for Fic on the Fly8/24/2014 c3 three colors
"cleansed and polished by the kiln of transformation" - Katinki, what a great and original way to explain their bodily perfection; almost like a geothermal transformation! You're really a smartie!
"cleansed and polished by the kiln of transformation" - Katinki, what a great and original way to explain their bodily perfection; almost like a geothermal transformation! You're really a smartie!
8/16/2014 c27 jk
I was really liking that Bella hated and feared him for once I'd like edweird to have to work for it but then u ruined it...wtf
I was really liking that Bella hated and feared him for once I'd like edweird to have to work for it but then u ruined it...wtf
8/8/2014 c28 sosueme
I love his bella-checklist, and Alice telling him he doesn't know shit about women! So true.
I love his bella-checklist, and Alice telling him he doesn't know shit about women! So true.
8/8/2014 c25 sosueme
I love this fic - especially how he never does what he should! Great humor, action, vamp, attraction...this has it all!
I love this fic - especially how he never does what he should! Great humor, action, vamp, attraction...this has it all!
7/12/2014 c58 ReaderKat
Great story, very engaging. Enjoyed where it veered from canon - very creative! Loved that it was in Edward's POV so we could know exactly what was going on in his head. Thanks for sharing!
Great story, very engaging. Enjoyed where it veered from canon - very creative! Loved that it was in Edward's POV so we could know exactly what was going on in his head. Thanks for sharing!
6/30/2014 c58 moonlore73
This story was so good! I held out until it was complete and am so glad I did. Not sure if I could have handled waiting for updates - no matter the amount of time. Would love to hear a little bit from Bella's POV if you are ever so inclined? Although it is perfect as is :)
This story was so good! I held out until it was complete and am so glad I did. Not sure if I could have handled waiting for updates - no matter the amount of time. Would love to hear a little bit from Bella's POV if you are ever so inclined? Although it is perfect as is :)
6/23/2014 c58 rubell
awesome...you can turn nothing and crazyness into a wonderful, entertaining, sad, funny and fantastic story...so, ummm...operation: break the dawn? soon? please?!
awesome...you can turn nothing and crazyness into a wonderful, entertaining, sad, funny and fantastic story...so, ummm...operation: break the dawn? soon? please?!