for Nevermore Fanfiction Contest Entry5/30/2013 c1 Blank
Wait...what the heck? Angel and Star are snogging? That's what "having at each other's faces" normally means...
Otherwise I liked the pairings you used and language you employed. I wish it was longer, though - you brought out so much that could have been elaborated on! Grammar and spelling was quite good indeed, and I liked how you specified Angel's allegiance.
Wait...what the heck? Angel and Star are snogging? That's what "having at each other's faces" normally means...
Otherwise I liked the pairings you used and language you employed. I wish it was longer, though - you brought out so much that could have been elaborated on! Grammar and spelling was quite good indeed, and I liked how you specified Angel's allegiance.
4/24/2013 c1 Guest
omg i wish you had won
omg i wish you had won
12/1/2012 c1 Guest
it was good. but angels OWN flock ?
it was good. but angels OWN flock ?
8/7/2012 c1 blackie
uerm i dont get it
uerm i dont get it
8/5/2012 c1 nikkki
That was great... loved it.
That was great... loved it.
4/15/2012 c1 FyreFlyte22
I like your style of writing, it's sad, but with an upside. I like how you put Dylan and Maya together, because that's what I was thinking. I didn't put that in my entry because it sounded a bit farfetched, but in your words, I have to admit, it makes perfect sense. All has been said except one thing. Where's Holden?
I like your style of writing, it's sad, but with an upside. I like how you put Dylan and Maya together, because that's what I was thinking. I didn't put that in my entry because it sounded a bit farfetched, but in your words, I have to admit, it makes perfect sense. All has been said except one thing. Where's Holden?
4/9/2012 c1 
6maryclumsykatherine
I haven't read the story (as you know) but I still loved your writing skills(: Love you girly!
6maryclumsykatherineI haven't read the story (as you know) but I still loved your writing skills(: Love you girly!
4/9/2012 c1 5Carolyn Sunshine
Great job bravo! I'm crying now cuz Ratchet is gone but happy cuz Max and Fang are together right? I also too entered the Never More contest. Your's was good. But it was little deadish. A HUGE cliff hanger. I'll see you soon.
5Carolyn SunshineGreat job bravo! I'm crying now cuz Ratchet is gone but happy cuz Max and Fang are together right? I also too entered the Never More contest. Your's was good. But it was little deadish. A HUGE cliff hanger. I'll see you soon.