for Temporal Tide4/10/2012 c1 tito
You seem to have problems with over eager readers... Well no surprise, we have to go through so much crap to find the gem that when we finally find it we're.. greedy. Take it as a compliment, your stories are gems.
You seem to have problems with over eager readers... Well no surprise, we have to go through so much crap to find the gem that when we finally find it we're.. greedy. Take it as a compliment, your stories are gems.
4/10/2012 c1 Lightshard
Admittedly I originally thought the chapter was short, by the time I was nearing the end I was once again amazed with your writing. In this chapter you really show an uncanny ability to let a lot happen in only a few thousand words, without it looking cramped.
Being a science student I have my reservations with time-travel stories (I do love them, but they require a delicate hand), and I felt my hackles rise when I read Hungary 1003 AD (which implicated time travel backwards, which somehow hadn't crossed my mind when I read about TT months ago), but honestly I should have trusted you. I am just putting my money on the fact that the toddler is Tanya and that really makes me both happy and sad for her, to know that she'll have to wait at least a thousand years to really be with Bella (Of course you could let them meet and let them live together in the middleages, but where would the fun be in that?).
Anyway, Loved your work as always and I'll look forward to the next chapter, whenever it comes (your previous story was interesting enough to wait for, so I am guessing this will be too). Now if I had the ability to travel in time, I'd skip ahead and read everything already. Good luck with your writing!
Admittedly I originally thought the chapter was short, by the time I was nearing the end I was once again amazed with your writing. In this chapter you really show an uncanny ability to let a lot happen in only a few thousand words, without it looking cramped.
Being a science student I have my reservations with time-travel stories (I do love them, but they require a delicate hand), and I felt my hackles rise when I read Hungary 1003 AD (which implicated time travel backwards, which somehow hadn't crossed my mind when I read about TT months ago), but honestly I should have trusted you. I am just putting my money on the fact that the toddler is Tanya and that really makes me both happy and sad for her, to know that she'll have to wait at least a thousand years to really be with Bella (Of course you could let them meet and let them live together in the middleages, but where would the fun be in that?).
Anyway, Loved your work as always and I'll look forward to the next chapter, whenever it comes (your previous story was interesting enough to wait for, so I am guessing this will be too). Now if I had the ability to travel in time, I'd skip ahead and read everything already. Good luck with your writing!
4/10/2012 c1 
3DesireeStorm
Lol as if I would cuss someone out not in person. Nice beginning cantf wait to see where and when she hops to next.
3DesireeStormLol as if I would cuss someone out not in person. Nice beginning cantf wait to see where and when she hops to next.
4/10/2012 c1 11AstronautZombieBerndi
Obligations are for real-life things. The internet is freeing.
This is also great!
11AstronautZombieBerndiObligations are for real-life things. The internet is freeing.
This is also great!
4/10/2012 c1 22Kate-foreverfan
Loved the start! The idea of Bella/Tanya always intrigued me! oh, and I'm realy glad that you're not intending to hate our favorite pixie girl)))))
I have a inkling that Bella will meet (and maybe even turn?) Tanya in tnis 1003 A.D. time? And they will live on through a millenia & meet the Cullens in their own time? If not then sorry for guessing. If yes - we're in for a ride!
Wish you all the inspiration! Give us many updates! I loved your Bella/Vicky story! Can't wait for the epilogue!
22Kate-foreverfanLoved the start! The idea of Bella/Tanya always intrigued me! oh, and I'm realy glad that you're not intending to hate our favorite pixie girl)))))
I have a inkling that Bella will meet (and maybe even turn?) Tanya in tnis 1003 A.D. time? And they will live on through a millenia & meet the Cullens in their own time? If not then sorry for guessing. If yes - we're in for a ride!
Wish you all the inspiration! Give us many updates! I loved your Bella/Vicky story! Can't wait for the epilogue!
4/10/2012 c1 Renu
Nice very nice Please please please update soon
Nice very nice Please please please update soon