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5/17 c111 Sarahamanda Klaine
I like this chapter. It is a good chapter. Please update soon.
4/16 c110 Myrashae
thank you for writing such a great story. I look forward to seeing how it ends. I think the relationships between the main characters is well thought out and executed.. I also like the fact that although Dumbledore's death is a major climax in the story the aftermath is still interesting and holds my focus. all that said I do have couple of things to point out that took away for a great story. I don't know you have a beta or not but you really need one for spelling grammatical errors as was a consistency. for example Harry age has been all over the place in this chapter you have home starting Hogwarts at 13 but then a couple of sentences later you talk about second year and him being 12. sometimes you have as 16/17 but others he is 15/16. you also changed Molly's middle name half way through. I do offer my services as a beta if you are interested in go back fixing these mistakes.
looking forward to your next installment.
'razur
4/15 c110 PixiefiedMagic
Looking forward to the next update
4/15 c1 PixiefiedMagic
Please understand that this is constructive criticism, in your profile it states that you are 18 and in Uni. So if this started in 2012, you must be at least 28 now. Ok, your spelling is atrocious, it really detracts from the story and has me stopping and starting as I try to get the gist of the sentence. You really really need to get a Beta or proofreader as this is an excellent story. The plot is brilliant, the twists are really well thought out and fast paced. You include minor characters and give them a bigger role than J K did which is really thought provoking and I’m really enjoying your story. The only thing that lets it down is the spelling and grammar which just stops it being a Fanfic classic and that’s really a shame. However I’m looking forward to seeing where this goes as it’s obvious that you still have a lot planned and I’ll be along for the ride.
4/10 c1 aiyana19
love both of the stories
4/10 c110 whatsnaptime
can't wait for more two chapters back to back blew my mind
4/9 c110 NightAngel99
There are several typos within this chapter. Some are misspelling and some have the wrong name or age. I do like how things are going and I look forward to the next chapter.
4/9 c110 Sarahamanda Klaine
I like this chapter. It is a good chapter.
Please update soon.
4/9 c109 Sarahamanda Klaine
I like this chapter. It is a good chapter. Please update soon.
4/9 c109 Ariesp19
Oh boy!
4/7 c108 Tierra741
Petunia needs to snitch like dhe has never snitched before
4/7 c108 Sarahamanda Klaine
l like this chapter. It is a good chapter. Please update soon.
4/7 c108 Ariesp19
Oh boy!
3/27 c107 Sarahamanda Klaine
I like this chapter. It is a good chapter. please update as you white you can.
3/26 c107 iHateHotWeather123
So, long as it's NOT the baby...
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