for Fic on the Fly11/23/2017 c58 Oneway2011
Thank you! That was awesome! I started this when I woke at 2AM for water and planned to read myself to sleep and I did - at 6:30, 10 min after I normally wake up! But it was worth it. Your writing is great but I wish the story was 3 times longer going into all about Bella learning all the traits of vamps. (The Wolf’s knowledge was limited). Going to look at your other works- I love your style!
Thank you! That was awesome! I started this when I woke at 2AM for water and planned to read myself to sleep and I did - at 6:30, 10 min after I normally wake up! But it was worth it. Your writing is great but I wish the story was 3 times longer going into all about Bella learning all the traits of vamps. (The Wolf’s knowledge was limited). Going to look at your other works- I love your style!
11/25/2016 c26 karen4honor
Bwahahaha! This story has been HILARIOUS! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS AWESOME STORY!
Bwahahaha! This story has been HILARIOUS! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS AWESOME STORY!
12/20/2015 c58 petmom1213
I thoroughly enjoyed your story. I thought that it was sometimes funny and sometimes sexy and all the time really good. Thank you for writing it.
Mickey
I thoroughly enjoyed your story. I thought that it was sometimes funny and sometimes sexy and all the time really good. Thank you for writing it.
Mickey
12/4/2015 c58 ChristyWIX
This was a very interesting version of what we've all come to love. I loved his more sarcastic side through this whole thing. I loved that it was partly canon and mostly not. Her knowing what exactl he was right off was cool. Her hating him at first and then liking, eventually loving him. It really was quite an interesting journey. I liked it. Very different take on what happened to Charlie. James tried to change him and the wolves killed him. No wonder the coroner and morgue didn't have any photos of him . . . they had to have burned him. I would've like one last chapter as her turned. However, you're correct, this was as good of a place to end it as any other.
This was a very interesting version of what we've all come to love. I loved his more sarcastic side through this whole thing. I loved that it was partly canon and mostly not. Her knowing what exactl he was right off was cool. Her hating him at first and then liking, eventually loving him. It really was quite an interesting journey. I liked it. Very different take on what happened to Charlie. James tried to change him and the wolves killed him. No wonder the coroner and morgue didn't have any photos of him . . . they had to have burned him. I would've like one last chapter as her turned. However, you're correct, this was as good of a place to end it as any other.
9/16/2015 c58 Guest
I enjoyed this entirely different view of Edward and Bella. Thank you for writing this funny, snarky story!
I enjoyed this entirely different view of Edward and Bella. Thank you for writing this funny, snarky story!
6/2/2015 c20 jk
Why is it that Edward never understands his feelings? Hes a emotional retard
Why is it that Edward never understands his feelings? Hes a emotional retard
6/2/2015 c10 jk
why do you have Edward find Tanya so attractive? you did see her in the movie right?
and he doesn't find the fact that she a whore even worth a thought? shes a sperm dumpster!
Shes a succubus...she basically rapes men..all the time...you may not call it rpe but I do she used to be human and when she was not all men bowed to her and ripped their clothes off...something unnatural makes her alluring to them...its like tricking them..or giving them a date rape drug..I call that rape
why do you have Edward find Tanya so attractive? you did see her in the movie right?
and he doesn't find the fact that she a whore even worth a thought? shes a sperm dumpster!
Shes a succubus...she basically rapes men..all the time...you may not call it rpe but I do she used to be human and when she was not all men bowed to her and ripped their clothes off...something unnatural makes her alluring to them...its like tricking them..or giving them a date rape drug..I call that rape
5/27/2015 c58 
38RogueAlly
This was amazingly funny! I'm actually disappointed I wanted reading this as a WiP so that I could provide prompts, but I do love how it turned out. I love a fierce Bella.
38RogueAllyThis was amazingly funny! I'm actually disappointed I wanted reading this as a WiP so that I could provide prompts, but I do love how it turned out. I love a fierce Bella.
3/20/2015 c58 13evilnat
I liked this one. I bet reading it as a WIP would have been fun! Loved the humor
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13evilnatI liked this one. I bet reading it as a WIP would have been fun! Loved the humor
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2/11/2015 c58 BridieM
Thoroughly enjoyed this read. EPOV is always so much more fun to read. Thank you. :D
Thoroughly enjoyed this read. EPOV is always so much more fun to read. Thank you. :D