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5/25/2014 c58 miamia80
Awwww! I loved this little story. I know you said it was an experiment and that it was tough without an outline, but I think it was fantastic. Funny, sweet, and with awesome action. Loved it, loved it! I'm just sad to see it done! Thanks for continuing to post your stories for us to read.
5/25/2014 c57 Cullenosopy

Thank you!
5/25/2014 c57 Luvvykitty
Love love love the inner monologue! Amazing update as always!
5/25/2014 c57 SLKerouac
It was all over. Jasper was telling everyone to get all the pieces so that they could be burned. Carlisle was taking care of some of the wolves that got hurt. Esme had taken two newborns under her wings and what to take them to Tanya in Alaska. Jasper and Edward knew that would be interesting. Jasper now was telling Edward that he should go take care of Bella. Bella was watching Edward walking towards her. He was telling her that he would not hurt her. Bella was surprised by that. She told him that she was afraid of him being hurt. Then running to him. She had herself wrapped around him. Bella told Edward that she loved him. Edward then told her that he loved her. Jacob came up to them. Bella asked him what he wanted. Jacob started talking to Bella but she now was yelling at him. Then Bella starting hitting him. She was so angry that they had killed her father. Everyone now was watching what Bella was going to do now. She told Jacob that she wanted to kill him and he told her to go ahead and do what she needed. Then Bella just stood there. Then she turned to Edward asking him to take her home. Edward was surprised but he would do whatever Bella wanted. Edward picked her up cradling her and was going home. What happens when Edward and Bella get home? What will Bella do now that she knows that the wolves are the ones that killed her father after he had been bitten and changing? Will she forgive them and what to be friends still? Will she stay away from the wolves for now till she can grieve again? Or will she stand up and let them all know what they have done to her? What happens with the rest of the Cullen's? Will there be a peaceful relationship now between them and the wolves? Next!
5/25/2014 c57 CindyWindy
Reeeeeally sweet moment with Bella and her stupid vampire. They're so well-matched.

Bella was too easy on the wolves, but on the other hand, forgiveness is a good thing (even if the other hairy creatures don't deserve it).

Thanks for writing! Prompt: can't decide between: Post Battle Lovemaking or The First Time I Proposed.
5/25/2014 c57 bittenbyedward1918
I think this was my favorite chapter. I vote for "home".
5/25/2014 c57 blb1000
Love it! Thanks for new chapter.
5/25/2014 c57 2That'sMzPeachesTYVM
Prompt: That's What Love is For
5/25/2014 c57 pnkats
Awesome as always
5/25/2014 c57 the granddaughter
okay, okay, okay! first of all I have to say I LOVE this story :) but I couldn't help noticing something that doesn't add up... so the wolves killed Charlie, great plot twist! but didn't Bella say she saw Charlie's body after he died? that it was empty like a husk (sorry if I can't remember the right words), if the wolves killed him, wouldn't they have ripped the body apart?
5/25/2014 c57 MaryMary123
great chapter.. good story..
5/25/2014 c55 MaryMary123
Bless her heart she wants her revenge for her daddy.
5/25/2014 c53 MaryMary123
So Sam killed Charlie to keep him from turning. Now that would make me see red. I would want my father alive even if it was as a vampire. So Sam just dug himself a whole new can of worms.
5/25/2014 c57 5FluffyLiz
Aww, I knew she'd forgive Jacob... although she'll never forget, and I doubt their friendship will survive in one piece. But what now, I wonder?
5/25/2014 c51 MaryMary123
Yes she has balls but hers can be crushed by said vampires.
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