for Never Give Luffy Too Much Chocolate!4/26/2012 c1 
11RunAway Rose
Oh this reminded me of the octopus! Shitty Easter... , shishishi
I love this story good job
*-Rose
11RunAway RoseOh this reminded me of the octopus! Shitty Easter... , shishishi
I love this story good job
*-Rose
4/22/2012 c1 1TieDyeNeko
This...could happen...-nods-
Even though there were some errors, I enjoyed reading it! I have just recently joined this site...so I am 'researching' on stories...
Everyone was very much in character! I especially liked the part 'he said its easter.' Luffy's baka-ness must be infecting everyone!
Keep writing your stories!
1TieDyeNekoThis...could happen...-nods-
Even though there were some errors, I enjoyed reading it! I have just recently joined this site...so I am 'researching' on stories...
Everyone was very much in character! I especially liked the part 'he said its easter.' Luffy's baka-ness must be infecting everyone!
Keep writing your stories!
4/9/2012 c1 95Miqila
Daakeli, joku ehti kommentoimaan ennen mua D: Hehee, ei sentään mustekalasuklaata, jos tajuut mitä tarkotan.
95MiqilaDaakeli, joku ehti kommentoimaan ennen mua D: Hehee, ei sentään mustekalasuklaata, jos tajuut mitä tarkotan.
4/8/2012 c1 1ghostlyangel
That was a cute fluffy story! Luffy on sugar high would be hysterical.
There were some minor grammatical errors, but nothing that detracted from the story. Since you're Finnish, I'm going to assume English is a second language. Your English is better than some of the native English speakers I see here on fanfic. :)
Great job overall. It definitely made me smile!
1ghostlyangelThat was a cute fluffy story! Luffy on sugar high would be hysterical.
There were some minor grammatical errors, but nothing that detracted from the story. Since you're Finnish, I'm going to assume English is a second language. Your English is better than some of the native English speakers I see here on fanfic. :)
Great job overall. It definitely made me smile!