8/4/2013 c5 claire
i hate super man come on what he uses so no one knows he is super man some glasses are you kiding me glasses people are not idiots
i hate super man come on what he uses so no one knows he is super man some glasses are you kiding me glasses people are not idiots
8/4/2013 c5 Piper fan
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOO Clifhanger O.o
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOO Clifhanger O.o
8/4/2013 c3 Piper fan
Thalia
Thalia
8/2/2013 c5 Pinkness
I HATE *excuse me* STRONGLY DISLIKE BATMAN! I mean he doesn't even have any powers, he BUYS them! AAAAND of all animals why would he choose a bat? I think he's a secret fan of twilight and figured a super-bat-dude was the closest thing to a Edward Cullen. I'm on team Jacob obviously... AND HIS CAPE! HIS INSANELY UNNESCESARILY LONG CAPE! It never EVER gets stuck on anything... This is NOT possible. Don't you remember the incredibles? "No capes" BATS DON'T EVEN HAVE CAPE-LIKE FEATURES WHY DO YOU HAVE A CAPE BATMAN AND WHY IT NO GETS STUCK ON EVERTHING?
*cough cough*
Thank you!
Love, Pinkness
BTW your story's great!
I HATE *excuse me* STRONGLY DISLIKE BATMAN! I mean he doesn't even have any powers, he BUYS them! AAAAND of all animals why would he choose a bat? I think he's a secret fan of twilight and figured a super-bat-dude was the closest thing to a Edward Cullen. I'm on team Jacob obviously... AND HIS CAPE! HIS INSANELY UNNESCESARILY LONG CAPE! It never EVER gets stuck on anything... This is NOT possible. Don't you remember the incredibles? "No capes" BATS DON'T EVEN HAVE CAPE-LIKE FEATURES WHY DO YOU HAVE A CAPE BATMAN AND WHY IT NO GETS STUCK ON EVERTHING?
*cough cough*
Thank you!
Love, Pinkness
BTW your story's great!
8/1/2013 c5 10SkeNinja
Nice story so far. I'd love to see more conflict though. Like have Piper thinking about escaping but she feels guilty because Jason has been so nice to her. Maybe she can escape but she involves Leo and Annabeth since they are Greeks. Heck, maybe they'll run into Thalia.
I'm so sorry about your–I'll call it a–condition. Seems like your friend wants to grow up a little too fast. Guys your age should enjoy your childhood when you still can. High school isn't all fun.
Speaking of, wow, your only 14? And I read about your busy schedule. I gotta say I'm impressed because I don't usually get out much.
And since this is ancient Greece, don't you think your story is a little lenient? I was hoping for blood and gore and a sh*t ton of drama and bloodthirsty Octavian (whom we haven't really seen). Oh, and don't make Reyna a b.i.t.c.h please. She's fine but she's just a rival to Piper. Probably, when you have the time, you can have them encounter one another when Piper roams the castle.
Well, hope you feel better. Update soon!
Nice story so far. I'd love to see more conflict though. Like have Piper thinking about escaping but she feels guilty because Jason has been so nice to her. Maybe she can escape but she involves Leo and Annabeth since they are Greeks. Heck, maybe they'll run into Thalia.
I'm so sorry about your–I'll call it a–condition. Seems like your friend wants to grow up a little too fast. Guys your age should enjoy your childhood when you still can. High school isn't all fun.
Speaking of, wow, your only 14? And I read about your busy schedule. I gotta say I'm impressed because I don't usually get out much.
And since this is ancient Greece, don't you think your story is a little lenient? I was hoping for blood and gore and a sh*t ton of drama and bloodthirsty Octavian (whom we haven't really seen). Oh, and don't make Reyna a b.i.t.c.h please. She's fine but she's just a rival to Piper. Probably, when you have the time, you can have them encounter one another when Piper roams the castle.
Well, hope you feel better. Update soon!
8/1/2013 c5 Mandi2341
First of all, I'd like to say that this is an AMAZING chapter. I can't believe you're actually 14. You're too good to be a fourteen-year-old. Haha I'm so happy for this chapter. It was fine. I really liked it, and it was an important chapter. You're really good at keeping everyone in character even in AU.
