for Dandelions and Valley Songs6/15/2014 c1 DeletedAccount3498
Wow, this is really good. The emotion is just brilliantly strong, and there were so many references to the book, and even more lose knots tied. This piece should be published and added onto the end of Mockingjay, for it's of that quality.
Now, although I've read the books plenty of times I haven't got them memorised word for word (never will lol), but as I was reading I started noticing a LOT of similarities to the books, like sentences that I'm sure I've read before and etc. Is part of this fanfiction based off a section of the books, or is part of this fanfiction directly copied from the books? If so, could you mention it in an author's note somewhere? It would just make it better for the reader.
Secondly, I love how you embellished sections that we don't get to find out. Like Annie for instance, and Katniss' view on why Finnick likes Annie, the memorial for the cause, it just all relates so well. Also, when I read the part about Primrose, I almost cried. It's just so sad and captured her grief just like the original series. I love that you used dialogue from the book too. Yes, my memory's not that bad, I can distinctively remember some of the lines. :)
Can you do a sequel to this? Maybe a further one about Katniss and Peeta's recovery, or maybe a reflection when Katniss/Peeta are at the end of their life, after a long period of time has passed, and readers can see how their perspectives have changed?
Well, this story itself is brilliant. If you are doing a sequel, please tell me!
xx
HybridsRose
Wow, this is really good. The emotion is just brilliantly strong, and there were so many references to the book, and even more lose knots tied. This piece should be published and added onto the end of Mockingjay, for it's of that quality.
Now, although I've read the books plenty of times I haven't got them memorised word for word (never will lol), but as I was reading I started noticing a LOT of similarities to the books, like sentences that I'm sure I've read before and etc. Is part of this fanfiction based off a section of the books, or is part of this fanfiction directly copied from the books? If so, could you mention it in an author's note somewhere? It would just make it better for the reader.
Secondly, I love how you embellished sections that we don't get to find out. Like Annie for instance, and Katniss' view on why Finnick likes Annie, the memorial for the cause, it just all relates so well. Also, when I read the part about Primrose, I almost cried. It's just so sad and captured her grief just like the original series. I love that you used dialogue from the book too. Yes, my memory's not that bad, I can distinctively remember some of the lines. :)
Can you do a sequel to this? Maybe a further one about Katniss and Peeta's recovery, or maybe a reflection when Katniss/Peeta are at the end of their life, after a long period of time has passed, and readers can see how their perspectives have changed?
Well, this story itself is brilliant. If you are doing a sequel, please tell me!
xx
HybridsRose
4/10/2012 c1 EvaleenDarcy
Thank you.
I was having troubles adjusting to the end of the books, and your story helped a lot :) You write really well. Please write more!
Thank you.
I was having troubles adjusting to the end of the books, and your story helped a lot :) You write really well. Please write more!
4/9/2012 c1 
32The Wuzzy
This is way better than the ending of the real book, not least becuase it's better written! :D Really emotional and far more touching as well.
32The WuzzyThis is way better than the ending of the real book, not least becuase it's better written! :D Really emotional and far more touching as well.
4/7/2012 c1 26salanderjade
Beautifully done. It adds to and enhances the end chapter and epilogue of Mockingjay. Loved "The Valley Song" inclusion. Good job!
26salanderjadeBeautifully done. It adds to and enhances the end chapter and epilogue of Mockingjay. Loved "The Valley Song" inclusion. Good job!
4/6/2012 c1 4blissful DREAMER 0x
I really liked this story :) I thought it was a really nice accompaniment to the end of Mockingjay. It showed more of what the other characters were going through, which I wanted to see in the real book. I thought it was well written & a nice, bittersweet to the book I reread I few days ago. Fantastic job :)
4blissful DREAMER 0xI really liked this story :) I thought it was a really nice accompaniment to the end of Mockingjay. It showed more of what the other characters were going through, which I wanted to see in the real book. I thought it was well written & a nice, bittersweet to the book I reread I few days ago. Fantastic job :)
4/6/2012 c1 8Kate Wetherall
This was really beautiful. I loved how you stayed true to the books but also made it your own at the same time. Very well done, I really enjoyed it.
8Kate WetherallThis was really beautiful. I loved how you stayed true to the books but also made it your own at the same time. Very well done, I really enjoyed it.
4/5/2012 c1 Miki
Nicely written. Thanks!
Nicely written. Thanks!
4/5/2012 c1 irishmauve
This is a perfect gift. The last chapter needed to give us more and now we have it. Seeing them healing together and having hope.
Thank you.
This is a perfect gift. The last chapter needed to give us more and now we have it. Seeing them healing together and having hope.
Thank you.
4/5/2012 c1 godiva
thanks for the really nice story!
thanks for the really nice story!
4/4/2012 c1 4Laurell-chan
Very nicely done. I hated how abrupt the ending was of the book. You expanded on it well and it was all so in character. You should definitely write some more HG fics. ;)
4Laurell-chanVery nicely done. I hated how abrupt the ending was of the book. You expanded on it well and it was all so in character. You should definitely write some more HG fics. ;)