for Unmatched10/16/2012 c4 greatguy4931145
Leo, 'cuz I lkke fire.
Yeah, anyway. You have more grammar problems than normal, but it's good otherwise. The only thing is the names. They sound weird in Ancient Rome, but there's not much you can do about that.
Leo, 'cuz I lkke fire.
Yeah, anyway. You have more grammar problems than normal, but it's good otherwise. The only thing is the names. They sound weird in Ancient Rome, but there's not much you can do about that.
10/16/2012 c4 Guest
Plzzz... Update!...
its amazing
Plzzz... Update!...
its amazing
10/15/2012 c4 stars.are.meant.to.shiine
Ahhhh! Thanks for updating! This is literally so amazing and original and I'm obsessed! Please update soon!
Ahhhh! Thanks for updating! This is literally so amazing and original and I'm obsessed! Please update soon!
10/15/2012 c4 Guest
Thalia, she's a kick-but daughter of Zeus
Thalia, she's a kick-but daughter of Zeus
10/15/2012 c4 Guest
THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!
THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!
10/15/2012 c3 Guest
Awesome!
Awesome!
10/15/2012 c4 Sappy101
Pleeeez update soon.
Later on in the story can you make a good kissy scene with jasper? Pleeeeeeezzz
IM BEGGING YOU!
Pleeeez update soon.
Later on in the story can you make a good kissy scene with jasper? Pleeeeeeezzz
IM BEGGING YOU!
10/15/2012 c4 Guest
You want 350 reviews? You'll get em'
You want 350 reviews? You'll get em'
10/15/2012 c3 Pandora
This Story is awesome ! I love it ! hope u update more chapter soon !
This Story is awesome ! I love it ! hope u update more chapter soon !
10/15/2012 c4 
8KatieElizabethGrace
THANK YOU SOOOOOO MUCH! I LOVE THIS STORY! YOU UPDATED! THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!
8KatieElizabethGraceTHANK YOU SOOOOOO MUCH! I LOVE THIS STORY! YOU UPDATED! THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!
10/15/2012 c4 22Separate Entity
Yay update!
Jason didn't know Leo was Greek?
It's nice to see that Piper and Leo can be human around each other.
Umm, cows say moo, prophecy just has the one r, and eavesdropping is one word.
Great chapter!
I think I'd like to be Piper, but I couldn't tell you why.
22Separate EntityYay update!
Jason didn't know Leo was Greek?
It's nice to see that Piper and Leo can be human around each other.
Umm, cows say moo, prophecy just has the one r, and eavesdropping is one word.
Great chapter!
I think I'd like to be Piper, but I couldn't tell you why.
10/14/2012 c4 15snazzyflower
There are a good amount of mistakes, but I liked it nonetheless. Somehow you have a way of making your stories /flow/ so well that you hardly notice the grammar mistakes.
15snazzyflowerThere are a good amount of mistakes, but I liked it nonetheless. Somehow you have a way of making your stories /flow/ so well that you hardly notice the grammar mistakes.