FanFiction.Net
Just In
Community
Forum
V
More
for Adrenaline Rush

5/23/2012 c3 2ZombieandThePinkUnicorn
First of all, thank you for the review you gave us!

Second, this is a very interesting plot. I like it as an idea and I'm excited for your next update.

Third, your writing isn't all that bad, but I think your grammer needs just a bit of work. It would help your writing become even better. Getting a beta would fix that right up. Anyway, I really like this story so please update soon.

The Pink Unicorn
4/9/2012 c3 1Nelle07
I like the story! The connection between the first and second story was kinda off. It didn't flow?

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service