for the empty spaces in my heart9/11/2013 c2 merdarkandtwisty
nice really hate Vic can you do one with Teddy/Lily and Lucy but where Lily wins.
nice really hate Vic can you do one with Teddy/Lily and Lucy but where Lily wins.
9/11/2013 c1 merdarkandtwisty
so sad and now I hate Rose. That's ok she's always been my second lest fav after Victorie.
so sad and now I hate Rose. That's ok she's always been my second lest fav after Victorie.
5/14/2012 c1 everycastlecrumbles
This was so breathtakingly beautiful. I love this part
as your heart
c r a c k s
cleanly down the middle
but no.
it's not c l e a n at all.
rip and s h a t t e r
scream and crash
I never really cared much about these pairings but I fell in love with this fic.
This was so breathtakingly beautiful. I love this part
as your heart
c r a c k s
cleanly down the middle
but no.
it's not c l e a n at all.
rip and s h a t t e r
scream and crash
I never really cared much about these pairings but I fell in love with this fic.
4/15/2012 c1 
3anonymous23.19
I don't think I've ever read freeverse before but I really enjoyed this. The language you used is amazing, really fits the scene. I like the characters you used as well, I like the freedom you have with the NextGen.
Well done!
3anonymous23.19I don't think I've ever read freeverse before but I really enjoyed this. The language you used is amazing, really fits the scene. I like the characters you used as well, I like the freedom you have with the NextGen.
Well done!
4/14/2012 c1 2thestorythatshewrote
Really cute,your use of bold, italicize and capitalization of characters/words was very well done. If anything,you might have used a few too many parentheses, but overall very good story, and very realistic ending with a touch of fantasy due to the rhyme. :)
2thestorythatshewroteReally cute,your use of bold, italicize and capitalization of characters/words was very well done. If anything,you might have used a few too many parentheses, but overall very good story, and very realistic ending with a touch of fantasy due to the rhyme. :)
4/11/2012 c1 12TheDarkSideDoesItBetter
I love this. I honest to god, love this.
It's so beautiful and poetic and so tragic.
I don't even like lily but..I can even. It was just wonderful
My favorite part was probably the last bit :
Shatter,silence
And a whispered plea
( I love you but you don't love me)
Write more please :)
-Alice xx
12TheDarkSideDoesItBetterI love this. I honest to god, love this.
It's so beautiful and poetic and so tragic.
I don't even like lily but..I can even. It was just wonderful
My favorite part was probably the last bit :
Shatter,silence
And a whispered plea
( I love you but you don't love me)
Write more please :)
-Alice xx
4/10/2012 c1 violetrose
Heart-breakingly good. I like! You should right more about other pairings as this is good. I think there should be more reviews as there is more than 2 people who have read this. Keep it up, i like poems :)
Heart-breakingly good. I like! You should right more about other pairings as this is good. I think there should be more reviews as there is more than 2 people who have read this. Keep it up, i like poems :)
4/10/2012 c1 3Disk 9
Awww. That's so sad! I like how you used a lot of figurative language. My favorite line was probably:
she got the p r i z e
you got the heartache
and he got the
b e a u t i f u l girl that you never were.
because it's just so sweet and sad. Nice job, looking forward to what you have next! ^_^
3Disk 9Awww. That's so sad! I like how you used a lot of figurative language. My favorite line was probably:
she got the p r i z e
you got the heartache
and he got the
b e a u t i f u l girl that you never were.
because it's just so sweet and sad. Nice job, looking forward to what you have next! ^_^