for The Lost Mermaid and Her Dragon7/31/2022 c27 justareader
Hello there,
First Off: great Story, i really Like how it gives the characters time to Develop and at the Same time still has enough Plot and Twists to move Forward. I usually dont Pick Up unfinished Stories but there are still so few Lance fics around and seeing as yours ist apparently the First Lance and Misty fic, i became intrigued.
Unfortunately, this means that i am how all caught up with No idea if after a Break this Long Young will ever continue or are even active here anymore. I would be happy to Read more, Maybe one day, but even if Not and this Story stays Dead i still enjoyed it.
Cheers
Hello there,
First Off: great Story, i really Like how it gives the characters time to Develop and at the Same time still has enough Plot and Twists to move Forward. I usually dont Pick Up unfinished Stories but there are still so few Lance fics around and seeing as yours ist apparently the First Lance and Misty fic, i became intrigued.
Unfortunately, this means that i am how all caught up with No idea if after a Break this Long Young will ever continue or are even active here anymore. I would be happy to Read more, Maybe one day, but even if Not and this Story stays Dead i still enjoyed it.
Cheers
11/15/2020 c27 Eimi
Continua tu historia porfas
Continua tu historia porfas
11/5/2017 c27 
4RomedyGirl
Am a great of kingdra shipping but there are very less fics about them. And though, am a poke fangirl but few days ago browsed for some kingdra stories since I was in a lance-y mode... and guess what? yes you guessed it. I found your story and absolutely loved it. Pls update or do a sequel...
4RomedyGirlAm a great of kingdra shipping but there are very less fics about them. And though, am a poke fangirl but few days ago browsed for some kingdra stories since I was in a lance-y mode... and guess what? yes you guessed it. I found your story and absolutely loved it. Pls update or do a sequel...
9/13/2017 c27 Harmony4ever
Wonderful story so far.. Although I am a fan of Ash/Misty, this pairing is becoming a close second. And what to say about Lance... He is just so mysterious and strong in the anime.. kinda superhero.. And I love the way you have potrayed him, making him like a normal person. Anyway please keep writing.
Wonderful story so far.. Although I am a fan of Ash/Misty, this pairing is becoming a close second. And what to say about Lance... He is just so mysterious and strong in the anime.. kinda superhero.. And I love the way you have potrayed him, making him like a normal person. Anyway please keep writing.
8/10/2017 c1 9Kirash
This story is so magnificent that I have read the 27 chapters in one day! (Even while I was working hahaha*feel like a ninja*) Of all the stories I have read of Lance, this is my favorite. You really are an excellent writer and I congratulate you!
I loved the Slowpoke from the chapter of the storm hahaha, it was very funny and adorable.
I hope you can continue it! I would love to continue reading it!
Greetings and success!
(sorry, my english isnt good -)
9KirashThis story is so magnificent that I have read the 27 chapters in one day! (Even while I was working hahaha*feel like a ninja*) Of all the stories I have read of Lance, this is my favorite. You really are an excellent writer and I congratulate you!
I loved the Slowpoke from the chapter of the storm hahaha, it was very funny and adorable.
I hope you can continue it! I would love to continue reading it!
Greetings and success!
(sorry, my english isnt good -)
1/30/2017 c27 20funstt
Hey again! Sorry i've been awol. I read this one when you posted it but haven't gotten around to saying it was a great chapter! I wish more people would get on this shipping haha. I've got a few other ideas for these too but I have two Dawn & Paul stories going and an upcoming Harry Potter story with Ron & Pansy as the pairing which I want to post once its closer to completion so have been a little tied up. Plus you know, actual life. Anyway really love what's happening on the island! Cant wait for more intimate moments haha I love when they get awkward. Very amusing. Anyway I've rambled enough, looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for writing, as always.
