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5/21/2014 c54 1jansails
The wolves killed Charlie rather than let him be transformed into a vampire!
Let's see how Bella takes that news.
jansails/jan2
5/21/2014 c54 trixiesnow
What perfect timing. Wasn't the general supposed to tell them when to attack? Hmmmm. Sounds fishy. I'm rambling. Thanks for your words.
5/21/2014 c54 Karanda86
Bella's going to be PISSED when he tells her. He will, right? I really like this twist on canon. Wasn't expecting it at all!
5/21/2014 c54 blb1000
Ooooh, great twist in the story! Looking forward to B's wrath.
5/21/2014 c54 harasnicole
Well, shit.
5/21/2014 c54 SLKerouac
Everyone is still standing there. Edward is reading more of all the minds there. He is seeing more of what happened and who did what. Bella is asking him what is going on. Edward knows that he has to tell Bella the truth but knows that it will hurt her. He knows that the wolves have lied to her for years. Bella asks Edward again what is going on. He then starts to tell her that the wolves have lied to her. That they were the ones but he didn't get to finish. Victoria was now in the clearing and was yelling and pointing at the wolves to kill them all. Does Bella get to know what happened? Does Edward tell her what he read in the minds of the wolves and Victoria? What does Bella do when she finds out that the wolves had killed her father after James bit him? That her father was changing and the black wolf killed him? What does Bella do now? Next chapter!
5/21/2014 c54 7Fakin'it
Oh, wow! Can't wait for the next chapter!
5/21/2014 c54 polyphany
Love it! :-) Prompt idea: Mangy Mutts and the Red Head That Fight Them.
5/21/2014 c54 Tdot TwiFic
Jacob. It is always that one that screws it all up. When will he learn he has to take his dick out of his mind and think with his mind and not his cock. Betrayal is a bitch, a bitch best served by the Cullens.
5/21/2014 c54 5FluffyLiz
Well, this is a turn-up for the books - could it be that, in your particular version of events, the wolves will be destroyed? If the Cullens don't go to their aid, can they repel Victoria's army of newborns? Undoubtedly, the wolves will inflict heavy losses, but the sheer number of newbies could turn the tide, and it seems unlikely that Edward will help, or allow his family to step in, now that he knows the truth of what happened to Charlie. The question for Bella to ask, should the wolves prevail, is whether they killed Charlie just because he was turning into a vampire, or whether it was a mercy killing. And now that Bella knows there's an alternative lifestyle for vampires, will she care what the answer is, especially in view of the fact that they lied to her from the outset? I guess the wolves will need to win this battle in order for us to find out the answers to those questions.
5/21/2014 c54 mommymac0508
Holy snap the wolves killed her dad will Edwards tell her all and who will survive the fight
prompt pure chaos
5/21/2014 c54 Vanell
Got to say I hope that Edward does not tell Bella that the dogs were the ones to kill Charlie. They did what they do and really will it make any real difference? I feel the dogs did what they had to and saying otherwise would not be of any benefit to anyone. Victoria and the rest have to die and the Cullens need the dogs' help.
5/21/2014 c54 Guest
Thank you!
5/21/2014 c54 Sapho99
Frankly my dear, I don't give a damn!
sapho99
5/21/2014 c3 parkesy23
Thanks
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