for One School, One Destiny5/11/2013 c1 Mental General
Are you sure this is humour? Reading this first chapter makes me feel like I'm straping myself in for the Horror Train.
And poor Squally poo! Why makes your character be abused so? Why are you not quietly manly?
Lol nah Squall is just my fav ff character and even if he is Leon at the moment I still feel for him. (Is kind of guessing that he's not going to be with Kairi for long. And its so weeeeiiird him having a non broody personality.
Anyway, I'm going to read this next chapter and see how it goes. And maybe I should stop reviewing so late at night...
Are you sure this is humour? Reading this first chapter makes me feel like I'm straping myself in for the Horror Train.
And poor Squally poo! Why makes your character be abused so? Why are you not quietly manly?
Lol nah Squall is just my fav ff character and even if he is Leon at the moment I still feel for him. (Is kind of guessing that he's not going to be with Kairi for long. And its so weeeeiiird him having a non broody personality.
Anyway, I'm going to read this next chapter and see how it goes. And maybe I should stop reviewing so late at night...
5/6/2013 c11 
8Nikaidou
Wundabar! I may have mentioned in previous reviews that this is one of my FAVOURITE Fanfictions of all time, and that I once stayed up untill 4am reading this...
Anywazbag, I just wanted to say how much I love this and can't wait for the next chapter.
Xion is adorable!
8NikaidouWundabar! I may have mentioned in previous reviews that this is one of my FAVOURITE Fanfictions of all time, and that I once stayed up untill 4am reading this...
Anywazbag, I just wanted to say how much I love this and can't wait for the next chapter.
Xion is adorable!
4/6/2013 c10 1micahDBG
Really nice mate, love the interaction between the charcters. Honestly, I was gushing with bromance trough the whole detention scene!
1micahDBGReally nice mate, love the interaction between the charcters. Honestly, I was gushing with bromance trough the whole detention scene!
3/27/2013 c10 3PooperScooper000
YAYYY! YOU UPDATED! :D The wait was sooo worth it. :3 Super long chapter!(which is good) So Olette's sick too? Hmm.. update soon!1!1!11!one!11!
3PooperScooper000YAYYY! YOU UPDATED! :D The wait was sooo worth it. :3 Super long chapter!(which is good) So Olette's sick too? Hmm.. update soon!1!1!11!one!11!
3/26/2013 c10 X-blade025
I really love how you portray Roxas's character and Kairi's living situation. I like how Xion is great at giving advice. I'm glad you updated and enjoyed the length and details of your chapter. Naminè also has an awesome personality and I like her sisterly relationship with Xion while Xion doesn't show emotion about a lot of things except Naminè and some other people. I love how Rinoa is in the story and how caring and hardworking she is. My favorite character stories in this story has to be first Roxas, Riku, then Kairi. You are doing an excellant job and hope you update again soon.
I really love how you portray Roxas's character and Kairi's living situation. I like how Xion is great at giving advice. I'm glad you updated and enjoyed the length and details of your chapter. Naminè also has an awesome personality and I like her sisterly relationship with Xion while Xion doesn't show emotion about a lot of things except Naminè and some other people. I love how Rinoa is in the story and how caring and hardworking she is. My favorite character stories in this story has to be first Roxas, Riku, then Kairi. You are doing an excellant job and hope you update again soon.
12/25/2012 c9 Guest
More! Also is sora gay? And y dosent Xion like kairi I hope they become friends soon and she says sorry 2 her 4 saying she dosent like her. And I hope lean say sorry 2 kairi cuz wat he did was wrong.
More! Also is sora gay? And y dosent Xion like kairi I hope they become friends soon and she says sorry 2 her 4 saying she dosent like her. And I hope lean say sorry 2 kairi cuz wat he did was wrong.
12/23/2012 c9 Meryq
I got an alert that you had posted chapter 10 up. Did it never show or was it a mistake? Anyway, love your story so far! I like how you portray Xion not as much Kairi but when a character irritates me that's what I always say. What's gotten into the girl's head? I was hoping for a slow and gradual build up for Sokai like what it seems like with the others but I guess since they were friends beforehand they should've gone through that part already. I like how you portray everyone and connected their lives after that party and the fact that you bring some Final Fantasy characters and Xion and Namine are sisters! So gotta go, update when you can!
I got an alert that you had posted chapter 10 up. Did it never show or was it a mistake? Anyway, love your story so far! I like how you portray Xion not as much Kairi but when a character irritates me that's what I always say. What's gotten into the girl's head? I was hoping for a slow and gradual build up for Sokai like what it seems like with the others but I guess since they were friends beforehand they should've gone through that part already. I like how you portray everyone and connected their lives after that party and the fact that you bring some Final Fantasy characters and Xion and Namine are sisters! So gotta go, update when you can!
12/21/2012 c9 Jaxine-Gia
:) that was great! You deserve more reviews than what you have already . :) I like how you interconnected everyone's lives together after that fight on Monday. I wanted Sora to be friends with Roxas or even Namine or Xion though. Too early to tell. You're the writer anyway you probably already know what's going to happen next. I like the current friendships too I think I've just read too many stories where all of them are friends...