20funsttHey again! Sorry i've been awol. I read this one when you posted it but haven't gotten around to saying it was a great chapter! I wish more people would get on this shipping haha. I've got a few other ideas for these too but I have two Dawn & Paul stories going and an upcoming Harry Potter story with Ron & Pansy as the pairing which I want to post once its closer to completion so have been a little tied up. Plus you know, actual life. Anyway really love what's happening on the island! Cant wait for more intimate moments haha I love when they get awkward. Very amusing. Anyway I've rambled enough, looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for writing, as always.
1/15/2017 c27 Macabrecabra
... Dang you for dragging me into this rare pair hell. This fic is so, so good and really has me invested in how these two grow as a pair! You are keeping me on the edge of my seat with this you wonderful author you!
Making ME want to write more for this pairing. I can't wait for more!
... Dang you for dragging me into this rare pair hell. This fic is so, so good and really has me invested in how these two grow as a pair! You are keeping me on the edge of my seat with this you wonderful author you!
Making ME want to write more for this pairing. I can't wait for more!
1/7/2017 c27 IAmUmbreon
*gets down on knees and prays* Please, dear author, update! I can't stand waiting!
*gets down on knees and prays* Please, dear author, update! I can't stand waiting!
1/7/2017 c24 IAmUmbreon
Nooooooo! Oh well, it's your story... though I've always been more particular to WillXKaren... it's more fun... unfortunately for me, there isn't a lot of those... but I looked at your profile and you have one! (Sort of... it's implied...) anyways, Kingdrashipping ROCKS! I totally understand going fangirl too, I do that with Will and Clemont, they're my two favorite characters.
- Mistwolf (AKA IAmUmbreon)
Nooooooo! Oh well, it's your story... though I've always been more particular to WillXKaren... it's more fun... unfortunately for me, there isn't a lot of those... but I looked at your profile and you have one! (Sort of... it's implied...) anyways, Kingdrashipping ROCKS! I totally understand going fangirl too, I do that with Will and Clemont, they're my two favorite characters.
- Mistwolf (AKA IAmUmbreon)
12/28/2016 c27 22ameriboo
SOOOOOOOOOOO HAPPY TO SEE THE UPDATE! i love all the wild pokemon they are bonding with i hope they find their babies eventually though if not i would be so devastated. great work as always! im so happy that lance x misty is catching so much attention! xoxo
22ameribooSOOOOOOOOOOO HAPPY TO SEE THE UPDATE! i love all the wild pokemon they are bonding with i hope they find their babies eventually though if not i would be so devastated. great work as always! im so happy that lance x misty is catching so much attention! xoxo
12/26/2016 c27 20twilightwrites
Well, so much for a peaceful reprieve from the drama...
And I'm guessing that yell was Lance?
Keep writing!
Twilightwrites
20twilightwritesWell, so much for a peaceful reprieve from the drama...
And I'm guessing that yell was Lance?
Keep writing!
Twilightwrites
9/26/2016 c26 6Articallie
I'm really enjoying this story! They are just so cute together! And little Growlithe! eeep! I adore Growlithe!
6ArticallieI'm really enjoying this story! They are just so cute together! And little Growlithe! eeep! I adore Growlithe!
6/9/2016 c1 Guest
Update please
Update please
6/1/2016 c26 20funstt
youve really got me hooked! I have to say, I'm isually very set on misty and ash together but I really like Lance as a character and wanted to read some stories with him in it. While I'm still a little bias in the scenes with Ash I also kind of find myself wanting them to be friends only in this story! Very new for me but super fun and exciting! I love that the connection is developing at a steady pace, obviously there's going to be attraction and stuff but I think the character development has matured really well as the story progresses. Definitely looking forward to your next update! Thanks for writing!
20funsttyouve really got me hooked! I have to say, I'm isually very set on misty and ash together but I really like Lance as a character and wanted to read some stories with him in it. While I'm still a little bias in the scenes with Ash I also kind of find myself wanting them to be friends only in this story! Very new for me but super fun and exciting! I love that the connection is developing at a steady pace, obviously there's going to be attraction and stuff but I think the character development has matured really well as the story progresses. Definitely looking forward to your next update! Thanks for writing!