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12/24/2018 c20 MiaLuthor
New word for me " patent impossibility" means clearly a lie. Where are you from that folk use this term?
New word for me " patent impossibility" means clearly a lie. Where are you from that folk use this term?
8/15/2018 c58 Valya 001
Wow! This was like amazing! I really loved this Edward and loved this version of twilight even better! The ending was fabulous! Thanks for sharing such a great story with us .
Wow! This was like amazing! I really loved this Edward and loved this version of twilight even better! The ending was fabulous! Thanks for sharing such a great story with us .
4/10/2018 c24 helenemc
I usually wait to finish a complete story before leaving a review, but this Edward is bringing tears to my eyes from laughter. Thank you.
I usually wait to finish a complete story before leaving a review, but this Edward is bringing tears to my eyes from laughter. Thank you.
3/2/2018 c51 Beaverslap
I don’t understand why Bella doesn’t go out there armed with a couple of blowtorches instead of a rifle. Seems that would be more effective.
I don’t understand why Bella doesn’t go out there armed with a couple of blowtorches instead of a rifle. Seems that would be more effective.
12/19/2017 c58
15winterhorses
Great story, and very funny! Loved the twist about Charlie at the end. Thanks for writing!
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Great story, and very funny! Loved the twist about Charlie at the end. Thanks for writing!