Constructive Critiscism: so I've caught quite a few grammar mistakes in there so I think you might want to look it over but there weren't that many. I think it's a little over dramatic though during Kairi's part she seems like she's overreacting to Leon and her mother. I think the argument about the food might be coming from a grumpy mood she might be in. I've done something similar.
Otherwise this story is great and I can't wait to find out how the rest of the couples end up together. Seifer does seem suspicious about all of his so called friends. It seems to me they were all once his enemy... Update when you can!
:) that was great! You deserve more reviews than what you have already . :) I like how you interconnected everyone's lives together after that fight on Monday. I wanted Sora to be friends with Roxas or even Namine or Xion though. Too early to tell. You're the writer anyway you probably already know what's going to happen next. I like the current friendships too I think I've just read too many stories where all of them are friends...
Constructive Critiscism: so I've caught quite a few grammar mistakes in there so I think you might want to look it over but there weren't that many. I think it's a little over dramatic though during Kairi's part she seems like she's overreacting to Leon and her mother. I think the argument about the food might be coming from a grumpy mood she might be in. I've done something similar.
Otherwise this story is great and I can't wait to find out how the rest of the couples end up together. Seifer does seem suspicious about all of his so called friends. It seems to me they were all once his enemy... Update when you can!
12/21/2012 c9 3PooperScooper000
YAY! YOU UPDATED! xD "...I don't think you're a s*ut." "That little sl*t." LOL! I TOTALLY FACE-PALMED AT THIS! x3 Poor Riku and his Geostigma. D'x UPDATE SOON!
3PooperScooper000YAY! YOU UPDATED! xD "...I don't think you're a s*ut." "That little sl*t." LOL! I TOTALLY FACE-PALMED AT THIS! x3 Poor Riku and his Geostigma. D'x UPDATE SOON!
12/21/2012 c8 X-blade025
I am actually reviewing chapter 9 because the review button won't work for me with that chapter. I liked the ending, Leon should get his act together but I do like watching him beg. Please update soon.
I am actually reviewing chapter 9 because the review button won't work for me with that chapter. I liked the ending, Leon should get his act together but I do like watching him beg. Please update soon.
10/1/2012 c8 PooperScooper000
Omigosh, that was intense and... saucy? Lol, I read this all in a day. I dunno why but i feel like Riku's like a "peace maker?" YOU MUST UPDATE FOR A COOKIE!
Omigosh, that was intense and... saucy? Lol, I read this all in a day. I dunno why but i feel like Riku's like a "peace maker?" YOU MUST UPDATE FOR A COOKIE!
9/30/2012 c7 4ShortStuff24
Omg. You make me want to cry, laugh, smile, jump for joy, and a bunch of other things at one time. How you do that is beyond me but I applaud you for your excellent story.
Honestly, I look up to you because of this one story. I don't think I would ever be able to get a reaction out of someone like you just did for me.
Anyhow, it was a wonderful chapter and is a wonderful story. Can't wait to read even more of this amazing story!
GO SORA GO!
Shortstuff24 :)
4ShortStuff24Omg. You make me want to cry, laugh, smile, jump for joy, and a bunch of other things at one time. How you do that is beyond me but I applaud you for your excellent story.
Honestly, I look up to you because of this one story. I don't think I would ever be able to get a reaction out of someone like you just did for me.
Anyhow, it was a wonderful chapter and is a wonderful story. Can't wait to read even more of this amazing story!
GO SORA GO!
Shortstuff24 :)
9/7/2012 c7 Jenny GURRRRLL
hihihi. Sorry I couldn't review faster, I've been busy with getting settled into a new school and all this tennis shenanigans.
Anyway! Dood. I totally. Freaking. Love. This. Chapter. I looovve how you went back and forth between Xion/Axel to Kairi/Leon. I was like "Whoa there pro status WHADDDUPPP". :') You've grown so much as a writer! I AM PROUD. I'M DAMN PROUD. I FEEL LIKE A MOTHER. Except you're older so...whatever.
The only mistake I noticed is when Xion said "hung" instead of "hang" when she was talking to Axel over the phone. Since she's talking about the future, it should be hang. Yeah. Idk if you want to edit it or not, but just wanted to make you aware!
Yay! Hooray! The drama begins next chapter! Hip, hip, HOORAY!
hihihi. Sorry I couldn't review faster, I've been busy with getting settled into a new school and all this tennis shenanigans.
Anyway! Dood. I totally. Freaking. Love. This. Chapter. I looovve how you went back and forth between Xion/Axel to Kairi/Leon. I was like "Whoa there pro status WHADDDUPPP". :') You've grown so much as a writer! I AM PROUD. I'M DAMN PROUD. I FEEL LIKE A MOTHER. Except you're older so...whatever.
The only mistake I noticed is when Xion said "hung" instead of "hang" when she was talking to Axel over the phone. Since she's talking about the future, it should be hang. Yeah. Idk if you want to edit it or not, but just wanted to make you aware!
Yay! Hooray! The drama begins next chapter! Hip, hip, HOORAY!