Secondly, my offer to beta for you still stands.
Thirdly, I'm so happy that you're getting better. I didn't know that your parents didn't know, but I'm glad you told them, and I'm even more glad that they now understand. But I'm sad you got in a fight with your friend. I'm very sorry about that. :(
Yes, yes, yes I've seen the trailer, and I LOVE IT. So excited for Sea of Monsters, too. It's a party.
Least favorite superhero is...probably Batman (and I'm sorry, Batman fans) just because A) he's not really a SUPERhero because he doesn't have SUPERpowers. And the Batman movies seem...a little...jinxed, sorry to say.
First of all, I'd like to say that this is an AMAZING chapter. I can't believe you're actually 14. You're too good to be a fourteen-year-old. Haha I'm so happy for this chapter. It was fine. I really liked it, and it was an important chapter. You're really good at keeping everyone in character even in AU.
Secondly, my offer to beta for you still stands.
Thirdly, I'm so happy that you're getting better. I didn't know that your parents didn't know, but I'm glad you told them, and I'm even more glad that they now understand. But I'm sad you got in a fight with your friend. I'm very sorry about that. :(
Yes, yes, yes I've seen the trailer, and I LOVE IT. So excited for Sea of Monsters, too. It's a party.
Least favorite superhero is...probably Batman (and I'm sorry, Batman fans) just because A) he's not really a SUPERhero because he doesn't have SUPERpowers. And the Batman movies seem...a little...jinxed, sorry to say.
8/1/2013 c5 3Smileychameleon
I'm so glad your parents understand. I hope you get better! Great chapter take as much time you need updating. Stay strong 3
I'm so glad your parents understand. I hope you get better! Great chapter take as much time you need updating. Stay strong 3
7/30/2013 c5 claire
it is so good im at the edge of my seat
it is so good im at the edge of my seat
7/30/2013 c5 2nataliadavidson242
I love this chapter and it fits perfectly fine with the story!
And I can't wait too see city of bones and sea of monsters!
I love this chapter and it fits perfectly fine with the story!
And I can't wait too see city of bones and sea of monsters!
7/30/2013 c5 GUEST
saw this story on universalpowa's favorites so i read it. its great
saw this story on universalpowa's favorites so i read it. its great
7/29/2013 c5 Artemis-Max-Katniss-Holmes
Hey! So, first off, i wanted to say that its great that your feeling good enough to write a new very amazing chapter of this story in which i personally saw no mistakes (it was really good).
Secondly, i wanted to say that its good that you've told your parents about everything. In my honest opinion, its better to go through something like this with your parents.
Hope you get better soon
Anna
Hey! So, first off, i wanted to say that its great that your feeling good enough to write a new very amazing chapter of this story in which i personally saw no mistakes (it was really good).
Secondly, i wanted to say that its good that you've told your parents about everything. In my honest opinion, its better to go through something like this with your parents.
Hope you get better soon
Anna
7/29/2013 c5 7DeziRayDaughterOfApollo
This chapter was amazing! It's awesome to know that things are looking up for you, keep hanging in there! You'll find the right friends in time, I promise! Keep writing!
This chapter was amazing! It's awesome to know that things are looking up for you, keep hanging in there! You'll find the right friends in time, I promise! Keep writing!
7/29/2013 c5 AngelGirl2000
OMG Sea of Monsters comes out in 10 days! I completely forgot about it. Don't worry about your friend. She should have thought about how her actions would affect you guys' friendship, especially since both of you are only 14. And about the story, its just simply amazing. I can't write anything like this to save my life. Update :)
And for your question, I have to say Superman since he can fly and I can't. But Man of Steel is awesome!
OMG Sea of Monsters comes out in 10 days! I completely forgot about it. Don't worry about your friend. She should have thought about how her actions would affect you guys' friendship, especially since both of you are only 14. And about the story, its just simply amazing. I can't write anything like this to save my life. Update :)
And for your question, I have to say Superman since he can fly and I can't. But Man of Steel is awesome!