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4/15/2012 c1 1thimbles
Very sweet.

I definitely want to read more.

Shell x
4/15/2012 c1 14TallulahBelle
I'm so glad that you are taking the time to learn to write! Every little bit is important and helps you grow.

I do love a little sweetness in my diet, and this brought a BIG smile to my face. Especially these lines:

"This is becoming a complete circle. I am surrounded by all the people that I love."

"Little does he know is that there is something growing inside of me."

It's moment like these that are essential.

Congratulations and keep up the good work!

xoxo TB
4/15/2012 c1 9MeilleurCafe
This is so lovely! It's heartfelt and sweet, and it makes me want to know your Bella and her and Edward. I'm already curious about what their life will be like together. I have a feeling that Bella is right and Edward will be a wonderful father, and you haven't even introduced us to him yet. But you write Bella's thoughts in such a way that you let us see something of him, too.

Please continue! I know you have more of this story in you. And you write well; it will get even better as you go on.

4/15/2012 c1 33mskathy
AHHH SQUEE. I absolutely loved the floaty love feeling in this piece. :)
4/15/2012 c1 23Alby Mangroves
Pfft! I'm leaving reviews whether you like it or not.

I really, REALLY liked this: "He didn't become everything to me. He balanced me."

How wonderful that a woman isn't defined by the man she loves. You're awesome xA
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