for If Given a Chance7/13/2012 c1 Francis
Super cute was hoping it wasn't a one-shot :)
Super cute was hoping it wasn't a one-shot :)
4/30/2012 c1 XxJasmineReyxX
So cute! Maybe you should make a sequel oneshot? Of a time when they are older. Well I really enjoyed this fanfic. Keep up the great work.
So cute! Maybe you should make a sequel oneshot? Of a time when they are older. Well I really enjoyed this fanfic. Keep up the great work.
4/15/2012 c1 Fenris Jin
Aww.. That was sweet of Sassuke to scout out a potential wife.. but I doubt if he could wait for her to give someone else a chance to be with her.. especially once she becomes the stunner he expects her to be.. XD
Aww.. That was sweet of Sassuke to scout out a potential wife.. but I doubt if he could wait for her to give someone else a chance to be with her.. especially once she becomes the stunner he expects her to be.. XD
4/14/2012 c1 
1Mind-Slaver
An unwelcome surprise, my friend. The most unbeliveable pairing ever and one of the most disgusting ones imho. :(
I only read the story for I read your earlier works, namely Kindergarten Anbu and I still did not like it.
Sasuke was acting OOC imho, and I do realize this takes place before him leaving Konoha and becoming a major ass, but his non-too-noble side is showing. Seriously, you find out that someone likes your teammate, who is by the way an orphan, shunned by all and could not know love if it hit him in the face and your first thoughts are what? Not trying to help them get together or even stand aside and let them resolve their problem, no.
Sasuke decides out of the blue that he will wait till she gives other people a chance and make her his. And then he would parade around town to rub it in. If that is his friend, I dont know what Naruto's enemie would do.
You just lost a reader, mate. I just dont want to check your profile and run into other crap with this theme. It brings me down and I really dont like things that bring me down. Dont lose any sleep because of this. Plenty of readers in the sea that is fanfiction.net.
1Mind-SlaverAn unwelcome surprise, my friend. The most unbeliveable pairing ever and one of the most disgusting ones imho. :(
I only read the story for I read your earlier works, namely Kindergarten Anbu and I still did not like it.
Sasuke was acting OOC imho, and I do realize this takes place before him leaving Konoha and becoming a major ass, but his non-too-noble side is showing. Seriously, you find out that someone likes your teammate, who is by the way an orphan, shunned by all and could not know love if it hit him in the face and your first thoughts are what? Not trying to help them get together or even stand aside and let them resolve their problem, no.
Sasuke decides out of the blue that he will wait till she gives other people a chance and make her his. And then he would parade around town to rub it in. If that is his friend, I dont know what Naruto's enemie would do.
You just lost a reader, mate. I just dont want to check your profile and run into other crap with this theme. It brings me down and I really dont like things that bring me down. Dont lose any sleep because of this. Plenty of readers in the sea that is fanfiction.net.
4/14/2012 c1 16Tora-Hime-Melody
Awwwww omgomgomgomgomg
totally in character (unlike all of the Sasukes I write)
and really cute
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omg i love it!
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!
*squeezes you to death*
16Tora-Hime-MelodyAwwwww omgomgomgomgomg
totally in character (unlike all of the Sasukes I write)
and really cute
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omg i love it!
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!
*squeezes you to death*