for One By One10/16/2012 c4 
18shinigami nanoda
Oh my goodness! I am so glad that I stumbled across this! I love murder mysteries (and Agatha Christie, specifically), so I'm super excited for this story. I love the tone/atmosphere that you have set up so far, and I'm looking forward to reading more!
18shinigami nanodaOh my goodness! I am so glad that I stumbled across this! I love murder mysteries (and Agatha Christie, specifically), so I'm super excited for this story. I love the tone/atmosphere that you have set up so far, and I'm looking forward to reading more!
10/11/2012 c4 5Bhkkc
Is this by any chance based off of the movie Clue? Because it seems extremely similar. Not that its a bad idea. Infact I think its quite clever! Love it so far update soon! :)
5BhkkcIs this by any chance based off of the movie Clue? Because it seems extremely similar. Not that its a bad idea. Infact I think its quite clever! Love it so far update soon! :)
7/6/2012 c2 22Joker is Poker with a J
Whew, I'm behind on this story! But, I'm back! Great second chapter. I think I guessed from your amazing descriptions who our main characters are and I'm too excited to see how this story goes! Wonderful job, so far! Keep it up :)
Truly,
Joker is Poker with a J
22Joker is Poker with a JWhew, I'm behind on this story! But, I'm back! Great second chapter. I think I guessed from your amazing descriptions who our main characters are and I'm too excited to see how this story goes! Wonderful job, so far! Keep it up :)
Truly,
Joker is Poker with a J
4/16/2012 c3 21ShamRockCenter
Who is hosting the party? How did Kloppman know Kid Blink would come? Is Snyder involved-did he send Blink knowing with intentions for him to enter because he put him on the list? So many questions! Must read more!
21ShamRockCenterWho is hosting the party? How did Kloppman know Kid Blink would come? Is Snyder involved-did he send Blink knowing with intentions for him to enter because he put him on the list? So many questions! Must read more!
4/10/2012 c3 5Mayarin
as;ldfja;lskfa;lsfd I am SO EXCITED.
Medda is involved! YES. Also, the Refuge? That is brilliant/hilarious. Poor Blink - he ain't got a clue what he's in for!
And lastly, but most importantly... KLOPPMAN! AHHHHHH, yes. This is great. I don't even know what to write I am so excited.
5Mayarinas;ldfja;lskfa;lsfd I am SO EXCITED.
Medda is involved! YES. Also, the Refuge? That is brilliant/hilarious. Poor Blink - he ain't got a clue what he's in for!
And lastly, but most importantly... KLOPPMAN! AHHHHHH, yes. This is great. I don't even know what to write I am so excited.
4/8/2012 c2 21ShamRockCenter
And so we begin! All were fairly obvious, except for the aloof characte with the black derby... Specs? Can't wait for the next chapter, so the action can begin!
21ShamRockCenterAnd so we begin! All were fairly obvious, except for the aloof characte with the black derby... Specs? Can't wait for the next chapter, so the action can begin!
4/8/2012 c1 Verreax
ITS LIKE TEN LITTLE INDIANS!
ITS LIKE TEN LITTLE INDIANS!
4/8/2012 c2 5Mayarin
And we're off! This is shaping up to be verrrrrrrrry interesting...
All right, so first's first. As per usual, I'm loving your Jack character and his imaginary crush on the brown-haired girl, who may or may not be involved in the mystery? Don't tell me, I can't wait to find out.
So Spot is going to be the silent yet observant one... I'm foreseeing some interesting plot points with him. Oooo, this is gonna be good!
5MayarinAnd we're off! This is shaping up to be verrrrrrrrry interesting...
All right, so first's first. As per usual, I'm loving your Jack character and his imaginary crush on the brown-haired girl, who may or may not be involved in the mystery? Don't tell me, I can't wait to find out.
So Spot is going to be the silent yet observant one... I'm foreseeing some interesting plot points with him. Oooo, this is gonna be good!
4/7/2012 c2 14AJ McLeod
Very excited darling! I love mysteries and I can't wait until the ball really gets going...especially if your introductions are anything to go by ;)
14AJ McLeodVery excited darling! I love mysteries and I can't wait until the ball really gets going...especially if your introductions are anything to go by ;)
4/5/2012 c1 21ShamRockCenter
Wow! A powerful introduction to an even more exciting story... What secrets will be revealed as their lives become endangered? Can't wait for the next chapter!
21ShamRockCenterWow! A powerful introduction to an even more exciting story... What secrets will be revealed as their lives become endangered? Can't wait for the next chapter!
4/4/2012 c1 14AJ McLeod
I liked it and I'm very much hooked after the first chapter! You're such an amazing and talented writer! The only thing that I saw that was a little funky was in the telegram. Since morse code doesn't have punctuation, they actually would have spelled out the word comma and wouldn't have had the apostrophe. But other than that it was great!
14AJ McLeodI liked it and I'm very much hooked after the first chapter! You're such an amazing and talented writer! The only thing that I saw that was a little funky was in the telegram. Since morse code doesn't have punctuation, they actually would have spelled out the word comma and wouldn't have had the apostrophe. But other than that it was great!
4/4/2012 c1 Spin Bray
Hey Stress!
So excited to read your new story! This is gonna rock.
Anywho, this is more just me letting you know that I had to change my penname. You might not remember me anyway, but I used to be Tipps on fanfic.net and I still am on the NML. Guess I'm Spin now. I had to change it because my account got screwy and I ended up having to change the password and the penname, so I just used one of my other newsies names.
Just thought you should know.
Can't wait for your awesome new story!
~Spin.
Hey Stress!
So excited to read your new story! This is gonna rock.
Anywho, this is more just me letting you know that I had to change my penname. You might not remember me anyway, but I used to be Tipps on fanfic.net and I still am on the NML. Guess I'm Spin now. I had to change it because my account got screwy and I ended up having to change the password and the penname, so I just used one of my other newsies names.
Just thought you should know.
Can't wait for your awesome new story!
~Spin.
4/4/2012 c1 22Joker is Poker with a J
Sooo, as soon as I read the summary, And Then There Was None came to mind. One of the few murder mysteries I've read. But, I loved it and I'm very excited to see how this story will unfold! :) Great writing, stress!
Truly,
Joker is Poker with a J~
22Joker is Poker with a JSooo, as soon as I read the summary, And Then There Was None came to mind. One of the few murder mysteries I've read. But, I loved it and I'm very excited to see how this story will unfold! :) Great writing, stress!
Truly,
Joker is Poker with a J~
4/4/2012 c1 5Mayarin
Ooooooo, this is looking exciting. I am intrigued and expectant.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
5MayarinOoooooo, this is looking exciting. I am intrigued and expectant.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
4/3/2012 c1 10Pegasus M
A murder mystery... with Newsies... by Stress? How could I resist! This story already feels like such a classic mystery and I can't wait to see where you go with this. I especially loved how you differentiated all three correspondences. So we have Sarah, Race, and Oscar so far? And the story is set on Randall's Island? Intrigued, indeed!
So looking forward to this. Next chapter(s) (very) soon, please!
10Pegasus MA murder mystery... with Newsies... by Stress? How could I resist! This story already feels like such a classic mystery and I can't wait to see where you go with this. I especially loved how you differentiated all three correspondences. So we have Sarah, Race, and Oscar so far? And the story is set on Randall's Island? Intrigued, indeed!
So looking forward to this. Next chapter(s) (very) soon, please!