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4/3/2012 c1 5Archer 250
Without the irritating vocals of the band, this fic is good :)
4/3/2012 c1 15MadManMatt64
This was a "Awwww" story that you are so great at. Two complaints though. First, what is it in all bold? Its minor, but its still slightly distracting. the second one is much more crippling; what were they fighting about? You have to give us some sort of context, or else we really aren't going to care very much. We know nothing about what happened, and it would help to know what happened.

By the way, I like how you took matters into your own hands. You may not have liked the choice of song in my fic, but put them in the exactly same situation and use your own. I like that.

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