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5/23/2014 c53 bella0609
So...The wolves killed James and Charlie. (They truly are all business, huh?) Does Bella have any second thoughts about the wolves? I love this story so much. I don't want it to end.
5/23/2014 c56 mommymac0508
Oh snap he went bazerk damn but he killed her and now its over
word crazed
5/23/2014 c56 Karanda86
Now I'm going to be singing that song all night long. Great fight scene! I love your action sequences. They're always so physical and visual. Thinking now the wolves are going to get a piece of Bella's mind and maybe her gun LOL!

Judgment.
5/23/2014 c55 Karanda86
Hehe! I love Bella.
5/23/2014 c56 Luereetwilitejunki
lollol I like that Ding dong the witch is dead! now its time to shoot a dog! lol
5/23/2014 c56 Tdot TwiFic
NICE.
I. Like. IT...
Emmett laughing in the corner.
Bella asking Edward to not die.
I don't know if my heart can handle this lovelyness. TEHEHEHEHE.
5/23/2014 c56 blueeyes11354
Hurray! :D
5/23/2014 c56 5FluffyLiz
If Bella is supposed to be so smart, how can she be stupid enough to believe she doesn't need protection from a hoard of new-born vampires and a woman hell-bent on her destruction? She can be as bad-assed as she wants, and arm herself with a complete arsenal of weaponry, but she's still a puny human who could be killed by a vampire merely flicking his wrist. She's actually starting to really annoy me so much that I kind of want one of the newbies to inflict a life-threatening injury on her, just to show her how dumb she's being. This would also serve, of course, to prompt Edward into changing her to save her life, which, in turn, would allow him to say "I told you so" LOL
5/23/2014 c56 7Fakin'it
Yay! Vicki's dead. I'm sure the rest of the newborns are decimated now too. It wouldn't take Jasper long to clean up the field. Hopefully the wolves all realize now they would all be dead, followed by the rest of their tribes and loved ones, if it weren't for the Cullens' help.
5/23/2014 c56 1muffinmom
Loved loved loved this chapter!
For next one: "Stabbed in the Back"
5/23/2014 c56 31Rebadams7
Elysian Fields Woo hoo go vamps
R
5/23/2014 c56 polyphany
Love it! :-)
5/23/2014 c56 cecilia4059
Yeah! Victoria is dead. Now, it's Jacob's tern. I doubt Bella would really kill him but how can't she? I mean, they killed, sank their teeth into her father. No daughters can let it go, right? Can't wait. Please update soon. Thanks so much.
5/23/2014 c56 Cullenosopy
F_k yeah! (as in Team America)

Thanks!
5/23/2014 c56 NanStew
pumpkin How's that for a word?
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