for Fic on the Fly5/27/2014 c58 Guest
The idea of dis story was awesome
I enjoyed it
N I was smiling through it
Totally awesome
I'm glad I read it ... . .
The idea of dis story was awesome
I enjoyed it
N I was smiling through it
Totally awesome
I'm glad I read it ... . .
5/27/2014 c58 
52old4fanfic
Entertaining. Does Edward ever mention his parts? At least he doesn't mind using them even if he can't name them
52old4fanficEntertaining. Does Edward ever mention his parts? At least he doesn't mind using them even if he can't name them
5/27/2014 c58 KTNCullen
Very fun! I loved this Edward so much... and this Bella is a crack-up too! This fic was the perfect antidote to the overload of angst I've been reading. I can't believe you did it without an outline...it turned out REALLY well. Great twist with the wolves!
Thank you again for the humor and the happy!
Katy
Very fun! I loved this Edward so much... and this Bella is a crack-up too! This fic was the perfect antidote to the overload of angst I've been reading. I can't believe you did it without an outline...it turned out REALLY well. Great twist with the wolves!
Thank you again for the humor and the happy!
Katy
5/26/2014 c58 4BilliCullen
Girl, you're awesome!
Another winner under your belt.
Now, get some OBtD! LMAO!
4BilliCullenGirl, you're awesome!
Another winner under your belt.
Now, get some OBtD! LMAO!
5/26/2014 c58 8dazzleglo
I loved this and how he teased her until she said it and then her getting all aggressive on him.
8dazzlegloI loved this and how he teased her until she said it and then her getting all aggressive on him.
5/26/2014 c58 trisha63
Thanks Kate for this cute and very funny little adventure in writing! Your stories are usually so serious in nature and I truly love each and every one of them, but this one was so much fun as each chapter was totally different. This Edward made me laugh out loud on pretty much each chapter and I loved him. Fantastic writing, as always gal! Take care, Trisha :}
Thanks Kate for this cute and very funny little adventure in writing! Your stories are usually so serious in nature and I truly love each and every one of them, but this one was so much fun as each chapter was totally different. This Edward made me laugh out loud on pretty much each chapter and I loved him. Fantastic writing, as always gal! Take care, Trisha :}
5/26/2014 c58 CindyWindy
That was a fine finish and I think your little experiment was a great success! I recently reread all the posted chapters, and while I was reading it casually and not with a super critical eye, I found it to be plenty cohesive and - most importantly - I enjoyed it very much! Definitely a keeper, with both an Edward and a Bella to love! Thanks for sharing their tale!
That was a fine finish and I think your little experiment was a great success! I recently reread all the posted chapters, and while I was reading it casually and not with a super critical eye, I found it to be plenty cohesive and - most importantly - I enjoyed it very much! Definitely a keeper, with both an Edward and a Bella to love! Thanks for sharing their tale!
5/26/2014 c58 Just Sus
I have to say that, given your A/N's, there were some time lapses between chapters...so, I'm glad I waited to read this after it was marked complete! I did enjoy it, especially that you changed both Edward and Bella's personalities. i really liked them better this way!
Strange twist on Charlie's death...I can't believe that Bella doesn't want vengeance, but maybe she's OK.
Thanks for this!
xoSus
I have to say that, given your A/N's, there were some time lapses between chapters...so, I'm glad I waited to read this after it was marked complete! I did enjoy it, especially that you changed both Edward and Bella's personalities. i really liked them better this way!
Strange twist on Charlie's death...I can't believe that Bella doesn't want vengeance, but maybe she's OK.
Thanks for this!
xoSus