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4/11/2012 c1 18Dream Of Rose Petals
I have to agree with Madam Apathy, this is very original. I usually shy away from everything to do with Olympics - personal reasons, but this was very freshing to read.
4/8/2012 c1 27Madame Apathy
Why didn't I think of this? It's so refreshing to see something that's both an original idea and makes sense in context of the game. Good job!

I noticed one or two mistakes here. For example, "I" should always be capitalised the same way as a name ought to be. "Olympic" should probably be capitalised to because "Olympics is the title of the event". I also think it might be nice to see a little bit more description, but there's nothing wrong with writing this as a drabble. Either way, it was clever to use a major event like the Olympics as inspiration.

Katie.

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