for Fic on the Fly5/22/2014 c55 Guest
This story is ok but it would be better for you to update Operation Break the Dawn instead. You've updated this one like 5 times in a row.
This story is ok but it would be better for you to update Operation Break the Dawn instead. You've updated this one like 5 times in a row.
5/22/2014 c55 miamia80
I love Bella! I hope she gets the chance to give Jacob and the wolves a taste of their own medicine. Until then... the Cullens to the rescue!
I love Bella! I hope she gets the chance to give Jacob and the wolves a taste of their own medicine. Until then... the Cullens to the rescue!
5/22/2014 c45 
1Marie Mermaids
I guess the chapters are more fun and less intense than before. I still like it but I miss the tone of the early chapters.
1Marie MermaidsI guess the chapters are more fun and less intense than before. I still like it but I miss the tone of the early chapters.
5/22/2014 c55 blueeyes11354
Love his inability to keep things from her. Makes life so much easier. lol
Love his inability to keep things from her. Makes life so much easier. lol
5/22/2014 c55 SLKerouac
All of a sudden there was fighting going on between the wolves and the newborns. The Cullen's were there watching and they knew what was going to happen. There were more newborns than wolves and things went going very well. Esme thought that they should help the wolves. Bella asked Edward is he was going to help. Edward asked her why with Bella telling him that after they were done she was going to shoot the wolf that killed her father. Now Edward was all in. What happens when the Cullen's help the wolves? What does Bella do after this fight is over with? Will someone try to explain to Bella what happened with her father? Will she listen? Or will she just shoot? Next!
All of a sudden there was fighting going on between the wolves and the newborns. The Cullen's were there watching and they knew what was going to happen. There were more newborns than wolves and things went going very well. Esme thought that they should help the wolves. Bella asked Edward is he was going to help. Edward asked her why with Bella telling him that after they were done she was going to shoot the wolf that killed her father. Now Edward was all in. What happens when the Cullen's help the wolves? What does Bella do after this fight is over with? Will someone try to explain to Bella what happened with her father? Will she listen? Or will she just shoot? Next!
5/22/2014 c55 bozbaby
Get the Party Started? (Pink)
Bella's Absolution?
Thunderstruck? (AC/DC)
Love the story!
Get the Party Started? (Pink)
Bella's Absolution?
Thunderstruck? (AC/DC)
Love the story!
5/22/2014 c55 mommymac0508
Oh wow everything happening at once but will save the wolves and then will Bella really shoot them
Oh wow everything happening at once but will save the wolves and then will Bella really shoot them
5/22/2014 c55 Oldenuf2knobeta
Well, I'd be happy if you made it up as you went along till Christmas.
Loving it all.
Oh Jake...you're in the dog house, alright.
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Well, I'd be happy if you made it up as you went along till Christmas.
Loving it all.
Oh Jake...you're in the dog house, alright.
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