for A Wizard's Fairytale2/9/2015 c13 
11NightHunterDeath
Whoever that reviewer was is pitiful, and doesn't deserve to even read your fanfiction.
11NightHunterDeathWhoever that reviewer was is pitiful, and doesn't deserve to even read your fanfiction.
2/8/2015 c19 Ranphoniex
Love the story my friend its a different take in the" what if harry was" category keep up the good work
Love the story my friend its a different take in the" what if harry was" category keep up the good work
2/6/2015 c20 2crazyme03
I'd just like to say that I think this story is very good. I'm looking forward to seeing how everything plays out. Thank you for sharing.
2crazyme03I'd just like to say that I think this story is very good. I'm looking forward to seeing how everything plays out. Thank you for sharing.
2/2/2015 c20 Guest
Is Harry potter illuminati?
Find out soon
Is Harry potter illuminati?
Find out soon
2/2/2015 c20 sanbeegoldiewhitey
Zana trained Aries well. Another boy would not even be civilized to the Potters and the extremely annoying Sirius Black.
Zana trained Aries well. Another boy would not even be civilized to the Potters and the extremely annoying Sirius Black.
2/2/2015 c19 sanbeegoldiewhitey
You are a little bit off in your geography. Beaches in the West Coast don't freeze. The East Coast beaches - they are freezing cold during the winter.
You are a little bit off in your geography. Beaches in the West Coast don't freeze. The East Coast beaches - they are freezing cold during the winter.
2/1/2015 c20 Guest
It's good to see an update and know that you are are continuing the story.
With all due respect, you might want to consider looking up some websites on creative writing and story development. You write well, you provide good imagery with your story, but the updates are very small with a long time between.
Just a few suggestions: 1) Try creating an outline for the rest of the story 2) try to have each update be greater than 3,000 words. A chapter of only 2100 words is barely a single scene (and several hundred of those words for this chapter were replies to reviews), which makes the story progress very slowly for the reader.
It's good to see an update and know that you are are continuing the story.
With all due respect, you might want to consider looking up some websites on creative writing and story development. You write well, you provide good imagery with your story, but the updates are very small with a long time between.
Just a few suggestions: 1) Try creating an outline for the rest of the story 2) try to have each update be greater than 3,000 words. A chapter of only 2100 words is barely a single scene (and several hundred of those words for this chapter were replies to reviews), which makes the story progress very slowly for the reader.
2/1/2015 c20 Guest
this is an excellent story; please update soon
this is an excellent story; please update soon
2/1/2015 c20 5plums
Every time I see this story update, I pray you've given us more than one scene that doesn't really go anywhere.
Can you seriously drop like, 20-30k words into this? It was fun initially, but it's been nearly 3 years since this story has started and I honestly can't say that the overall plot has actually gone that far.
5plumsEvery time I see this story update, I pray you've given us more than one scene that doesn't really go anywhere.
Can you seriously drop like, 20-30k words into this? It was fun initially, but it's been nearly 3 years since this story has started and I honestly can't say that the overall plot has actually gone that far.
1/31/2015 c20 11Kitty Scherbatskaya
This is sooooo, soooooo good and I'm so excited to read more of it!
11Kitty ScherbatskayaThis is sooooo, soooooo good and I'm so excited to read more of it!