined Theresa 3
Please continue this! This is exactly the way I imagined Theresa 3
4/16/2012 c1 ER
Please write this I think it sounds really good! :)
Please write this I think it sounds really good! :)
4/4/2012 c2 5LandOfTheLivingSkys
Name: Summer Jay Mills ( Likes to be called Jay- nickname is Sun-Bunny)
What they look like: Sun bunny is small, like i'll make her 4FT11, with lonnnng wavy dark brown hair, and big midnight blue doe eyes? :P and bangs that fall into her face? she has a smaller body, with normal curves? lawls
What they are or were to Theresa: Theresa's most awesome BEST friend?
Their hobbies: (making this a little bio) She is IN LOVE with dance, but she doesn't take classes, she doesn't like ballet(but she does it), but like hip-hop and tecktonik. she's on the hockey team. she is on the cheer team as a flyer. she is one of the many on the ILE(I love Earth) club-yes, i made that up a few seconds ago, shoot me- she looooves animals, she is also kinda shy, BUT REALL OUTGOING. She has a Twin that used to date Theresa,named Jack Mills. She is SOOOOO self-confident,soo even though her bestie is the most popular,she tends to get picked on? SHE NEVER CUSSES
What they like: she likes dance(any,but mostly what i said before)Music, art, greek mythology! ANNNNNND long strolls on the beach XD
What they dislike:earth haters,haters,meat(she's a vegetarian),annd horror movies.
If they are enemies why they dislike her: WHY WOULD SUN BUNNY HATE HER? THERE BESTIES
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Name:Damien Jake
What they look like: he has cool green eyes, and dark brown hair. he's tall and slim. HE IS PART FRENCH, but sounds normal(BUT CAN SPEAK FRENCH!
(HE IS GAY 3 and single D: he needs someone ;D)
What they are or were to Theresa: Theresa's main guy friend!
Their hobbies:he LOVES art, and music. He plays the piano and he has a real gooood voice, so he likes to sing.
What they like: Politics, ART, drama, music class, gmy, baseball. softball.
What they dislike: haters ;D. full-of-the-self-rich-brats!
If they are enemies why they dislike her: WHAT DID I SAYé HER MAAAAAAAAIN BOY, no hating here
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OOOH YEAH i'm a positive reviewer! :D
did i just make to random people? JUst yes-yes i did
sorry...i had ALOT OF TIME ON MY HANDS ...
ooh,and of you need any help...i am sadly free :P
OOH OOOH, and you errr, published this twice and errm, the original 1st chapter is *POOF* gone
5LandOfTheLivingSkysName: Summer Jay Mills ( Likes to be called Jay- nickname is Sun-Bunny)
What they look like: Sun bunny is small, like i'll make her 4FT11, with lonnnng wavy dark brown hair, and big midnight blue doe eyes? :P and bangs that fall into her face? she has a smaller body, with normal curves? lawls
What they are or were to Theresa: Theresa's most awesome BEST friend?
Their hobbies: (making this a little bio) She is IN LOVE with dance, but she doesn't take classes, she doesn't like ballet(but she does it), but like hip-hop and tecktonik. she's on the hockey team. she is on the cheer team as a flyer. she is one of the many on the ILE(I love Earth) club-yes, i made that up a few seconds ago, shoot me- she looooves animals, she is also kinda shy, BUT REALL OUTGOING. She has a Twin that used to date Theresa,named Jack Mills. She is SOOOOO self-confident,soo even though her bestie is the most popular,she tends to get picked on? SHE NEVER CUSSES
What they like: she likes dance(any,but mostly what i said before)Music, art, greek mythology! ANNNNNND long strolls on the beach XD
What they dislike:earth haters,haters,meat(she's a vegetarian),annd horror movies.
If they are enemies why they dislike her: WHY WOULD SUN BUNNY HATE HER? THERE BESTIES
_
Name:Damien Jake
What they look like: he has cool green eyes, and dark brown hair. he's tall and slim. HE IS PART FRENCH, but sounds normal(BUT CAN SPEAK FRENCH!
(HE IS GAY 3 and single D: he needs someone ;D)
What they are or were to Theresa: Theresa's main guy friend!
Their hobbies:he LOVES art, and music. He plays the piano and he has a real gooood voice, so he likes to sing.
What they like: Politics, ART, drama, music class, gmy, baseball. softball.
What they dislike: haters ;D. full-of-the-self-rich-brats!
If they are enemies why they dislike her: WHAT DID I SAYé HER MAAAAAAAAIN BOY, no hating here
_
OOOH YEAH i'm a positive reviewer! :D
did i just make to random people? JUst yes-yes i did
sorry...i had ALOT OF TIME ON MY HANDS ...
ooh,and of you need any help...i am sadly free :P
OOH OOOH, and you errr, published this twice and errm, the original 1st chapter is *POOF* gone
4/2/2012 c2 4Kiwi ingenuity
You know, you generally only have to upload ONE of each chapter, not two XD
4Kiwi ingenuityYou know, you generally only have to upload ONE of each chapter, not two XD