for Fic on the Fly12/20/2015 c58 petmom1213
I thoroughly enjoyed your story. I thought that it was sometimes funny and sometimes sexy and all the time really good. Thank you for writing it.
Mickey
I thoroughly enjoyed your story. I thought that it was sometimes funny and sometimes sexy and all the time really good. Thank you for writing it.
Mickey
12/4/2015 c58 ChristyWIX
This was a very interesting version of what we've all come to love. I loved his more sarcastic side through this whole thing. I loved that it was partly canon and mostly not. Her knowing what exactl he was right off was cool. Her hating him at first and then liking, eventually loving him. It really was quite an interesting journey. I liked it. Very different take on what happened to Charlie. James tried to change him and the wolves killed him. No wonder the coroner and morgue didn't have any photos of him . . . they had to have burned him. I would've like one last chapter as her turned. However, you're correct, this was as good of a place to end it as any other.
This was a very interesting version of what we've all come to love. I loved his more sarcastic side through this whole thing. I loved that it was partly canon and mostly not. Her knowing what exactl he was right off was cool. Her hating him at first and then liking, eventually loving him. It really was quite an interesting journey. I liked it. Very different take on what happened to Charlie. James tried to change him and the wolves killed him. No wonder the coroner and morgue didn't have any photos of him . . . they had to have burned him. I would've like one last chapter as her turned. However, you're correct, this was as good of a place to end it as any other.
9/16/2015 c58 Guest
I enjoyed this entirely different view of Edward and Bella. Thank you for writing this funny, snarky story!
I enjoyed this entirely different view of Edward and Bella. Thank you for writing this funny, snarky story!
6/2/2015 c20 jk
Why is it that Edward never understands his feelings? Hes a emotional retard
Why is it that Edward never understands his feelings? Hes a emotional retard
6/2/2015 c10 jk
why do you have Edward find Tanya so attractive? you did see her in the movie right?
and he doesn't find the fact that she a whore even worth a thought? shes a sperm dumpster!
Shes a succubus...she basically rapes men..all the time...you may not call it rpe but I do she used to be human and when she was not all men bowed to her and ripped their clothes off...something unnatural makes her alluring to them...its like tricking them..or giving them a date rape drug..I call that rape
why do you have Edward find Tanya so attractive? you did see her in the movie right?
and he doesn't find the fact that she a whore even worth a thought? shes a sperm dumpster!
Shes a succubus...she basically rapes men..all the time...you may not call it rpe but I do she used to be human and when she was not all men bowed to her and ripped their clothes off...something unnatural makes her alluring to them...its like tricking them..or giving them a date rape drug..I call that rape
5/27/2015 c58 
38RogueAlly
This was amazingly funny! I'm actually disappointed I wanted reading this as a WiP so that I could provide prompts, but I do love how it turned out. I love a fierce Bella.
38RogueAllyThis was amazingly funny! I'm actually disappointed I wanted reading this as a WiP so that I could provide prompts, but I do love how it turned out. I love a fierce Bella.
3/20/2015 c58 13evilnat
I liked this one. I bet reading it as a WIP would have been fun! Loved the humor
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13evilnatI liked this one. I bet reading it as a WIP would have been fun! Loved the humor
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2/11/2015 c58 BridieM
Thoroughly enjoyed this read. EPOV is always so much more fun to read. Thank you. :D
Thoroughly enjoyed this read. EPOV is always so much more fun to read. Thank you. :D
11/15/2014 c58 4SarcasticBimbo
This was really light and funny and I liked it a lot. Great work, Katinki!
4SarcasticBimboThis was really light and funny and I liked it a lot. Great work, Katinki!
11/10/2014 c58 helenemc
I had so much fun reading this story. Thank you for all the laughs. Bella was awesome. She did not take crap from anyone. Being in Edward's mind was hilarious funny. Talk about being whipped, by a human no less. Loved it all. Thank you.
I had so much fun reading this story. Thank you for all the laughs. Bella was awesome. She did not take crap from anyone. Being in Edward's mind was hilarious funny. Talk about being whipped, by a human no less. Loved it all. Thank you.
11/10/2014 c36 helenemc
When I begin a complete story, I usually do not review until the end. However, I had to stop and tell you that being in this Edward's head is a wonderful experience and a hoot. The humor comes through his every thought. I love your take on the Twilight theme and your writing.
When I begin a complete story, I usually do not review until the end. However, I had to stop and tell you that being in this Edward's head is a wonderful experience and a hoot. The humor comes through his every thought. I love your take on the Twilight theme and your writing.