for A Wizard's Fairytale12/2/2021 c13 EdTheBeast
I think this is a great story! I've got you as a favorite author and would like to see the stories finished that you have wrote. Of course, I have the same problem, many ideas, few finished! Don't let the flamer's get you down, they need to be zapped with a taser for saying someone should die!
I think this is a great story! I've got you as a favorite author and would like to see the stories finished that you have wrote. Of course, I have the same problem, many ideas, few finished! Don't let the flamer's get you down, they need to be zapped with a taser for saying someone should die!
11/28/2021 c15 jaqmaq77
The final line in that chapter made me laugh... 'He flopped onto his bed and passed on' because that's what my 94 year old mother did, went to bed and passed on... while I got drunk, flopped onto my bed and passed out...
I say again - It's a pity that it's not complete... I'm enjoying it...
So much for your promise to finish it...
The final line in that chapter made me laugh... 'He flopped onto his bed and passed on' because that's what my 94 year old mother did, went to bed and passed on... while I got drunk, flopped onto my bed and passed out...
I say again - It's a pity that it's not complete... I'm enjoying it...
So much for your promise to finish it...
11/28/2021 c9 jaqmaq77
I'm enjoying this... but... I hate mysteries... really hate side references that relate to side stories... and so nosy people like Sirius sneaking around checking on others... James, Lily and Siri in this story threw Harry away like a used tissue - so I must assume Sirius is looking for Dumbledore's missing weapon...
I'm enjoying this... but... I hate mysteries... really hate side references that relate to side stories... and so nosy people like Sirius sneaking around checking on others... James, Lily and Siri in this story threw Harry away like a used tissue - so I must assume Sirius is looking for Dumbledore's missing weapon...
11/28/2021 c5 jaqmaq77
Its interesting in a weird way... usually, things get explained in the first chapters, but this story picks you up and throws you into the deep end with your hands tied behind your back... Gabby is the same age as Harry and is 17? So was he still born in 1980? Is it 1997? What about Horcruxes? Is he still a Horcrux? Is Fleur in her twenties?
And sadly, Even though it's marked complete, it's apparently not...
Such a shame... I was really starting to enjoy it.
Skipped to 13 and 21... can't really say I blame you for walking away... there really are a lot of gutless scum out there... but read the good ones, and ignore 'Guest', as 'Guest' often means 'Gutless, Useless, Evil Shit-spewing Troll...'
I once completed a story, just for fun, and sent the end to the original author... I got back a rant and a few death threats...
but being ex RAF P.E. Instructor and son of an Army Combat/weapons instructor... I laughed, and shared the post with friends who also laughed... We had a great discussion along the lines of - were the things the author suggested I do, Physically possible? Yes, if I were a very flexible contortionist...
Its interesting in a weird way... usually, things get explained in the first chapters, but this story picks you up and throws you into the deep end with your hands tied behind your back... Gabby is the same age as Harry and is 17? So was he still born in 1980? Is it 1997? What about Horcruxes? Is he still a Horcrux? Is Fleur in her twenties?
And sadly, Even though it's marked complete, it's apparently not...
Such a shame... I was really starting to enjoy it.
Skipped to 13 and 21... can't really say I blame you for walking away... there really are a lot of gutless scum out there... but read the good ones, and ignore 'Guest', as 'Guest' often means 'Gutless, Useless, Evil Shit-spewing Troll...'
I once completed a story, just for fun, and sent the end to the original author... I got back a rant and a few death threats...
but being ex RAF P.E. Instructor and son of an Army Combat/weapons instructor... I laughed, and shared the post with friends who also laughed... We had a great discussion along the lines of - were the things the author suggested I do, Physically possible? Yes, if I were a very flexible contortionist...
10/25/2021 c21 Ryan
Thanks for putting the end notes up, I'd rather that than nothing at all. This story is still well worth reading, for those who are in doubt after reading it was abandoned.
Thanks for putting the end notes up, I'd rather that than nothing at all. This story is still well worth reading, for those who are in doubt after reading it was abandoned.
8/27/2021 c21 Guest
Fuck pussy nigga! That's how you think like a real black-skin? you're going to prostrate and beg to your mighty masters and kiss our foot like stray dog Trying to beg to got a house.
Good, I can feel your lust. I am pantsless. Take your dick. Strike me down with all of your lust and your journey towards the bitch side will be complete!
Fuck pussy nigga! That's how you think like a real black-skin? you're going to prostrate and beg to your mighty masters and kiss our foot like stray dog Trying to beg to got a house.
Good, I can feel your lust. I am pantsless. Take your dick. Strike me down with all of your lust and your journey towards the bitch side will be complete!
8/20/2021 c21 
1Fabler9
This story was really really good. I’m extremely sad that it was abandoned. I mostly just wish I knew who Lenas father is
1Fabler9This story was really really good. I’m extremely sad that it was abandoned. I mostly just wish I knew who Lenas father is
7/14/2021 c2 1Nathow
Please update very soon with a sequel story I would like to read about what happens when lily finds out Harry is aries
1NathowPlease update very soon with a sequel story I would like to read about what happens when lily finds out Harry is aries
7/14/2021 c21 Nathow
Please update your fanfiction with a sequel story soon because I love this fanfiction and I am interested in reading that Lily James and Sirius find out that Harry is aries and they beg for his forgiveness
Please update your fanfiction with a sequel story soon because I love this fanfiction and I am interested in reading that Lily James and Sirius find out that Harry is aries and they beg for his forgiveness
7/14/2021 c20 Nathow
Hello please update this fanfiction with a sequel story because I am interested in reading if Sirius finds out that Aries is Harry and he tells lily and James that he found him
Hello please update this fanfiction with a sequel story because I am interested in reading if Sirius finds out that Aries is Harry and he tells lily and James that he found him
6/28/2021 c21 Guest
Hey, its been like 5 years since you abandoned this story but i just wanted to say this i my favorite fanfic ever. Well all my favorite fanfics yo r wrote so ya. Anyway i just wanted to say thanks for writing this and i hope 2020 and 2021 have been good for you since it was not good for lots of people. Anyway if you ever see this I hope you are happy and ok.
Hey, its been like 5 years since you abandoned this story but i just wanted to say this i my favorite fanfic ever. Well all my favorite fanfics yo r wrote so ya. Anyway i just wanted to say thanks for writing this and i hope 2020 and 2021 have been good for you since it was not good for lots of people. Anyway if you ever see this I hope you are happy and ok.
11/12/2020 c1 LadyDaizee
This is a good story. I liked what is done.
You should mark this as abandoned, not complete. That was the only reason I chose to read it.
This is a good story. I liked what is done.
You should mark this as abandoned, not complete. That was the only reason I chose to read it.