for Dreams1/4/2016 c1 Guest
oh wow. this was bloody amazing.
oh wow. this was bloody amazing.
5/27/2014 c1 
3Spideynova4Life
*flips table* I haven't been here for any of your old so-called "crappy" stories but this is frICKING AMAZING
i wanna read your "bad" stories because wow.
3Spideynova4Life*flips table* I haven't been here for any of your old so-called "crappy" stories but this is frICKING AMAZING
i wanna read your "bad" stories because wow.
5/12/2013 c1 Guest
Please, please, please, please, PLEASE continue this!
Please, please, please, please, PLEASE continue this!
9/4/2012 c1 8SweetShireen
This is really good. It's so emotional and the words you use really help you envision a picture in your mind.
But the Escort never says "picked," for that sounds cruel. Forced upon. Chosen, they say. "You've been chosen."
That line is awesome. Seriously.
I never read any of your other stories, but I want you to know that your writing really is great and you need to start writing again.
8SweetShireenThis is really good. It's so emotional and the words you use really help you envision a picture in your mind.
But the Escort never says "picked," for that sounds cruel. Forced upon. Chosen, they say. "You've been chosen."
That line is awesome. Seriously.
I never read any of your other stories, but I want you to know that your writing really is great and you need to start writing again.
8/19/2012 c1 Adrianne
This is amazing.
This is amazing.
4/8/2012 c1 16PLKBerry
Couple things.
1. Love this story, and an interesting idea.
2. YOU DELETED ALL YOUR STORIES?
3. Is there any particular reason they're from District 4?
4. You. Deleted. All. Your. Stories.
5. Was Petiuna really ashamed in the dream, or was she crying because Lily was chosen for the games?
6. Why on Earth would you delete all your stories?
7. I liked the ending, how after all the nightmares she doesn't dream at all.
8. I loved your other stories, I can't believe that you deleted them
9. Out of curiousity, who WAS the male tribute, if not James?
10. I wish you didn't delete your stories; I'll miss reading those.
11. Are the other characters in district 4, too? Ex. Snape, Sirius, Remus, etc.
12. I'll miss you're PJ stories, but excited for more HP ones, too!
13. I like how she gets mad at herself for being relived she and James aren't chosen.
Peace, Love, & Life
PLKBerry
16PLKBerryCouple things.
1. Love this story, and an interesting idea.
2. YOU DELETED ALL YOUR STORIES?
3. Is there any particular reason they're from District 4?
4. You. Deleted. All. Your. Stories.
5. Was Petiuna really ashamed in the dream, or was she crying because Lily was chosen for the games?
6. Why on Earth would you delete all your stories?
7. I liked the ending, how after all the nightmares she doesn't dream at all.
8. I loved your other stories, I can't believe that you deleted them
9. Out of curiousity, who WAS the male tribute, if not James?
10. I wish you didn't delete your stories; I'll miss reading those.
11. Are the other characters in district 4, too? Ex. Snape, Sirius, Remus, etc.
12. I'll miss you're PJ stories, but excited for more HP ones, too!
13. I like how she gets mad at herself for being relived she and James aren't chosen.
Peace, Love, & Life
PLKBerry
4/6/2012 c1 2swimgirl99
I'd like to say I'm mad at you for deleting all of your stories, but seeing as I'm currently deleting/editing all of mine, I guess I can't really be talking.
I liked this story a lot. I never really thought about it, but I guess that the people that weren't picked would feel almost as bad as the people that were.
The only mistake I noticed was that, near the end, it should be "such a thing as Hell," not "such a thing like Hell". And yes, I know, it's very grammar Nazi of me.
2swimgirl99I'd like to say I'm mad at you for deleting all of your stories, but seeing as I'm currently deleting/editing all of mine, I guess I can't really be talking.
I liked this story a lot. I never really thought about it, but I guess that the people that weren't picked would feel almost as bad as the people that were.
The only mistake I noticed was that, near the end, it should be "such a thing as Hell," not "such a thing like Hell". And yes, I know, it's very grammar Nazi of me.
4/6/2012 c1 926HecateA
YOU DELETED YOUR OWN STORIES? Gosh dang it, you're going to have to write me a million pieces to forgive that! Even Who am I? :O WHY?
Anyways, this was strange. I'm still trying to figure out how much I like it. First, I think you need to mark it as a Crossover, but I could be wrong. I liked the emotions you wrote, but I'm not necessarily sure why you wrote those characters with them too.
Anywho, keep writing your million pieces it'll take! :P
Love ya (in a friendly you're-nice-when-we-talk-on-the-Internet and a super good writer way),
Hec
926HecateAYOU DELETED YOUR OWN STORIES? Gosh dang it, you're going to have to write me a million pieces to forgive that! Even Who am I? :O WHY?
Anyways, this was strange. I'm still trying to figure out how much I like it. First, I think you need to mark it as a Crossover, but I could be wrong. I liked the emotions you wrote, but I'm not necessarily sure why you wrote those characters with them too.
Anywho, keep writing your million pieces it'll take! :P
Love ya (in a friendly you're-nice-when-we-talk-on-the-Internet and a super good writer way),
Hec