for Innocent Mage5/12/2013 c2 Guest
What! Am I the only recent reviewer.-Same guest from 5/12/13. Please update and continue I love this story and it pains my heart that there is so little reviews and the fact you haven't updated in a loooonnng time. Please don't discontinue the story! update, Update, UPDATE NOW!
What! Am I the only recent reviewer.-Same guest from 5/12/13. Please update and continue I love this story and it pains my heart that there is so little reviews and the fact you haven't updated in a loooonnng time. Please don't discontinue the story! update, Update, UPDATE NOW!
5/12/2013 c2 Guest
What an amazing story so far! I love the fact that a whole lot of things were accomplished in just 2 chapters. Keep it up you're a great writer and I love this fanfic already. I'm literally loving and enjoying every minute reading this story. Also I am a hooked fan already! -Gosh I am a huge fan of your choice of pairings you really made my day! Nalu is my MOST favorite pairing [I think Natsu and Lucy were made for each other...people shouldn't split them apart] You already made some Nalu references like Natsu defending Lucy since she is his most precious person [hehh like a dragon protecting his...“mate”] Oooh Way to go Natsu protect Lucy with your life! Yeah. Anyways I hope there's more action to come with the GMG games I hope all the excorcists will be shocked to see the Fairy Tail mages' magic! Cause magic does exist it d.-gray man wants to believe it or not. I hope Fairy Tail gives d.-gray man a good run for their money cause I seriously DON'T [Emphasis on the DO NOT] want Fairy Tail to lose please I hope Fairy Tail wins the entire thing. But d.-gray man can have some of their moments of glory in the competition...Sorry I'm more of a big fan for Fairy Tail than d.-gray man please don't hate me :p But I still prefer Fairy Tail to win [Cause Fairy Tail RULES...Friendship of their nakama can overcome ANY obstacle!] To conclude though you are an extremely talented writer, PLEASE I beg you don't give up! -says in the most serious tone there is. I am really hooked! It would break my heart if you discontinue. Even if it is only 2 chapters I love it already. Please continue the story I'm left hanging! With that out PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
What an amazing story so far! I love the fact that a whole lot of things were accomplished in just 2 chapters. Keep it up you're a great writer and I love this fanfic already. I'm literally loving and enjoying every minute reading this story. Also I am a hooked fan already! -Gosh I am a huge fan of your choice of pairings you really made my day! Nalu is my MOST favorite pairing [I think Natsu and Lucy were made for each other...people shouldn't split them apart] You already made some Nalu references like Natsu defending Lucy since she is his most precious person [hehh like a dragon protecting his...“mate”] Oooh Way to go Natsu protect Lucy with your life! Yeah. Anyways I hope there's more action to come with the GMG games I hope all the excorcists will be shocked to see the Fairy Tail mages' magic! Cause magic does exist it d.-gray man wants to believe it or not. I hope Fairy Tail gives d.-gray man a good run for their money cause I seriously DON'T [Emphasis on the DO NOT] want Fairy Tail to lose please I hope Fairy Tail wins the entire thing. But d.-gray man can have some of their moments of glory in the competition...Sorry I'm more of a big fan for Fairy Tail than d.-gray man please don't hate me :p But I still prefer Fairy Tail to win [Cause Fairy Tail RULES...Friendship of their nakama can overcome ANY obstacle!] To conclude though you are an extremely talented writer, PLEASE I beg you don't give up! -says in the most serious tone there is. I am really hooked! It would break my heart if you discontinue. Even if it is only 2 chapters I love it already. Please continue the story I'm left hanging! With that out PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
11/27/2012 c2 Guest
cool keep it up!
cool keep it up!
9/26/2012 c1 FairyLuver20
I Love The Story!Please Update soon *puppy-dog-eyes*...besides I want to know how the Grand Magic Games will work out :).
I Love The Story!Please Update soon *puppy-dog-eyes*...besides I want to know how the Grand Magic Games will work out :).
5/28/2012 c2 
2TerkoiZ
Nice but please space out your paragraphs, It makes the story much more appealing and thought out looking. Evenmore so when readers lose their place and can't find it or lost their place because it's all so close... What will you do if you make a 10,000 word chapter like this? We would be at a loss. What if my page refreashed while reading it? I'd be annoyed I may even close the story out. Just saying, spacing is good. Over all I like the story, throw in some akuma or somthing. :P
2TerkoiZNice but please space out your paragraphs, It makes the story much more appealing and thought out looking. Evenmore so when readers lose their place and can't find it or lost their place because it's all so close... What will you do if you make a 10,000 word chapter like this? We would be at a loss. What if my page refreashed while reading it? I'd be annoyed I may even close the story out. Just saying, spacing is good. Over all I like the story, throw in some akuma or somthing. :P