4/13/2012 c1 12Vampireninja101
I'm really not a fan of yaoi :/ but I think it's s pretty good beginning
I'm really not a fan of yaoi :/ but I think it's s pretty good beginning
4/7/2012 c1 78r403584n
I agree with Owl Cookies' review, it seems rushed :/ The ending could've been alot better, and the whole thing overall could do with a bit of a read though, maybe you should get someone to beta it? There are lots of spelling mistakes in this.
I agree with Owl Cookies' review, it seems rushed :/ The ending could've been alot better, and the whole thing overall could do with a bit of a read though, maybe you should get someone to beta it? There are lots of spelling mistakes in this.