for Frozen in Pairs4/22/2012 c2 Pat-975
I really like your story so far but... wouldn't it be better if the chapters were loonger?
Update soon please :D
I really like your story so far but... wouldn't it be better if the chapters were loonger?
Update soon please :D
4/22/2012 c2 Ytigjfhg
Good so fiar
Good so fiar
4/19/2012 c1 
5bookluver115
oh im interested but to make the story clearer to non adventure time luvers (such as myself) punctuation is needed and very mush so spell check i can help u with that How bout this u write i edit and then u read it and if u like u post neway im curious to see how this turns out
Lolzeka
5bookluver115oh im interested but to make the story clearer to non adventure time luvers (such as myself) punctuation is needed and very mush so spell check i can help u with that How bout this u write i edit and then u read it and if u like u post neway im curious to see how this turns out
Lolzeka
4/18/2012 c1 Energy Enigma
I have to say the plot is good but in any story it annoys the shit out of me when people spell as badly as you did, you need a dictionary.
I have to say the plot is good but in any story it annoys the shit out of me when people spell as badly as you did, you need a dictionary.