for Fic on the Fly5/26/2014 c58 
2That'sMzPeachesTYVM
It was a blast, hon! I loved the story
you created interactively as we made
suggestions. Kudos.
2That'sMzPeachesTYVMIt was a blast, hon! I loved the story
you created interactively as we made
suggestions. Kudos.
5/25/2014 c58 10CassandraLowery
This is a great place to finish this intriguing little (or not-so-little, after all!) tale! It was a highly-successful experiment IMHO, anyways. :)
Thank you for writing for us, Kate. You are such a talented writer, and I love all of your work! :)
Have a lovely week, k?
Warmly,
Cassandra :)
xxxooo
10CassandraLoweryThis is a great place to finish this intriguing little (or not-so-little, after all!) tale! It was a highly-successful experiment IMHO, anyways. :)
Thank you for writing for us, Kate. You are such a talented writer, and I love all of your work! :)
Have a lovely week, k?
Warmly,
Cassandra :)
xxxooo
5/25/2014 c58 miamia80
Awwww! I loved this little story. I know you said it was an experiment and that it was tough without an outline, but I think it was fantastic. Funny, sweet, and with awesome action. Loved it, loved it! I'm just sad to see it done! Thanks for continuing to post your stories for us to read.
Awwww! I loved this little story. I know you said it was an experiment and that it was tough without an outline, but I think it was fantastic. Funny, sweet, and with awesome action. Loved it, loved it! I'm just sad to see it done! Thanks for continuing to post your stories for us to read.
5/25/2014 c57 SLKerouac
It was all over. Jasper was telling everyone to get all the pieces so that they could be burned. Carlisle was taking care of some of the wolves that got hurt. Esme had taken two newborns under her wings and what to take them to Tanya in Alaska. Jasper and Edward knew that would be interesting. Jasper now was telling Edward that he should go take care of Bella. Bella was watching Edward walking towards her. He was telling her that he would not hurt her. Bella was surprised by that. She told him that she was afraid of him being hurt. Then running to him. She had herself wrapped around him. Bella told Edward that she loved him. Edward then told her that he loved her. Jacob came up to them. Bella asked him what he wanted. Jacob started talking to Bella but she now was yelling at him. Then Bella starting hitting him. She was so angry that they had killed her father. Everyone now was watching what Bella was going to do now. She told Jacob that she wanted to kill him and he told her to go ahead and do what she needed. Then Bella just stood there. Then she turned to Edward asking him to take her home. Edward was surprised but he would do whatever Bella wanted. Edward picked her up cradling her and was going home. What happens when Edward and Bella get home? What will Bella do now that she knows that the wolves are the ones that killed her father after he had been bitten and changing? Will she forgive them and what to be friends still? Will she stay away from the wolves for now till she can grieve again? Or will she stand up and let them all know what they have done to her? What happens with the rest of the Cullen's? Will there be a peaceful relationship now between them and the wolves? Next!
It was all over. Jasper was telling everyone to get all the pieces so that they could be burned. Carlisle was taking care of some of the wolves that got hurt. Esme had taken two newborns under her wings and what to take them to Tanya in Alaska. Jasper and Edward knew that would be interesting. Jasper now was telling Edward that he should go take care of Bella. Bella was watching Edward walking towards her. He was telling her that he would not hurt her. Bella was surprised by that. She told him that she was afraid of him being hurt. Then running to him. She had herself wrapped around him. Bella told Edward that she loved him. Edward then told her that he loved her. Jacob came up to them. Bella asked him what he wanted. Jacob started talking to Bella but she now was yelling at him. Then Bella starting hitting him. She was so angry that they had killed her father. Everyone now was watching what Bella was going to do now. She told Jacob that she wanted to kill him and he told her to go ahead and do what she needed. Then Bella just stood there. Then she turned to Edward asking him to take her home. Edward was surprised but he would do whatever Bella wanted. Edward picked her up cradling her and was going home. What happens when Edward and Bella get home? What will Bella do now that she knows that the wolves are the ones that killed her father after he had been bitten and changing? Will she forgive them and what to be friends still? Will she stay away from the wolves for now till she can grieve again? Or will she stand up and let them all know what they have done to her? What happens with the rest of the Cullen's? Will there be a peaceful relationship now between them and the wolves? Next!
5/25/2014 c57 CindyWindy
Reeeeeally sweet moment with Bella and her stupid vampire. They're so well-matched.
Bella was too easy on the wolves, but on the other hand, forgiveness is a good thing (even if the other hairy creatures don't deserve it).
Thanks for writing! Prompt: can't decide between: Post Battle Lovemaking or The First Time I Proposed.
Reeeeeally sweet moment with Bella and her stupid vampire. They're so well-matched.
Bella was too easy on the wolves, but on the other hand, forgiveness is a good thing (even if the other hairy creatures don't deserve it).
Thanks for writing! Prompt: can't decide between: Post Battle Lovemaking or The First Time I Proposed.
5/25/2014 c57 the granddaughter
okay, okay, okay! first of all I have to say I LOVE this story :) but I couldn't help noticing something that doesn't add up... so the wolves killed Charlie, great plot twist! but didn't Bella say she saw Charlie's body after he died? that it was empty like a husk (sorry if I can't remember the right words) ...so, if the wolves killed him, wouldn't they have ripped the body apart?
okay, okay, okay! first of all I have to say I LOVE this story :) but I couldn't help noticing something that doesn't add up... so the wolves killed Charlie, great plot twist! but didn't Bella say she saw Charlie's body after he died? that it was empty like a husk (sorry if I can't remember the right words) ...so, if the wolves killed him, wouldn't they have ripped the body apart?