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12/29/2013 c1 Enryuu
haha, typical Ron yelling at everything that moves funny. for some reason I thought of Marisa Kirisame when I saw the 'needs a broom upgrade' it sounded more like she needed that turbo artifact :D

In case I don't make sense, Marisa is from a series called touhou and is a witch in every sense of word, except she's good and not evil. she can use this small piece of magic relic that when placed on her broom, makes it go ultra duper fast \/ if you want, look for marisa broom surfing, it's interesting to say the least. and eww evil aunts though at least it's not a fairy tale general evil stepmom trope xD
8/16/2012 c1 18Moonlit Phantasy
This is nice:) Sad, given the ultimate ending, but nice:)
7/1/2012 c1 18bacta.junkie
Wizards don't say Christ. It'd be a Merlin, or a Godric, or something like that.
Other than that, very nice.
4/21/2012 c1 Ryn
Wow! This is really good, amazing detail and imaginative too! :D
4/19/2012 c1 Phoenix214
Great story. I love the perspective you took, giving us an insight on her thoughts.
4/10/2012 c1 Dieter Leonhart
First off, I love this story. It really makes me feel like this should have been in the Harry Potter books somewhere. The way Nymphadora was filled with fear gave the character a more sense of emotion and gave her more life, even moments away from death.

I really liked the way her thoughts suddenly turned away from sudden panic to the thoughts of her family and how she was apparently the bad guy, the outcast.

I also desperately want to know what happened to Bellatrix as Tonks hit the ground in Muriel Weasley's yard.

Really great story. :)
4/8/2012 c1 Nibelung
yush! Tonks 3 she almost feels like a tortured character, but then again given the plot of HP most of them are tortured in some way.

Getting a glimpse into her feelings and how she sees the world is a welcome experience though, i really enjoyed it ^~^

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