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7/30/2019 c1 Sunshinegirl22
This story is awesome! I totally fell in love with those two... Please continue with them!
9/22/2012 c15 aradiaeva
Really great fic. I loved your way of getting Jenn and Evan together before meeting in Atlantis. Loved Jenn's ripping up of the divorce papers.
7/7/2012 c15 61ShaViva
I liked your 'day in the life' - it was good to see them appreciate the value in what they have together and I liked that Lorne came to realise the best thing was having Jenn safe with him. Loved this story - thank you so much for writing it!
7/7/2012 c14 ShaViva
Loved the reunion - you did so well with this. It was amusing that their meeting was so public but their true connection a secret. Loved the cryptic conversation with Lorne and John. And of course the ending scene was great - well done you!
7/7/2012 c13 ShaViva
Oh, how mean having them just miss each other at the SGC! LOL ... Lorne coming home was well done - I like Saul more and more ... and I like how Evan reacts knowing he's in trouble with his Mom :)
7/7/2012 c12 ShaViva
I liked how you had Evan's Mom show her that what looks like a hasty marriage decision really wasn't, that it's possible to make life altering decisions quickly and still have them be the right decisions. Such a sad ending, made more so because we know Jennifer won't be there when he gets home.
7/7/2012 c11 ShaViva
I really liked this chapter - Evan's sister snooping was amusing, and getting caught by Saul even more so. Jennifer's reaction made sense too, poor her! And the insistence that she go to thanksgiving dinner was well done :) I also liked the beginning where we find out Jenn is going to Atlantis - this was such a good idea for how to rewrite but still stick to the basic storyline.
7/7/2012 c10 ShaViva
Such a frustrating time for both of them - easy to see how the doubts would kick in. And trust Lorne to 'do the honourabe thing' ... even if I didn't already know how this ends I can see that Jenn would not take this without a fight! Good chapter :)
7/7/2012 c9 ShaViva
Aww, poor Lorne having to go away so soon. Jenn was a trooper in her reaction ... love the 'yes, and less talking' line - sounds just like Lorne!
5/27/2012 c15 Silverlea
Loved it!
4/29/2012 c15 7nolechic512
Great story hands down. Loved the ending. You should do a sequal for Saul and Jamie! Maybe like a holiday tic where Evan and Jennifer can come home or something. Anyway, keep up the good work.
4/29/2012 c15 doopahdoo
I loved this story, very well done. But I was kinda disappointed with this ending. I really wanted to see Evan introducing Jen as his wife and a bit of the interactions with the rest of Atlantis. Then as an epilogue the two of them back on earth with his family for christmas (mostly to see one more saul/jamie interaction). Oh well, I'll just have to dream those up myself.

Overall I really enjoyed the story. Thanks.
4/29/2012 c15 d
Lovely story but it needs a sequel for sure!
4/29/2012 c15 15daisyscrapper
Great epilogue- it was very nice to see them in a regular day on Atlantis- you didn't end it by wrapping it up in a pretty bow, which is realistic- in both real life and on the show. There will be hard times, in their work life and relationship- being where they are.

Thank you for writing this story. I truly enjoyed it. If you need ideas of what to write next, I'd LOVE for you to do a 3 or 4 chapter update to this story on Saul and Lorne's sister! It'd probably be easy to write, since you wouldn't have to remind yourself to stay in character. You'd be free to do whatever you wish to the characters.
4/29/2012 c14 daisyscrapper
Bringing Jennifer into his world right under his nose was priceless. I loved it!

Having her say she'd fight the divorce was touching- thankfully, she didn't have to ;)

I would've been patient enough if you would've broke this part of the story into a few chapters, but others disagreed and were too anxious to get them back together. I like messing with the characters and drawing stuff out, but in the end, you did it all beautifully. I just loved this story and am sad for it to end :) :) :)
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