5/10/2019 c13 MervyMerv
Ignore the haters mare. Negativity is not needed in life. Pretty interesting story so far I'm sure there's more to Zana's suicide from the time you mentioned it but great writing so far only wish there was a bit more of a build up to Aries character. But still dope
Ignore the haters mare. Negativity is not needed in life. Pretty interesting story so far I'm sure there's more to Zana's suicide from the time you mentioned it but great writing so far only wish there was a bit more of a build up to Aries character. But still dope
4/27/2019 c14 gginsc
I just noticed this story is abandoned! Why the hell did you mark it complete? You have wasted my time.
I just noticed this story is abandoned! Why the hell did you mark it complete? You have wasted my time.
2/23/2019 c21 Guest
I know you technically finished it but I really would love it if you wrote out that chapters (I don't want to be rude at all I just love the story so much and I really want to see what happens next in detail, please don't find this rude or mean I just want to really know the ending and also amazing job on this story) :)
I know you technically finished it but I really would love it if you wrote out that chapters (I don't want to be rude at all I just love the story so much and I really want to see what happens next in detail, please don't find this rude or mean I just want to really know the ending and also amazing job on this story) :)
11/25/2018 c21 1Hadrian Peverell-Black
No so close! Three more chapters! If anybody can make these chapters a reality I will be eternally grateful.
No so close! Three more chapters! If anybody can make these chapters a reality I will be eternally grateful.
11/7/2018 c14 Guest
You explained it.
Even with many of these fallacies and leaps in logic, it's quite an enjoyable story. Very original in its approach. Though I'd kind of wish you'd put more emphasis on the Potter vs Harry drama and less on the OCs, but I guess you were expecting for the story to become quite long.
You explained it.
Even with many of these fallacies and leaps in logic, it's quite an enjoyable story. Very original in its approach. Though I'd kind of wish you'd put more emphasis on the Potter vs Harry drama and less on the OCs, but I guess you were expecting for the story to become quite long.
11/7/2018 c12 Guest
Right, they'd definitely have this semi-deep, private conversation around a bunch of strangers and people related to Harry in some way, rather than do that shit in the privacy of their own quarters. Makes total sense. You needed Lily (and others) to hear it, so you made it happen, but again, it makes no logical sense.
Right, they'd definitely have this semi-deep, private conversation around a bunch of strangers and people related to Harry in some way, rather than do that shit in the privacy of their own quarters. Makes total sense. You needed Lily (and others) to hear it, so you made it happen, but again, it makes no logical sense.
11/7/2018 c3 Guest
Why would he have to be her son? He could just be a cousin or nephew or something. Reaching again.
Why would he have to be her son? He could just be a cousin or nephew or something. Reaching again.
11/7/2018 c2 Guest
Blood Wards around Petunia stronger than they would be around James and Lily? Worried about fame but keeping the other kid with them? Not even visiting their own son in any way for 5 years because it would "strain" the relationship between him and Petunia? You're reaching, and it really ruins the story when your logic is so off.
Blood Wards around Petunia stronger than they would be around James and Lily? Worried about fame but keeping the other kid with them? Not even visiting their own son in any way for 5 years because it would "strain" the relationship between him and Petunia? You're reaching, and it really ruins the story when your logic is so off.
7/19/2018 c21 WorkerBee
Loved the story. Sorry you didn't finish. However glad you left outline so we still get closure.
Loved the story. Sorry you didn't finish. However glad you left outline so we still get closure.
7/16/2018 c21 2failedssaeng
thx! I really love the way you write this even tho this isn't complete yet, but thx for the summary, and am happy this one have happy ending (at least in my mind)
thx! I really love the way you write this even tho this isn't complete yet, but thx for the summary, and am happy this one have happy ending (at least in my mind)
7/4/2018 c21 Guest
This was an awesome story thank you
This was an awesome story thank you
6/10/2018 c21 3NoLongerActiveAsOf2019
At least you wrote a summary of the following chapters and gave us an idea of the ending.
At least you wrote a summary of the following chapters and gave us an idea of the ending.
4/22/2018 c21 Guest
Shame you gave up on this story; it was very intriguing and your Harry was more interesting than most. Thanks for sharing.
Shame you gave up on this story; it was very intriguing and your Harry was more interesting than most. Thanks for sharing.