for Fic on the Fly5/24/2014 c57 miamia80
ok i really liked that chapter. as much as i wanted her to shoot jacob, i think this was even better. i loved the ilys. edward's reaction was priceless. love him! how about HOME.
ok i really liked that chapter. as much as i wanted her to shoot jacob, i think this was even better. i loved the ilys. edward's reaction was priceless. love him! how about HOME.
5/24/2014 c57 TwiMommyof3
Just found this wonderfully awesome story! Love it! Lol the first thing that popped into my head after reading this ch. was Emmett tellin Bella "Bad Ass" after she told him she punched a wolf;)) Can NOT wait for more really really lovin it & this Edward & Bella love em!
Just found this wonderfully awesome story! Love it! Lol the first thing that popped into my head after reading this ch. was Emmett tellin Bella "Bad Ass" after she told him she punched a wolf;)) Can NOT wait for more really really lovin it & this Edward & Bella love em!
5/24/2014 c57 
24Maplestyle
Ahhhhhhhh she's a lot nicer then me too cause I would have ordered their extinction!
Prompt 58: together forever
24MaplestyleAhhhhhhhh she's a lot nicer then me too cause I would have ordered their extinction!
Prompt 58: together forever
5/24/2014 c55 betsmecullen
You made the fight scene so vibrant. I could see how every character was moving along with action in the background. Well done! Hope Edward's "fragile little human" will be protected.
Prompt - "Revenge is a dish that is best served cold." That quote popped up when I read the last chapter. I've never quite figured it out, though. Does it mean that the person seeking revenge should be dispassionate about the act or something else? IDK
Write on. Update when you can.
You made the fight scene so vibrant. I could see how every character was moving along with action in the background. Well done! Hope Edward's "fragile little human" will be protected.
Prompt - "Revenge is a dish that is best served cold." That quote popped up when I read the last chapter. I've never quite figured it out, though. Does it mean that the person seeking revenge should be dispassionate about the act or something else? IDK
Write on. Update when you can.
5/24/2014 c56 10CassandraLowery
LOL-loved the ending of this chapter, a la Wizard of Oz. :)
Looking forward to the next chapter and what will happen next. Because, seriously, this tale is so twisted around that I really have no idea what's going to happen.
Thank you for picking this story back up and continuing to write it!
Warmly,
Cassandra :)
xxxooo
10CassandraLoweryLOL-loved the ending of this chapter, a la Wizard of Oz. :)
Looking forward to the next chapter and what will happen next. Because, seriously, this tale is so twisted around that I really have no idea what's going to happen.
Thank you for picking this story back up and continuing to write it!
Warmly,
Cassandra :)
xxxooo
5/23/2014 c56 SLKerouac
Jasper was giving orders to everyone. He was sending all them into different area. Edward was focused on Jacob and Victoria. He was listening to what they were thinking and something made Edward really made. He got a hold of Victoria and that was the end of her. She was in pieces. What happens after the newborns are taken care of? What does Bella do with the wolves? Does one of them try to get Bella to listen to what happened? Next!
Jasper was giving orders to everyone. He was sending all them into different area. Edward was focused on Jacob and Victoria. He was listening to what they were thinking and something made Edward really made. He got a hold of Victoria and that was the end of her. She was in pieces. What happens after the newborns are taken care of? What does Bella do with the wolves? Does one of them try to get Bella to listen to what happened? Next!