12/24/2020 c1 Terry Roberson
Too cute!
Too cute!
5/7/2014 c1 Guest
Disappointment and waste of time, delete it or uplode
Disappointment and waste of time, delete it or uplode
11/13/2012 c1 HalfBloodPrincess71
Loved it! I've never thought about the Hermione/Bill pairing but it's pretty good! :) xxx
Loved it! I've never thought about the Hermione/Bill pairing but it's pretty good! :) xxx
7/4/2012 c1 Guest
I love it.. and now I'm going to read the long one of kiss the cook... maybe I should get me an apron like that. Lol
I love it.. and now I'm going to read the long one of kiss the cook... maybe I should get me an apron like that. Lol
5/16/2012 c1 Fremione-lover16
Bacon I the food sent from the gods,it's amazing...I'd do anything do bacon bahaha. I loved this fic! Bill and hermione are so cute,idc what other people say. :p
-genia. :)
Bacon I the food sent from the gods,it's amazing...I'd do anything do bacon bahaha. I loved this fic! Bill and hermione are so cute,idc what other people say. :p
-genia. :)
4/29/2012 c1 11Echo Vanity
It was cute. But there were wayyy too many spelling and grammar mistakes for my liking. I know you warned us about it in the summarry, but that's really no excuse. We all make mistakes,and that's forgiveable but the amount in this fic just made you look lazy. If you fixed them up it'd be quite a good fic.
It was cute. But there were wayyy too many spelling and grammar mistakes for my liking. I know you warned us about it in the summarry, but that's really no excuse. We all make mistakes,and that's forgiveable but the amount in this fic just made you look lazy. If you fixed them up it'd be quite a good fic.
4/22/2012 c1 Margarita Drink
Um, like I already said, I love this! The only thing is you didn't capatalize when you should have and only a little bit of words were spelled wrong. But that's about it so continue with more amazing writing!
Um, like I already said, I love this! The only thing is you didn't capatalize when you should have and only a little bit of words were spelled wrong. But that's about it so continue with more amazing writing!
4/18/2012 c1 19r.a.b. shoulda lived
Cute story. I dig the details, i despise detail-less stories. Excellent capture of characters, despite the slight ooc-ness of Hermione, which you warned us about in the AN
Cute story. I dig the details, i despise detail-less stories. Excellent capture of characters, despite the slight ooc-ness of Hermione, which you warned us about in the AN
4/18/2012 c1 K
So cute! I must admit I would love to see this continued and follow them playfully into a long term relationship
So cute! I must admit I would love to see this continued and follow them playfully into a long term relationship