for A Wizard's Fairytale4/1/2015 c11 Guest
DO YOU MIND IF I USE THE SURNAME Kalgarias
DO YOU MIND IF I USE THE SURNAME Kalgarias
3/22/2015 c20 Shade Seeker
I like the story, it is interesting. I would recommend reviewing it before you post it since some of the words/wording doesn't quite line up. I would also like to request brevity on the respond to reviews, I prefer to just read the story and let it be revealed there. Regardless, thank you for writing.
I like the story, it is interesting. I would recommend reviewing it before you post it since some of the words/wording doesn't quite line up. I would also like to request brevity on the respond to reviews, I prefer to just read the story and let it be revealed there. Regardless, thank you for writing.
3/20/2015 c20 Guest
I'm not gonna lie, I normally hate stories like this where the Potters live, but abandon harry. The stories are usually over used and focus more on character bashing than a real plot; I don't know what made me read your story, but I'm glad i did. Really great. And I actually like the platonic friendship between Aries and Rue, the kind of vulnerability shared between two hard, damaged people that allows them to connect in a way that isn't a cliché romance.
I'm not gonna lie, I normally hate stories like this where the Potters live, but abandon harry. The stories are usually over used and focus more on character bashing than a real plot; I don't know what made me read your story, but I'm glad i did. Really great. And I actually like the platonic friendship between Aries and Rue, the kind of vulnerability shared between two hard, damaged people that allows them to connect in a way that isn't a cliché romance.
3/19/2015 c20 Mrs. Albus Severus Potter
That is wrong and horrible to leave a cliffhanger! Ugh! Please update soon! Can't wait for new chapters!
That is wrong and horrible to leave a cliffhanger! Ugh! Please update soon! Can't wait for new chapters!
2/22/2015 c20 Just Sandy
Awesome story so far! Please don't abandon this story... It is a really great story. And I think I know who Lena's father is... In one the previous chapters, they talked about a guy her age who had grey eyes... maybe it's him? I don't know but that's my theory... :)
Awesome story so far! Please don't abandon this story... It is a really great story. And I think I know who Lena's father is... In one the previous chapters, they talked about a guy her age who had grey eyes... maybe it's him? I don't know but that's my theory... :)
2/19/2015 c20 
2Alexandria.Nymphadora
Please finish this story & let everyone know the truth. But who is Lena's father?
2Alexandria.NymphadoraPlease finish this story & let everyone know the truth. But who is Lena's father?
2/17/2015 c20 Silky Button
ok. wow! awesome story!
I cannot wait to see who the boss is. A large part of me feels like we've already 'met' him in the story...
I also can't wait to learn more about Zana's death
and to see if Aries and Rue win their freedom
Hope to see more soon!
ok. wow! awesome story!
I cannot wait to see who the boss is. A large part of me feels like we've already 'met' him in the story...
I also can't wait to learn more about Zana's death
and to see if Aries and Rue win their freedom
Hope to see more soon!
2/13/2015 c20 Elle Ryder
I love your story!
It's sad yeah, but it's definitely amazing. I keep reading that a lot of people want Harry and Rue together, but I agree with you. They'd work better as friends, plus with Rue's background I really doubt she'd enjoy a romantic relationship.
Is Lena's father Thomas? That guy who'd pick up Zana after her parents died. It seems likely.
I like the conspiracy around Zana's suicide.
I can't wait for your next update! :) your story is amazing (I usually get really bothered by grammar mistakes but like I said your story is so great I'm not even bothered)
I love your story!
It's sad yeah, but it's definitely amazing. I keep reading that a lot of people want Harry and Rue together, but I agree with you. They'd work better as friends, plus with Rue's background I really doubt she'd enjoy a romantic relationship.
Is Lena's father Thomas? That guy who'd pick up Zana after her parents died. It seems likely.
I like the conspiracy around Zana's suicide.
I can't wait for your next update! :) your story is amazing (I usually get really bothered by grammar mistakes but like I said your story is so great I'm not even bothered)