
4/10/2012 c1 deactivated0089
I love this, seriosly.
The way you write is pure art :3
Fingers crossed that 2D finds her number and calls her x)
I love this, seriosly.
The way you write is pure art :3
Fingers crossed that 2D finds her number and calls her x)
4/7/2012 c1
7Rifecat96
GFDSASDFGHHG
LOOK AT EM BEIN' ALL YOUNG AND CUTE. JUST MARRY EACH OTHER ALREADY DAMN.

GFDSASDFGHHG
LOOK AT EM BEIN' ALL YOUNG AND CUTE. JUST MARRY EACH OTHER ALREADY DAMN.
4/6/2012 c1 Rillaz
Great job! I did notice one thing though, Stuart's eyes weren't blackened until Murdoc hit him with the car. Other than that, wonderful! I love how shy 2D is :3
Great job! I did notice one thing though, Stuart's eyes weren't blackened until Murdoc hit him with the car. Other than that, wonderful! I love how shy 2D is :3
4/6/2012 c1
8Kukapetal
I loved it! Very cute and the dialogue and interactions were belivable and I like how you worked in that old organ shop 2D used to work in. There was a bit of a continuity error though...2D didn't have black eyes when he worked at the shop. he didn't get them until Mudroc crashed into the shop and put him in a coma (well, that's how he got the first one, anyway). The teeth I'm not so sure about...I've always heard Murdoc knocked them out but I don't know if that's official info or just fanon.
Also, when you're talking about money, it's "dough," not "doe." :P
Very cute story though. Nice job.

I loved it! Very cute and the dialogue and interactions were belivable and I like how you worked in that old organ shop 2D used to work in. There was a bit of a continuity error though...2D didn't have black eyes when he worked at the shop. he didn't get them until Mudroc crashed into the shop and put him in a coma (well, that's how he got the first one, anyway). The teeth I'm not so sure about...I've always heard Murdoc knocked them out but I don't know if that's official info or just fanon.
Also, when you're talking about money, it's "dough," not "doe." :P
Very cute story though. Nice job.